#2 - AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 28 - Page 130 - 31/01/18! A/N Pg 132! - Page 75

Originally posted by: Always_asya

But I never said that I don't like update. .again on the same point 😕 and you don't need to be sad yr uff I don't know how to make you understand my point of view

Originally posted by: anopama

really you live in canada 😊

which part.

waiting

9pm is gone for me and havent seen a single part😭

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

No No I got it, thats what I was tryna tell you. I got it in your second message and was relieved! Lol now tell me how much you loved AsYa!

haah ok ok
See my review on page no.111 and clear my confusion about few points 😆

Hey Daisy one thing
I think you have misplaced some names at the ending point so if you have time please correct it

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Daisy Daisy first of all a big huggies to you for such amazing update
I just can't describe how wonderful it was
Starting from zoya's nightmare ..it was so sad that the poor soul endured so much and her inability to share her grief with anyone is more pitiful
Though she shared with Asad some things but the big thing which is the most painful is still remained but hopefully as u said will be out in next update
But one thing I don't understand how come zeenat have no idea about her pain and sameer bcs if Faizen knew then she also must be aware of it
So here also Asad made a run from the situation
And cafe scene was super ...the way Zoya made her anger obvious to him by crashing the dishes was just amazing and at the end made fun of his ocd by cleaning her dirty hands on his white shirt was cherry on top
Their planning about the carnival and Malik's birthday party was also good
Love the orphanage scene too but the most funny thing about zoya telling pari about Asad being craycray 😆
I thought you would make the open mic scene long
Rogue part was beautiful
So now Zoya become friend with haveli girls and I guess she got a hint about Ayaan's feelings about Naina too
And now came carnival scene. .I really have no words to describe it. .I just LOVED every bit of it especially Asad being able to live his childhood with Zoya
But please don't made Azlan fall for zoya
Rashid part was boring as in show ..hope you don't feel sad again ..sorry in advance. .I know it's important to move the story so its okay
But the thing I loved about your story that you has not made the environment as sad as in show just showing about siddqis and crying dilshad but made it different by asya moments , their understanding and little flirtation between them
Love the way Zoya stand by Asad when he needed her
Ciff scene was emotional and little funny too
Oh poor Asad fired all his friends thanks to Ayaan miya
And his employees clients also refused to talk to him thanks to dilshaad
Poor thing came to cafe finally 😆
And again cafe scene was just amazing
Loved the zoya took care of him and understand him
She made himagree to fight in election
At home again she was with him when he needed her
And the climax of the part Asad's arrest was really hearttouching
Honestly saying I really hate Dilshad and azlan now
I mean I understand azlaz is selfish as usual but dilshaad urggh I just hate her..being a mother she made her son arrested knowing clearly about his fear about jail
It really changed my perception about her now
Is malik intentionally gone away due to this arrest thing?
I hope not
Hey btw how Naina know about zoya being ayaan's sister
I don't remember ayaan or zoya revealing the fact
Asad was beaten by Feroz mercilessly
He is right mmthis is the best punishment for Dilshad for betraying his son
But how can asad save zoya from sameer when he himself is in jail 😕
Now the next update makes me more exciting but I also know that it will take time
So please please please try to update soon

I will reply to the full comment after the weekend and hopefully not like today at 3:45 AM but Naina doesn't know that ZOYA is Ayaan's sister, she just knows Ayaan has a sister from when Aahil-Anaya's wedding was talking they found out Farooqui's have a sister but she doesn't know it's Zoya & Ayaan just casually told her that Asad is out of town with his sister (I don't really want to write 4 detailed love storys so I kinda skim over the details) but yah he told her but hasn't mentioned its Zoya. No Malik hasn't gone away because of the arrest, he doesn't know about it and as for Sameer you will have to wait and see how Asad saves her..in the next part. I will begin writing in the new year now and given how excited I am about this part it'll be kust as long and kickass! Update will be some time in Jan!!

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Hey Daisy one thing
I think you have misplaced some names at the ending point so if you have time please correct it

Sure, will fix it after the weekend!

Hello... Your update is amazing asusual..

Feeling soo bad for asad..

Hey daisy thnx for such an amazing update.as always beautifully written and each character and scene portrayed so well that it looks like m watching a movie...cafe scenes are awesome..asad arrest scene and emotions b/w asya was my favourite one. Thnx for the idea of dilshad betrayal wanna see asad giving hard time to all except zoya..cliff scene is good.orphanage scenes my favourite in all updates and ds one is top of my list.looking forward to sameer fiasco..eager to read as soon(ye selfish dil want an early update)..haveli ppl parts was boring but i understand its a need of story so i read more quickly when haveli scenes comes but enjoyed reading rest of the updates. Plz keep updating fast.hope u hav a great new year.

Can't wait for the next update... I know that Dilshad is going to feel rotten seeing how her son was beaten...and what about Zoya? I really hope Sameer gets found out soon...he freaks me out...

Asya moments were amazing in this update...but please Azlan to lower his gaze around Zoya!!! She is Asad's only!!

Update soon x