#2 AsYaFF ~ The 1st of April [Ch14-36 UndrCons] *Updt 10/1/21FFSection - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it..
I want few a ad scenes in next update..

Pls


Ad scenes? 😲 what is that?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for the late comment baby ...padh to raat ko hi liya tha and then i slept 😔
Loved it baby ❤️
These 7 days literally changed their perspective of marriage ...
n just like sanjay i too was laughing at the end ...
plz update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful update👏
very well written👍🏼
loved all the asad zoya scenes😳
continue soon 😳
thanks buddy for pm😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks fr the pm dr nd thank u so much fr this lenghty bt amazng update...
i just LUVD LUV the update so so much...fantabulous !!
no perfct wrds to describe...first of all its full of ASYA nd then its such a SWEET cute update...i fell hard fr this story more nw !!
i really really luv the one where asad admire zoya nd her frnd luv to see tat,...so much of unfrgtable scenes !!
waitng very much eager fr the nxt update !!
update soonish dr !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Like button not working. :(
Zoya is adorb
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Zoya left the party bc her friends behaviour. Liked the way she came to him & later they joined the party again. Their day to day activities was good. Final moments of their married life was nice. Now back to present where Sanjay uncle was laughing. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Well first i was disappointed on seeing only one chapter updated
But on reading it and seeing the huge length was so happy
No complaints :)
Awesome chapter
Can't wait for the present life now
So excited to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
The title just dragged me to read this :-P
my valentine day is just going so smooth with this nice story on ;)
can you pm me the next time you update :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice
So the story telling is over fb done
A marriage arrange a project
2 people who fight everyday enter this union
They learn to live coexist in the same enviroment
They did things for each other they share care and became friends
Love the the painting
Glad he made some friends with hers
If she didnt blasted them they wouldnt have welcome him
Now looking forward for the present life when sanjay done laughing
Cont
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally finally I finished reading all the parts and yay it was a long update...BUT BUT it could have been more longer😉😆
I'm sorry many pending reviews for previous parts..
So I thought today I will post here directly rather than in p t coz then I don't end up posting here.

And yes u r and over mature child..
And look who talks about not liking over mature children🤣

Ok coming to the update I looovvveeeddd looovvved absolutely loved the update and this entire flashback sequence..
I don't know who felt this was dragging but I wanted it to go on and on.
I liked the change in Asad.
And yes he has fallen for her it quite evident..

I want to give you a big applause for attempting such a concept and doing it so brilliantly 👏

I understand it must have been difficult to write on this..

I really liked how Zoya stood for Asad against her friends even.
That was really nice how she looked out for him the entire evening.
Thank you once again for giving us the beautiful experience,

And I'm looking forward to some teasing from Sanjay 😆
With this I also know the serious part of the story is back.

So let's get back into action.

One more thing.
What happened about the contest u had for finding the mistakes?

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