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@ridhi95

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Nice part

Well written

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Excited to read this

Aww poor zoya

Married to akram hiw did tht happen

And he robs her dry and rapes her too

Now having nothing to live for

She decides to end it all

And who is the lucky recipient

Asad and his car

So he hits her and he rushes to save her

He has a nephew wow

Waiting for more

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Very nice and interesting start Sans
But the whole scenario is so much painful...what a disgusting man 😡
waiting to read more
continue soon...

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Such an Excellent Start

True women are never meant to be treated in such a manner

but I like the strength in Zoya to still carry herself from one day to the next

now the accident and I'm sure its just a blessing

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

WOW!! brilliant start...loved it dear

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--Scarlett--

@--Scarlett--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

such a gripping update, set my hopes high!!!!

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: --Mirage--
A Great start Sans..
Awesome Job👏
Akhram is a ba***rd..🤬
No women deserve to treat like that..
They are one step ahead than men
And he wants to show who is the boss..Disgusting man..
At times death could be a better option rather than dying every single day...
And I cant really blame Zoya but why she had to stick to him..if he is so offensive..
And then Asad's car hit her but for her the accident actually saved her..from the clutches of the monster..
But little did she know she is rescued by her real prince charming..😳


I was already hooked to this story with your teaser..
Now with this amazing chapter..
I cant wait long enough to read more..
Looking forward to read more of this emotional ride...

❤️❤️❤️

The story actually came to my mind after watching humari adhuri kahani also my one frnd had started similar story but never completed so I get inspiration from there...
Thanks for reading you will get to know more eventually I wont spill the beans now!

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Zephyr.

The story actually came to my mind after watching humari adhuri kahani also my one frnd had started similar story but never completed so I get inspiration from there...
Thanks for reading you will get to know more eventually I wont spill the beans now!

I havent seen the movie completely..just read the story somewhere..

And I am totally up to read more..