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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update dear
Liked the way both thought abt other
Asad met her again & she was shocked to know that he was AAK. He told her why he did with those companies. So now going for lunch. She was hesitant but she believed that he never hurt her & she was safe with him. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm


Thank you so much 😊
I'm glad you liked it
Yeah she was hesitant as she is blind she is very cautious with strangers but she somewhere has trust in him reason zoya herself is unaware of

Will update ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

This was funny.

Ms.Dhinchak😆

Seriously she cold blabber all that to him..😆

Liked the way Akdu was explaining to get a clean chit..
Razia😡

It was a nice update..
Continue soon.


Thank you so much dear 😊 I'm glad you liked it 😃
She is Zoya she can do or think unpredictable things 😆
Akdu had to get clean chit after all he is in love 😉
Yeah razia was annoying but in further updates she will be the evilest person you will read
Will try to update ASAP 😃
Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Very nice update
like Gaffur-Zoya moments..
it's so funny how Zoya scared of AAK and then he explained everything...enjoyed reading it!!!
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊


Thank you so much I'm glad u liked it 😊
Funny things had to happen when ASYA is together right 😆
Will update ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

It was sooo beautiful!!!

Loved loved loved loved ittt sooo much!!!
Plzzz.cont as soon as u can
Magical!!!


Thank you so much dear 😊 I'm glad you loved it so much😃
Will update ASAP

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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Always_asya

So sorry for late commenting
i only realised now that i did not commrnted
it was beautiful story dear
loved it
asad lost in zoya's thoughts
razia is just disgusting who did leave a chance in troubling zoya
omg zoya's love for Md Dinchak
finally asad cleared his confusion
waiting for their next meeting
update soon


Thank you so much dear for the overwhelming comment 😊
It's ok u liked it and commented after remembering it really means alot 😊
It's nothing razia will be the evilest in further updates
It's zoya she can do anything unpredictable 😆
Will update ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66


CHAPTER 3


Dilshad constructions:

Asad was busy with some work when Ayaan and Haider entered

Ayaan: bhai, I had a word with Mr.Kapoor, I think we should consider it, that joint venture seems quite beneficial

Asad: I had gone through the details everything is in our favor, I have noticed one thing their firm has just developed so more than this project they are more interested in collaborating with us! Well, that's fine it's their strategy also they are hardworking I don't mind giving them exposure. Haider explain them all the T&Cs of DC and make sure all the protocols are followed

Haider: sure I will mail them the details and will personally coordinate with them

Asad: cool

Haider: one more thing, we have three conference calls lined up for today

Asad: ok fine...wait! Today? No, not possible at all

Ayaan: Bhai, it was decided a week ago and you had told us to schedule it today

Asad: yeah, but I have some important work so you both manage it for today or else postpone it

Haider: we have to postpone it to tomorrow because it cannot be done without you

Asad(casually reading the file): ok then postpone it

After sometime Asad kept back the file but then suddenly taken aback seeing Ayaan and Haider starring at him

Asad: you both are still here and why you both starring like this!

Ayaan: what's wrong with you bhai

Haider: which kind of work is that which is more important than your conference call

Asad: guys, it's personal

Ayaan: I'm your brother

Haider: I'm your best friend

Ayaan/Haider: NO SECRETS!

Asad knew they won't leave him until he won't tell them the whole thing Asad signed and told them everything which had occurred from that flash mob till today morning. Haider was very excited and happy that Asad finally found a better half even Ayaan was initially happy but then after knowing that the girl is blind he was a bit worried for his brother but for the time hid it as he didn't want to ruin the moment so taught to talk to him at evening.

RD Academy:

Zoya was teaching some basic dance form and Humeira was analyzing the students whether they are doing it properly

Zoya: 1...2...3...and turn right then 4...5...6...turn left got it kids(showing the steps)

Students(in chores): yes di!

Zoya: very good! Now you guys will show me lets start!

Kid1: how caln we chow you? You calnot chi (how can we show you? You cannot see)

Zoya(with a smile): aww! Such a sweet voice, so it's your 1st-day what's your name?

Kid: Rhea!

Zoya: even you have a beautiful name!

Small girl looked down blushing at the compliment

Another kid: Rhea oh ya tia! How can you tallk to my di like thesh! She is the best teachel(Rhea oh ya tia! How can you talk to my di like this! She is the best teacher)

Zoya: Suhana no fighting sweetheart! Powerpuff girls never fights with each other right

Suhana(unconvinced): right

Zoya: also students can ask anything to their teacher you all are my students as well as my sweethearts so guys have double rights and Rhea(kneeling down) baby I can see you not from this eyes(pointing to her eyes) but from this eyes(pointing to heart)

Rhea: but how come youl eyes is oval there and my eyes is oval here(but how come your eyes is over there and my eyes is over here)

For a minute Zoya was not knowing how to answer her innocent question, her thought was interrupted by a voice.

