*New* AsYa Drabble 'Diyar -e- Dill'

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Peeps !

Today I'm here with a drabble based on my current fav song 😃 and to make it special I wrote it for my Reema Darling ā¤ļø

hum writers apne friends aur readers ke liye hamesha likhte rehte hain but mene kabhi nahi dekha kabhi kisi ne banner maker ke liye kuch likha ho šŸ˜•

mazak nahi kar rahi, yeh sach hai

hamari stories ko banner se ek new look milta hai aur yeh sab banner maker ke hardwork ka nateeja hai... chalo jo kabhi nahi hua aaj hoga and I'm glad mene first step liya 😳

bohat bol liya mene, abhi official announcement time... Reema Darling this drabble is dedicated to you šŸ¤— šŸ¤— and i hope tumhe story bhi achi lage 😳

Thank you sooo much for making itne ache ache banners for me 😃 and yes Love you dhair sara ā¤ļø

abhi ek especial wala announcement šŸ˜‰ kal mere one and only BF ki shadi hai haan haan sahi suna mera BF aka Sara aka BelleAme aka Pinky is getting married aur pata hai kal Nikah hai 😃 so plzzz drop lots of wishes for her

P.S BF mene bol dia abhi jo karna hai kar lo, mai bhi macho GF hoon 😳 šŸ˜‰

Now scroll down for the drabble

Ashii...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A/N... The story starts from 10 days challenge... There is NO Tanveer in this story... Ghafoor believes that his first wife Zainab and his daughter Zoya died in a car accident... He supported Rashid and Shireen's wedding but has nothing against Asad and his family... So, Asad hates his father like always and Ghafoor is neither his rival nor his friend...



Thank you so much Mirnalini for this lovely banner šŸ¤—
Asad and Zoya said Qubool Hai' and entered in the sacred bond of marriage. It was an arranged kum forced marriage but with the turn of events it turned into a love marriage. Asad and Zoya had realized their feelings for each other a night before the Nikah but had not confessed yet. If Asad was all set to confess then Zoya was not less, she too decided to spill the beans without feeling shy or any sort of such things.

Unfortunately, the journey of Asad and Zoya's happy moments came to an end when Ghafoor Siddiqui claimed his fatherly rights over Zoya. No doubt it was a shocking moment for everyone but when Zeenat Aapi confirmed, it turned out to be an emotional moment for Zoya and Ghafoor.

Zoya was happy for two reasons. First, she got married to the man she loved and secondly her mission was accomplished. She felt lucky and blessed to have her close ones at her wedding.

On the other hand, Asad was going through a mental war of emotions. No doubt he was happy for Zoya but he was little bit upset with the turn of events. Okay Ghafoor was not his rival but he was not his friend too. Zoya's father was among of those people who helped his so called father for ruining his mother's life. And Asad was in no mood to start a healthy relationship with the people of that house.

Asad was disappointed by Zoya's behavior too. The way she accepted her father with open arms, his thoughts drifted to their conversation from last night where she herself told him how her father left her mother. Was not his newly wedded wife was supposed to be angry?

When Zoya met her father, she literally forgot each and every thing. The moment Asad left from there, she remembered the day when Dilshad had thrown 10 days challenge after hearing bad things from SM people and unluckily her father was among of those people and Asad's obvious reaction was enough to make her realize that she lost him.

Later, Zoya was sitting on the wedding bed waiting for Asad but it looked like her husband was in no mood to face her. Still she waited for him just because she wanted to ask him the reason behind his behavior. She knew the clash story between Khans and SM people but she didn't expect that Asad would act like this in front of everyone. Plus she wanted to confess her love too.

Asad came back and found Zoya sleeping in a sitting position. Was not this night supposed to be their wedding night? He too wanted to talk to her and tell her how much he loved her but he was in shocked state. First Ghafoor turned out her father and secondly, the Zoya with whom he had fallen in love was nowhere today. The Zoya who used to fight over silly things actually forgot to fight for her own rights. He left just because he was disappointed, or else he didn't have any objections with Ghafoor being her long last father.

