#2 - AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 28 - Page 130 - 31/01/18! A/N Pg 132! - Page 74

Originally posted by: Always_asya

True yr I am also waiting eagerly
I don't know how many times i have checked the update page

Originally posted by: anopama

lol

me too

I really feels like a stalker

Daisy knows how to torture us

and I am betting the update will be up when I am turning into bed.

Haha
True that's why she is doing the same
I think she will take at least two more hours to give us update 😆

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Guys i'm so sorry my damned internet stopped working so unfortunately the rest of the part will have to wait till tomorrow! It's completely ready and I promise it'll be up tomorrow in less than 24 hours so long as the internet is working again. Till then I trust and appreciate your patience and understanding!! Theres still a lot to happen! The best of asYa scenes, some of my fav are still coming up in this part so stay tuned!

I hope tomorrow we will get the remaining part and there will be something rather than boring Rashid part and all

Wow finally read the parts which are put up...

Originally posted by: Always_asya

I hope tomorrow we will get the remaining part and there will be something rather than boring Rashid part and all

Yaar seriously..this was 50 pages aur Rashids part toh just started before that it was Asya and you found it all boring? ab story bhi toh aage move honi chahiye naa...hope you find the remainder interesting

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Wow finally read the parts which are put up...

Really enjoyed reading what was up till now...

Loved Asad the most...

It was totally Asyaliscious..

Loved Asya at the orphanage...at the carnival.. their detective work...

Everything...

It between parts also were very good..

I can't recall Asad knowing about Aahil and Aisha?..

Does he? If not then how did he know?

A little dumb though was kajol zain standing next to Azlan and watching him since 5 mins staring at someone and they couldn't see Zoya like why and how?

Really waiting for the next parts to be up..

Don't know which was the first song Anaya and Asad sang... the whole part was very well written..

I had asked you to be a little different here and not Rashid part come up as murderer but sadly u had the same storyline.. I had expected u to go a little different in your story.

I hope the upcoming parts are not totally dedicated to that boring part after such a lovely start..

Please come up soon.

😆 they didn't see Zoya because there were hundreds of people on the dance foor with her it wasn't just her right..it was a carnival..Asad doesn't know much about Aahil and Aisha but he has a hint that they may be involved if you read the part at the hospital after Mangalpur..yaar in the beginning of the FF I mentioned that I would be following the QH story up to a certain point bcuz this is my take on many of the scenarios so the plot of my story the way I planned it, it has to be Rashid as the culprit..you'll see in the temainder of the parts..it leads unto the future story. Guysss, I'm sorry but the Haveli people have to be included in the story..they help move the story along it's not a conventional story so it can't be all AsYa and fun & games right? Trust me I don't enjoy writing about them either but it's important for the story so I hope you understand that...I know you guys will enjoy coming parts but still Haveli folks will be there, it's integral to the story so...enjoy lol!

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Yaar seriously..this was 50 pages aur Rashids part toh just started before that it was Asya and you found it all boring? ab story bhi toh aage move honi chahiye naa...hope you find the remainder interesting

Wait! Wait I never said that the given update was boring...I said Remaining part hopefully will not be boring as you kept the same story here so I thought the remaining part will be just Rashid being accused by Asad and Dilshad taking Rashid's side instead of her son like in show
How can I say Asya scenes boring when there was so much interesting things happened 😆 I hope your misunderstanding will be clear now

loved the update..really don't like Azlan but kya kare there shud be some bad and fickle characters in story to make it interesting. i loved all asya scenes too and felt really bad for Asad with Dilshad's betrayal. I was really hoping for Sameer expose but well i will anticipate it in the next chapter..keep up the good work. Happy New Year and May God Bless You.

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Wait! Wait I never said that the given update was boring...I said Remaining part hopefully will not be boring as you kept the same story here so I thought the remaining part will be just Rashid being accused by Asad and Dilshad taking Rashid's side instead of her son like in show
How can I say Asya scenes boring when there was so much interesting things happened 😆 I hope your misunderstanding will be clear now

Nahi yaar no misunderstanding I was just sad that you didn't like the update even when I worked hard to make it great for you! But good to know that you liked it! I know I too wanted to write so much other stuff but for story's purpose I had to write all this instead, but don't worry lots of great stuff coming up and you'll be happy to know iss part mein bui there was more Asya so I hope you enjoy it 😆

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Nahi yaar no misunderstanding I was just sad that you didn't like the update even when I worked hard to make it great for you! But good to know that you liked it! I know I too wanted to write so much other stuff but for story's purpose I had to write all this instead, but don't worry lots of great stuff coming up and you'll be happy to know iss part mein bui there was more Asya so I hope you enjoy it 😆

But I never said that I don't like update. .again on the same point 😕 and you don't need to be sad yr uff I don't know how to make you understand my point of view