Humeira: because she has beautiful eyes and I liked it so much and since she is my elder sister she gave it to me so this is her real eyes(pointing to her own eyes) so you don't worry dear you can show your steps

Little girl convinced with a story happily went to her place

Zoya: again u handled humi...i...

Humeira: it doesn't mean I forgave you for leaving me alone at home and coming here

Zoya: humi, you were sleeping dear

Humeira: I was just sleeping was not in coma that you can't wake me

Zoya(sternly): never say that again!

Humeira(hearing her tone): sorry, but what you did was also not right

Zoya(huffed): even I'm sorry! Happy?

Humeira: it won't happen again right?

Zoya: right

Humeira smiled and hugged her both of them were above to continue with the practice but before that Zoya double clicked the clock icon on her cell and the voice came

Voice: 1 pm

Zoya(under her breath): 45 mins to go!

Humeira: di, every 20 mins you are checking the time, everything alright?

Zoya(smiling awkwardly): yeah absolutely, just that...I am little tired today, so I was checking time left to wrap up

Humeira: oh...k

2 pm outside the academy:

Asad reached the academy to pick her up he was searching for her

Asad thinking, "did she forget about the lunch"

But then soon he found her on the same bench where he saw her last night her eyes were glued to the entrance waiting for someone and he feeling so happy that someone is him only that stick of her is an indication that she is blind. Asad silently went and sat beside her

Asad: waiting for someone?

Zoya(pouting): yeah actually...(suddenly she recognized his voice)

Zoya: Allah miya what's wrong with you Asad! Here I am waiting for you and you are fooling around

Asad just had a small laugh

Zoya: why are you laughing?

Asad: it's a first time some girl waiting for me apart from my ammi

Zoya(covering up): I was not waiting for you...im just hungry

Asad: ok let's go then

They were walking towards the parking

Zoya(annoyed): tell me what took you so long!

Asad: you said to come by 2 pm and it's exactly 2 pm

Zoya(fumbled with the words): vo...vo...what you think ha you are the perfectionist!

Asad: I don't think like that, I know I'm perfect

Zoya: really?? Then back to earth Mr.Khan, because I told you that my batch will be over by 1:45, which means you were supposed to be here by 1:45

Asad: basically you are annoyed because you were missing me

Zoya: yes!(suddenly she realized her words and covered up saying) I mean...I was missing but not you I was missing my lunch you have no idea how much I am starving, it has been 2hrs since I ate something, if you would have reached here by 1:45 then by now we would have been relishing our food but now it will take another 15mins to reach there and I have to starve till then

Asad smirked at her attempt of covering up

Asad(amused): at least stop to breath, ok it's my fault

Zoya: yeah right!

Asad(teasingly): so will you able make it till restaurant! I mean 2hrs without eating

Zoya: I know... what? are you pulling my leg?

Asad(controlling his laugh): not at all!

Zoya: I am not coming anywhere with you!(turned back towards her academy)

Asad: hey, where you going? I was just kidding!

Zoya(giggling): when was I serious

Asad: you are a drama queen

Zoya: a proud one!

With that they seated on the car, Zoya was struggling with the seat belt as she was not getting the holder

Asad removed his seatbelt and leaned towards her side she could feel his face closer suddenly small blush crept Zoya's face, he pulled the seatbelt accidently touching her shoulder sending butterflies in her tummy and locked the belt

Asad: its done

Zoya signed in relief and Asad smiled seeing his effect on her

Zoya: I would have managed

Asad: nobody in this world can manage everything alone, we all need someone, you are not an exception(looking intently at her) I have realized this thing sometime before

Zoya thinking,"why is he always raising my heartbeat with his words, but seriously I hate Ms. Dinchak now I trusted her so much, how could she fill my mind against him like that"

Asad: so where should we head to, btw I had seen one restaurant on the way. It seems good we can try there

Zoya: on your way? That means you must have seen restaurant "DELICIOUS" its good and classy but I have better place in my mind, just go straight and take the second right

Asad: ok(with that Asad started his car engine)

Zoya was gazing blankly at the window when some small breeze soothed her face, Asad had opened the car window as he saw her staring at window's direction, she cannot see things but she can feel it. Zoya was overwhelmed by his gesture apart from her family which includes only her sister and father, no one attempted to understand her so well. She was about to tell him about the windows but stopped thinking he won't be comfortable as he is used to been in AC but then he understood her silence. She smiled at him, enjoying the breeze

Asad thinking," someday she will kill me with this million dollar smile"

Asad: Zoya its been 5mins since I'm driving forget 2nd right I can't even find the 1st right

Zoya: you are so impatient Asad within 2mins 1st right will come and then 2nd right is 3mins away from there

Asad: wow! Is that your mind or some kind of calculator

Zoya: I keep this small small thing in mind so that it helps me in future like my last visit helped me today

Asad: I'm impressed

Zoya just smiled proudly at his compliment

Asad: but I can't find any restaurant in my GPS?