Putting his thoughts aside, Asad made Zoya lie down on the bed comfortably and put duvet on her. He stood there for a moment and stared his beautiful wife. He cupped the side of her face and inched closer. He was about to place his lips on her forehead, when he pulled back and cursed himself for taking advantage of her.

Zoya woke up the moment Asad put quilt over her. First she felt his gaze on her and then his touch and hot breath was enough to set her on fire. She skipped a heartbeat as Asad moved in but when he pulled back she felt dejected. After a few minutes, she opened her eyes and found her dearest husband sleeping right next to her. Tears brimmed in her as her doubt of losing him turned out to be true.

The whole two weeks passed just like that and AsYa were still lost in their own thoughts. They were happily married couple for their family but inside the room they were strangers. If Asad was highly disappointed then Zoya was hurt.

The way Zoya accepted her father and started visiting him, was enough to make him feel left out. Her actions proved that she married to him just because of his mother or else she didn't have any feelings for him. While, Asad's silence was killing her from inside, she started accepting the truth being Ghafoor's daughter Asad would never reciprocate to her feelings.
It was Ayan and Humaira's engagement. Zoya was at SM from last three days while Asad was in Mumbai for a few meetings. Both missed being with each other, what if they were not on talking terms, at least they were together and that was enough for them. But the little separation made them realize of their forgotten love, what if they had issues, they were polls apart from day one. Instead to sorting out they avoided each other and complicated the matter but now they were ready to accept each other without caring about the outcomes.
Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dolna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
They had had enough. Intentionally or unintentionally, they only hurt each other but finally realized their mistakes. Asad was on his way back to Bhopal while Zoya decided to break the ice and confront him.
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
The function was going well, Ayan and Humaira were more than happy. Zoya knew Asad loved his brother but one thing was sure, he was not going to step in SM, still Zoya kept on waiting for him. Asad parked his SUV outside the SM and took a deep breath, he was going to break his own rules. Yes Asad Ahmad Khan was going to step in SM just to let Zoya know what she meant to him.
Tere liye aaya main toh
Tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere naal jidani bitava
The moment Zoya saw Asad standing at the doorstep of her father's house, she literally got a mini heart attack. Ayan was the one who ran to his brother and welcomed him while the other SM people were still recovering from the shock. Ghafoor sent above a silent prayer, except AsYa he was the only one who feared of AsYa's relation. No doubt he trusted Asad but this was kind of unpredictable thing but seeing a determined Asad at his doorstep, his all fears jumped out of the window.
Kadi yun na chodna
Ishq di dolna
Sari chadh jaaye
Mahi tu na chodna
Asad stepped in and kept his eyes locked with Zoya's eyes. It was an emotional moment for them, if Asad was confessing his love via his actions then Zoya was fully aware what his actions meant. Both shared an emotional eye lock but they were in the middle of many people so they skipped the talking session for now.
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Zoya was standing on distance and fixed her gaze on Asad. The way he mingled with Ayan was something she always heard but never got the chance to see that side of her husband dearest. Asad was aware of her gaze and loved the way she stared him. He was talking with Ayan when Zoya came and stood right next to him, first he thought maybe she was back to act in front of their family but the moment she put her arm around his right arm and linked their arms, he felt it so good and real.
Tere sang hasna main
Tere sang rona
Tujh mein hi rehna main
Tujh mein hi khona
Asad too wanted to let her know how much he loved her and missed being with her. He put his free hand on hers from which she was holding his other arm. Zoya immediately looked at him and locked her eyes with him while Asad smiled at her and caressed the back of her hand with his thumb.
Dil vich chupa ke tujhe
Dil nahi kholna
Marke bhi mahi tuh se
Muh na modna
Ayan and Humaira teased AsYa but their teasing comments fell on deaf ears. AsYa were lost in their own little world and didn't bother to hear what their siblings were saying.
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Later, Asad and Zoya came back to their home sweet home hand in hand. Dilshad too noticed the change and thanked Allah for blessing her children with noting but love. Asad and Zoya sorted out everything. Asad confessed his love and then told her why he behaved odd while Zoya felt happy tears in her eyes because her Mr. Khan was angry because she didn't take a stand for herself or else he had not issues with her father. And today she fell in love with her husband all over again and without wasting time, she confessed it too.

