#2 - AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 28 - Page 130 - 31/01/18! A/N Pg 132! - Page 5

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

2 WEEKS!!??!!

Two nahi three weeks maan k chalo Arpita warna agar two weeks k baad update na mila toh dil toot jayega isse accha hai yeh soch k chalo k Daisy will update after three weeks 😆

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Two nahi three weeks maan k chalo Arpita warna agar two weeks k baad update na mila toh dil toot jayega isse accha hai yeh soch k chalo k Daisy will update after three weeks 😆

You know me so well. 😆 😆 I say two weeks taake tum logon ko zyaada shock nahin lage but like you said it translates to 3 weeks 😉

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

You know me so well. 😆 😆 I say two weeks taake tum logon ko zyaada shock nahin lage but like you said it translates to 3 weeks 😉

Hahaa yes i know u well and u know me well too
if in two weeks we did not get update i promise to torture u so much that u will run away from ur own thread 😆

Hi Daisy!
First of all, congratulations on your new thread!
I'm so sorry I haven't been able to comment on the last couple of parts. What can I say...Life happened! But I read your updates and they obviously exceeded all my expectations.

Loved Part 17! The knight in shining Armani never disappoints 😛
The bit after he saves her and is watching her in the car is one of my favourites. There's something so intimate and tender about the moment. It gave me them feels!

The following Dilshad and Asad scene was also wonderful. I liked that you didn't show her ignoring and neglecting Asad like they did in the show. He needed his mom in that vulnerable state. I'm guessing Maha is Pari's mom and Azlan's former love interest.

Pari and Asad moments always melt my heart. I really want that cutie to be okay soon so that she, her father and her chachoo can breathe a sigh of relief. I have this absolutely cute picture of them in my head. Especially after the whole "there's no such thing as like" scene 😛
Asad is obviously enamoured by Chutki Di. I wonder whether his heart will be in conflict over Chutki Di, the blogger angel and Zoya till he realises they are all one and the same. I guess it's only fair considering that Zoya would be facing the same plight with S, Shawn and Asad.

Ayaan and Zoya ❤️
I really look forward to reading all Ayaan scenes nowadays. I think I love him ALMOST as much as Asad in this story. I'm sure the upcoming update will have a different side to him which I'm going to like all the same!

The cafe scenes were wow! Especially cause they lead to that little kiss at the end. SO well written.

Coming to Part 18, Anwar and Zeenats equations with Asad and Zoya always warm my heart. They're like that elderly but friendly force whom they really need. I love that Asad can laugh and smile when Anwars around and that Zoya can claim Zeenat as HERS. She's probably the only element in your story whom Zoya rightfully claims as hers.
It's amazing how your story shows two sides of the same coin. Where family turns your back on you and people who aren't really related to you by blood become your family. It reminds me of these lines:
Sometimes blood isn't thicker than water and family will cross you quicker than strangers. Family isn't always blood. It's the people in your life who want you in theirs; the ones who accept you for who you are. The ones who do anything to see you smile and who love you no matter what.

Azlan and Asad... OMG they broke and healed my heart all at the same time. Lovely scenes. The fight, the angst, the hug and the love. It was wow! Even the message Azlan sent later. Too cute!

Asad and Zoya were as amazing as ever 👏 It was fabulous!
You finally revealed S 😃😃
I feel like there's more to the Akram story. Especially cause he was mentioned in Asad's nightmarish past.

Waiting for the Ayaan and Asad showdown. Thank god Ayaan finally came to know of the wedding truth. The next update with Zoya and Ayaan will be power-packed, I'm sure!

Reading your updates are always such a delight. However I do feel that the chapters so far were still kind of introductory and you have major dhamakas planned for us ahead! Eagerly awaiting the rest of the story

-S

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Hahaa yes i know u well and u know me well too
if in two weeks we did not get update i promise to torture u so much that u will run away from ur own thread 😆

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Please do torture on my behalf too Daljeet..

I dont know when I will get back...

Don't worry Arpita i will accomplish my mission to torture Daisy with more concentration which i did in my exams 😉

Nooo

Hey happy new year

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Don't worry Arpita i will accomplish my mission to torture Daisy with more concentration which i did in my exams 😉

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I am with u in this torture...

Let's be partners in torture😆