Zoya: you just follow my direction don't worry you won't get lost I'm there na

Asad: that's a relief

Zoya(giggling): that you won't get lost

Asad: no that you are there(immediately changing his words) I mean you know the directions

Zoya gazed out of the window to hide blush

Soon Asad halted the car after 2nd right

Asad: now?

Zoya: now what, get out of the car

With that, she got out of her car with her stick followed by Asad who was glancing around the place looking for restaurant

Asad: where is the restaurant?

Zoya: over there(pointing towards the front direction)

Asad: Zoya that's a garden

Zoya: exactly! We are having our lunch there

Asad: what! Are you planning to eat grass and flowers over there?

Zoya: no, if we will eat their food what would that poor rabbits do

Asad: unbelievable!

Zoya: calm down Asad! Look I have tiffins with me so instead of having outside food trapped in a room we can have homemade food under fresh air over here

Asad was above to speak when Zoya interrupted

Zoya: don't worry, have enough food for both of us actually today my sister came half day to the academy i.e. after lunch and I like a fool packed her lunch also with mine so we have enough food don't worry and also I am a good cook trust me your stomach won't get upset now lets go

Asad: you are always this non-stop or today is some special occasion

Zoya: well I can make one occasion for your haters tomorrow's headline by Ms. Dinchak "Arrogant ruler of business world AAK was killed by a starving blind girl according to the source AAK was not letting her have lunch and was continuously bombarding with questions we are trying to contact their closed ones till then keep watching E24"

Asad: I'm scared!

Zoya: shall we?

Asad: after you

With that they went inside the garden, Zoya removed her sandals and comfortably sat down on the grass and Asad was just standing there like a fool not knowing what to do

Zoya: where are you Asad?

Asad: I'm here only!

Hearing Asad's voice from upward direction

Zoya: you are still standing common sit down make yourself comfortable

Asad sat there looking at the surrounding awkwardly he didn't expect this surprise picnic at all, he is not at all use to it even if his family plans some outdoor event making some or the other excuse he save himself. Zoya extended one tiffin to him he took it from her. Zoya had already started eating comfortably as if she is in her dining, Asad tasted one morsel he was actually relishing the taste it so delicious

Asad: delicious!

Zoya: you are still stuck in that restaurant!(sadly) you are not liking here?

Asad: no, I meant the food is delicious

Zoya: oh! Did U like it?

Asad: it's awesome

Zoya: thank you! Even my abbu loves my cooking once I had prepared...(went on and on with her story)

Asad again started with his drooling session suddenly there was a sparkle in her eyes when he complimented her cooking

Asad thinking, " she is so innocent it's so easy to make her happy her simplicity not having any girly tantrums so simple, so beautiful, so grounded how can one person can have so many qualities. The person who will get that golden heart of her will be the luckiest person alive I just hope I am that one but do I really deserve this angel in my life. I don't know if I am selfish but I want her badly in my life"

Asad: I LOVE YOU ZOYA!

Zoya was not at all expecting this she choked her food hearing him and started coughing, Asad immediately handed her the water bottle

Asad(worried): are you ok? Have some water!

Zoya drank some water which relaxed her the bit

Zoya(horrified): what you said?

Asad: vo actually...

Zoya: you said something else

Asad signed thinking,"why this girl is hell bend in making it more difficult for me"

Asad: i...I love you

Zoya(nervously laughing): it's a joke right?

Asad: I was never this serious about anything before

There was an awkward silence between them one was totally confused with her feeling and was having no idea what to say and other was totally nervous as his life depends on her answer

First of all thank you so much, everyone, for the overwhelming comment and silent readers for liking my story. It really means a lot, and a big apology for such a late update was busy with exams, house function, and all other mess. Do let me know how you liked it part will be eagerly waiting for your reviews


CHAPTER 4

Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Res fr mine
Dillu arpu ..Ashi n addu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful.
Loved the girl and Zoya's conversation. Children are cutely innicent and so also Zoya.
Enjoyed thoroughly Asad and Zita's interaction. They are really , truly and irrevocably in love.
Wish to know Zita's reply to Assad's I love you
Please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Amazing part
Loved it
Zoya nd humeira convo was nice
Loved their bond
Ayaan is unhappy with asad decision nd decided to talk to him
But we can't really blame him for that
Zoya is waiting for asad nd he is teasing her
Finally their lunch date
Then come the most surprising part
Asad proposed Zoya
😳
Eagerly waiting to know about Zoya's reaction
So continue soon
Thanks for pm 😛
Edited by sanayasurbhi - 8 years ago

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