Hope everything is fine by your side...😊
[at your side hoga Don Sir!😃 ]
Atlast I am here to comment for this update...joh maine samjho 3 din pehle hee padha hai...😆
[I was waiting for your comment coz you read less but dissect it more 😆 which i LIKE😃]
[Hi SRK! Please give me Abram. 😛 I'll eat him😳 ]
Sooo bina samay vyarth kiye hum seedhe apne vichar prastut karte hai...😳
[itni shudhya hindi?😲]
Jab maine first paragraph ka last word padha tha na " PAINT HER " saachi bol raha hun meko " FITOOOR " movie yaad aagayi...😕😆 , but Asad paint karta hai yeh meko yaad nahi ki usne yaa Aapne pehle bhi kahin mention kiya hai...yaa main kuch bhool gaya 😕..
[Nope Don Sir ji your memory is sharp 😆 it is a detail which past has to reveal about Asad. 😊
Maine Fitoor nahi dekhi 😭 Itni achi story se inspired hai sadly itne ACCHE actors liye hai ki kya bataye 🤢 😆 ]
Yeh EXTRA PIPING GARAM CHAI STEAMING HOT...aise kaun bolta hai bhala pehle yeh batao...matlab definition ke naam pe kuch bhi banalogey...and yes white shirt pe denim blue jeans aachi lagti na...shayad SHOW mein bhi HOLI EPI pe usne wahi pehna tha...
[Aisa bus Zoya karti hai 😆🤣 Yes yes yes I love that White shirt of his with a black strip on the collar one reference 2nd BNHH]
" KAUN MARR RAHA HAI " I can imagine you screaming this if somebody is forcing you to wake up...😆
[Is it? 😆 I say the F word though 😆 🤣
Breakfast in Bed wala concept yahan sahi jama...a good treat to start this exciting day...
[Isnt it? Even I liked to place it here. Though again the Guy did more for the Girl.. yet again there is scope to improve😛]
One thing i have noticed in this update...ASYA even though don't share a very great equation , phir bhi they are caring and attentive towards eachother...
[THAT IS WHY I SAY YOU DISSECT,😳😳 Thank you, I wanted to know how my readers perceived the entire thing. Love scenes are easy comparatively to write when the leads unconsciously or consciously love each other but being hostile unknown and with just friendship yet to properly bloom between them Yet being attentive and caring.. and still maintaining that distance which they have between them was difficult... very difficult. Good that you understood and appreciated my efforts 😆 'Not denying the fact that I am not appreciated for the hard work that I put in this.. but the fact remains that it was hard to maintain that imaginary glass which exists around them... very hard. Efforts paid off. Don Sir ko ek baar mein hi samj agaya!😳]
Rest that room cleaning part...again I can imagine your mother doing it after waking you up...{ I have made a grammatical mistake i guess }
(NAAH! All correct here 😊)
But yes the whole part after this how Asad took her too that pup shop , and then he took her too the movie { TAJ MAHAL Kaunsi Ajay devgn wali ? } and the dinner it was perfect like picture perfect for two crazy , emotionally diversed Couple...and I loved reading this part...👏👏😃
(AD ne Taj Mahal ki hai? Its Arbaaz khan ka waise.. keeping the decade in mind 😆 Emotionally diverse waah Thank you😆)
Asad ko yeh Fox ko as a pet rakhne ka crazy idea tabhi hee se tha matlab..but my question is can we really pet them ???
(Yes you can. But you cant leave them in the wild as they are domesticated and home bred.. You can Google Juniper the fox.. celeb fox hai 😆)
Rest end tak aacha hee tha...matlab itna sab aacha karke last mein they they don't see each other as married couple in real...matlab khair abhi woh emotions bhi nahi haina...
(That was the point... if you dont accept apne pure dil se ki I am married.. this person is mine.. I love this person or after one point of time will love this person.. even vowing I Do or saying Qubool Hai or taking 7 rounds around the pious fire cannot make you be married.. They are trying because they have too for the project.. just like people who are forced to live together as they are married by the social norms.. but they are not married in the real sense.. there is no acceptance from their side.. because here both dont consider in its truest form.. one lives in the illusion of love and the other detests love. 😆)
I have really enjoyed reading this part Ankie...more than the last one...
(Last part is my favourite this one is my second favourite 😳)
Soo do update real sooonishh...but jaise aapko time miley...
(Parso ko)
Take Care...😃
Chalo Hum Phir Miltey Hain...
@Behena! Dekho na Don Sir mujhe marne aarahe hai 😭😭😭