Mahi bolna...
Bolna mahi bolna
AsYa not only confessed their love for each other, they also promised to share each and everything as they didn't want any other misunderstanding in future. With a few tears, promises and lots of love AsYa started a new life.
Reema darling... mujhe nahi pata what you prefer to read so I planned this story with emotions and mind wars... hope tumhe acha laga 😳
Sooo that's it... No proof read...
Kindly ignore my mistakes and errors...
Please hit like and leave your precious replies...
Ashii...
P.S Scroll down for PMs...
Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Buddy this ID for PMs
Edited by Oye_Hoye - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey ashii
First of all thank-you so much for dedicating this beautiful OS
But i feel tumko aise kehne ki zaroorat nahi thi.. i already knw that u love me bahut sara šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
and sach mein i have no idea ki maine kitne banner banaya tumhare liye.. i guess bahut saare hai našŸ˜›

Ok coming to Os

Os is full of emotions n mind wars sach main.. asya in love but thoda silent rehne ki wajah se misunderstanding hua.. but last mein sab sorted out.. good
i loved it

As always apt song selection mahi bolna wala.. even i like this song

Again thank-you for making me happy.. jab tumne kal bola res karne ko toh tumhe mera reaction yaad hoga na.. bcoz mujhe laga aise hi thanks bologi but aise socha nahi tha tum mere liye kuch likh rahe hošŸ˜‰
Read kiya toh bahut acha laga.. special wali feeling aayi kisi friend se after very long time
Love you dearā¤ļø


And message for sara is
Wish you a happy life
Congratulations on your wedding


Edited by ImmortalLove - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mera
unressed

shonaaašŸ¤—

mast thašŸ˜› ek to meko AsYa ka samjh nahe ata...bilkul pagal hain dono

panga kiya hota hai or dono kahan ghaset lete hain...dhakan kahin kešŸ˜†

mast drabble tha😃bolna mahiā¤ļø i ko bht pasand yeh...choco api k lie bhe banaya ushi k banaya tha i ne😳

or likh lekin phle wht dede...mee waiting
Edited by asyaarshilover - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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res
Unres

First of all šŸ‘ for your first move...to dedicate your story for the banner maker..
Kuch naye sochne keliyešŸ‘šŸ‘
Aur haan thanks for the wonderful banner maker too...
For giving us readers a visual view of the story...šŸ‘šŸ‘


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The story was as usual emotional..yet quite simple n loving..
ismein mujhe sabse acha yeh laga ki AsYa ka nikkah first attempt mein hi hua..
Both are so much in love..
Wondering How did they spend 2 weeks without bickering under the same roof..
And both realized the depth of their love during separation and united..
So beautiful dear..
You joined both unpleasant memories of AsYa and gave a beautiful story
One the first nikaah failure n Zoyaan track when Asad entered SM...
Actually I was rewatching QH nowadays n those are the worst part of AsYa's love story for me..
Loved this very much.. ā¤ļø

Keep Writing..
šŸ¤—
Edited by --Mirage-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ek res Reema api ka meri traf se bhešŸ˜‰šŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Apple n yoyo n sue n binnu n addu n IBP n Bhai's
Edited by asyaarshilover - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for all readersšŸ˜›
Edited by asyaarshilover - 8 years ago
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Mine res 2

But ye res ho kyu raha hai ..is some new story coming 😃

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