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Posted: 8 years ago
This is getting interesting!
Zoya is really a surprise package!
Loving this..
continue soon..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
First of all thanks for the mention
Interesting part
Like asad said Zoya is a surprise package
Asad getting shock after shock through out the part
Campus scene was superb nd Zoya bravely handle the situation
I personally like love after friendship 😳 .
And continue soon
😃
Edited by LuvurselF - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome update...

how you like it to be...


thanks for the pm..





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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome amazing update...
LUV this zoya...really really fantabulous
LUVD the whole update
nd i prefer 1.LOVE AFTER FRNDSHIP
CZ this zoya is ,...just ..so awesome nd i really admire her like asad...
nd i really dnt want zoya to be broken when she 'll knw abt asad's mem loss, so if luv comes first ...i feel it 'll be perfect !!!!
waiting very much eager fr the nxt update...update soonish !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
I will comment tomorrow as I had medicines and feel sleepy.


A suggestion: Edit your title witj Part no., Page no. and Date whenever you write new part as not everyone who reads your story gets your PM. Everyone should know that you have updated your story😊.



Minahil is your name na?
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I will comment tomorrow as I had medicines and feel sleepy.


A suggestion: Edit your title witj Part no., Page no. and Date whenever you write new part as not everyone who reads your story gets your PM. Everyone should know that you have updated your story😊.



Minahil is your name na?


Thanks for the suggestion.
Yup my name is Minahil.
😊
But everyone calls me MAINA.
Hope that you are fine?
Edited by MH2002 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely part 😊
loved everything
loved the way zoya handle the situation
interesting precap
thanks buddy for pm
update sooon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Zoya is a firecracker
Asad.is totally surprised by her and cant help admiring her
He definitely has a lot of Z in his life
He wonders if something is missing and is zoya zoe
Love how professional zoya was with asad
I would prefer love then friendship as they r friends his is supressed and hers is still there waitinf to come forth
Love them with their dogs asad.was shocked at the dogs reaction to her
Precap zoya learns the truth oh boy
Waiting for more
Cont

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello everyone.
Thanks to all of those who complimented and liked my work.
Sorry I can't reply to your comments because I am sooo soo serious wala busy nowadays.
I have decided to go with both LOVE AFTER FRIENDSHIP and FRIENDSHIP AFTER FRIENDSHIP.
Because the votes were equal.
So to know the whole story keep reading, liking (if you like it genuinely) and commenting.
So here it is Part 7.
Hope that you all will enjoy.
HAPPY READING.

ASYA FF:
"MOHABBAT ZINDAGI HAI"
Banner Credits to Immortal Love.
Chapter #7

As soon Najma, Humeira and Zoya entered the house. Zoya was holding Humeira's hand tightly. "Najma take Humeira to her room." said Zoya politely but not looking at anyone. Humeira was not leaving and tears were spilling out of her eyes thinking that Zoya is angry with her as she didn't talked to her while coming to home and even now she is not talking to her. "Aapi look at .." Before Humeira could continue Zoya interrupted "Najma I said TAKE. HER. TO. HER. ROOM." She punctuated each word while looking out side not even glancing at them once.

"Helen go and call Ammi." said Zoya to helen who was standing near Humeira giving her a glass of water. This is what Asad saw when he entered the house. In sometime Razia, Gaffur, Rashid and Dilshad also entered the hall along with Ayaan. Everyone knew what happened in the college. Zoya came and standed in front of Asad without looking at him she coldly said "Why did you broke your promise?" Asad looked confused and looked at others. Ayaan tried to interrupt but Zoya stopped him by showing her hand to him and without having any eye contact with him or anyone said "No one will dare to interrupt today." She asked Asad the same question again. But Asad remained silent not knowing about which promise is she talking. Zoya asked again at which Asad replied "Which promise??" Everyone palmed their foreheads as they knew that it is over.

Now Zoya have to face the truth but Zoya's reply shocked them. Zoya calmly replied " I promise you ZOE that I will protect and treat Humeira like my own sister. She will be protected by your Asad she will never feel your absence. After all we both are one. This promise remember which you gave to your ZOE??" Asad stood their not replying her.

After that Zoya took deep breath and went towards Razia and asked (she was not looking at anyone) "Why there was not even a single bodyguard with Humeira?"

"Zoya..."

"Just answer not any explanation." She was still not looking anyone.

"Zoya she was not ready to take them. She always says that she is not a child that she cannot take care of herself."

"She said and you agreed? WOW!! Wonderful." Zoya said sarcastically. Only Helen knew about the worst of Zoya. She has seen it once and she was praying that Zoya don't gets angry. "I know why mam is not lifting her eyes because if anyone saw her eyes he or she will definitely die." Helen muttered to herself. Only Asad was able to hear her as she was standing just a bit far from him. He looked at Zoya and saw that she was in actual not lifting her eyes.

Next Zoya moved towards Gaffur and stood in front of him and said " I never asked you anything in my life. Well it would be much better if I say from 17 years I never asked you anything. I only asked you one thing that was to protect Humeira. I told you if anything, ANYTHING will hurt her I will kill that person even if that person is my so called biological father. I told you that I will kill that every single fly even which will hurt my FAMILY. I trusted with only one thing that may be, MAYBE you can keep her protected. But no you again broke my trust. You know it very well that other than Humi I have no one. NO ONE. Than how can you be so careless about her security. HOW COULD YOU??" Her voice was increasing with every sentence. At last she shouted.

"Zoya it is not a big matter. You are over reacting." Ayaan said. "It is not a big matter. I am over reacting. Right. DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT WOULD HAVE HAPPENED IF I WOULD HAVE NOT REACHED THERE ON TIME?? THOSE BLOODY S**TS WOULD HAVE KIDNAPPED HER?? DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW MUCH IT PAINS WHEN YOU LOSE YOUR SIBLING?? YOU DON'T BUT I FEEL. I FELT THAT PAIN AN HOUR AGO. AND YOU THE GREAT ASAD AHMED KHAN WHY DID YOU BROKE YOUR PROMISE?? YOU KNOW IT NAA HOW MUCH HUMI MEANS TO ME?? YOU PROMISED ME. HOW THE HELL YOU CAN BREAK YOUR PROMISE." She said pointing Asad. She broke the glass which Helen forwarded.

Zoya's hand were bleeding. Humeira was crying badly. "Zoya why are you creating drama for such a small thing??" Razia said.

"CHOTI SI BAAT!!! AMMI AP KO IDEA BHI HAI WOH KON LOG THAI. DO YOU EVEN KNOW??" Zoya shouted lifting her eyes which she did not wanted to show to anyone. Everyone was shocked. Her eyes were bloodshot red as if they were full of blood. Zoya went near Razia and shooked her hard and shouted "17 SAAL BAAD MERA PAST PHIR SAI MAIRE SAMNE AAGAYA HAI. JIN LOOGO NAI MERI KHUSHIYAAN TABAH KAR DALI WOH WAPIS AAGAYE HAI. THEY ARE BACK. AUR APP KEH RAHI HAI CHOTI SI BAAT. THE REASON I NEVER WANTED TO RETURN TO INDIA. THE REASON I AM ZOYA FAROOQI."

She saw Razia, Gaffur. Dilshad and Rashid shocked. "Zoya yeh sach nahi hai??" Dilshad said in tears and cracking voice. " THIS IS THE BLOODY TRUTH. YOU SAID IT IS A SMALL THING. JIS SACH KI WAJAH SAI AJTAK AJTAK MAI DUNIYA KAI SAAMNE MAI YEH NAHI BOL SAKTI KI MERI AIK FAMILY HAI. AP JANTI HAI KITNA DARD HUA IDHAR, (she said pointing towards her heart) IS DIL MAI JAB MUJH SAI US KAMINE NAI POOCHA THA THAT WHAT IS MY RELATION WITH HUMEIRA?? I WANTED TO SCREAM THAT SHE IS MY SISTER. BUT I COULD NOT. HELL I CANNOT EVEN SAY THAT SHE IS MY SISTER." Asad looked at her and got the answer of his question. He previously saw a sadness and pain in Zoya's eyes but he could not figure it out. But he got it now.

"AP KO PATA HAI AJ DATE KYA HAI?? IT IS 1 OF FEB. AP LOGO KO KYA LAGTA HAI MAI BHOOL JAAOGI KAI YEHI WOH MONTH HAI WHICH SNATCHED AWAY MY ALL HAPPINESS. " Zoya shouted. After a while Zoya said calmly " I can forget taking breath but not this date. I told you puphi that I don't want to return to India. They are back. They will snatch Humi. They will snatch her from me." That broke the barrier of Asad's patience. With in two long steps he reached and turned her around roughly.

"Will you just stop it?? Kab sai I am listening to your nonsense. Dare anyone touch Humeira I will break that person into more than crore pieces." Zoya scoffed roughly at Asad's reply.



"Zoya how do you know that they are the same??" Rashid asked after thinking a lot. " I saw that tattoo on that boy's hand who ran away. The tattoo which I want to forget for ever." As soon the word tattoo was heard by Asad he putted his right hand over his left shoulder and looked at Dilshad, who saw this act and nodded NO to him. "Aapi who are these people??" Humeira asked Zoya after composing herself.

This was Zoya's turn to be shocked. She looked at Razia and Dilshad who were looking everywhere but not at Zoya. "You You didn't told her??" Said Zoya in a shocked but anger filled voice. "We thought..." Razia tried to reply only to cut in between by Zoya. "We thought what?? Are you trying to hide the sin your husband committed?? OR DID YOU THOUGHT THAT ZOYA IS NOT HERE SO WHY SHOULD WE TELL HUMEIRA THE TRUTH. AMMI!!! HOW CAN YOU EVEN DO THAT??? SHE NEEDS TO NOW IT. IT IS HER RIGHT TO KNOW. Humi listen..." "Tumhe un dono ki kasam??" Razia said to hide the truth from Humeira because if the truth came out Asad can also get shock which will be not good for him. "Woh dono mar chuke hai." Came Zoya's voice which was not more than a whisper. Only Humeira and Asad were able to hear.

"Humeira hum dono ..." " Tumhe Asad ki kasam if you care for him the most than plz don't do that" Dilshad said. Asad looked at Zoya astonished. He never expected this. He saw Zoya looking at him and then closing her eyes. "I will not but let me tell you just to hide the fault of Mr. Gaffur you can't play with my sisters life. You will regret it." "Zoya you don't know the whole truth." "I don't want to listen anything regarding him. I know what I need to know that HE. IS. ONLY. RESPONSIBLE. FOR. THEIR. DEATH." With that Zoya moved out of the house. "Where are you going Zoya?" Asked Rashid.

"Somewhere where my shadow cannot even find me." Came reply of Helen. Everyone looked at her. Zoya was gone so she was unable to hear anything. "Once mam was soo angry same like this. When Sehar mam asked her she said the same." She said. Everyone moved towards their room after the drama except one person, ASAD. He stood rooted at the same point. "I promise you ZOE, How can you break your promise, You care for him the most" These words kept ringing in his mind. Suddenly he saw a blur image of a girl with him."I promise you ZOE that I will protect and treat Humeira like my own sister. She will be protected by your Asad she will never feel your absence. After all we both are one." said Asad to a girl. The girl in reply hugged him and said "I trust you the most Asad."

"That voice. This voice is so similar." Asad said. The words "I trust you the most Asad." kept ringing in Asad's mind. He was feeling a sudden pain in his head. He holded his head in pain. He looked around everything was becoming blur. The words were still ringing in his mind. He felt the world around himself spinning. He heard a scream of his name before he fell directly on the floor. Dilshad came to ask Asad for lunch but as she soon she saw Asad holding his head and was about to fall she screamed his name. But he fell on the floor before that. Hearing Dilshad's scream everyone came out. "Bhaijaan!!!!" Screamed AyRa and N2. Ayaan holded Asad and took him to his room. Humeira called doctor and asked him to come asap.

"I told you before also that he should not be stressed. You know very well that in these cases patients lose their mental balance if they are reminded of something which they forget. As you told me the past of Asad I will prefer you that let him stay away from his past. Only time and good care can heal him. Take care. He will regain consciousness in an hour or so. Bye." Ayaan dropped the doctor at the door and went in. "I don't know how will Zoya face truth. She is already so broken. And this month to which she already considers The month of unhappiness. Allah kya mai kya karo??" Said Razia. "You don't need to think that I am broken or not. I am brave enough to fight with everyone pain. Because for me life is not happiness it is pain for me. I knew it that he is not my Asad. By the look in his eyes I got it that something is wrong with him. I just came to say that don't wait for me tonight. I will not come. Take care. Bodyguards are here and they will be around all of you. No arguments on this." With that Zoya left.


Zoya was walking on the road lost in thoughts. She never thought that everything will be changed in just a matter of few hours. "Allah Miya I know there must be some sought of betterment in all this. But plzz don't test my patience. Help me to keep my promise. I don't want to cry. I will not cry." She said with determination. She was walking to the graveyard when she felt someone's presence. She turned around but saw no one. She went inside the graveyard. Not knowing danger lingering around her.



Precap:

Zoya missing for 1 week.
Zoya in hospital.

Hope you all liked. Plzz Comment and tell me how was it. And how I can improve it.





Edited by Silver_Shiver - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice..
But very confusing too..
Till now I thought zoya lost her sibling zain but now there is one more person in her life who is dead...plz reveal the mystery or give us clues...
So zoya knows something wrong with asad...
Precap is very scary...
Hope nothing happen to her..
Plz update soon

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