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@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Tu literature ki student hai kya?

Sach bolu to ye story muje samjha hi nahi par tera language grammar bahot acchha hai. Main teri tarah 16 age ki thi to mera grammar itna acchha nahi tha.

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Tu literature ki student hai kya?

Sach bolu to ye story muje samjha hi nahi par tera language grammar bahot acchha hai. Main teri tarah 16 age ki thi to mera grammar itna acchha nahi tha.

No I m commerce student😆

Hawww main purpose to pura hi nahi hua 😭

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
🤣
🤣
esa kya 😉

☺️

Bhavnao ko samjho!

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Mayur

Thank You so much for the RES Tehs...😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Coming to the Update..

Again a very good start Riddhi...😊👏

And as Juhi even mentioned Your Grammar is way better than many of us in your age...

I can see that their was whole lot of research done before drafting this part as all the locals of VERONA were explained beautifully...

I am not a FAN of Romeo and Juliet , but would love to read their ASYA version from you but yes with a HAPPY ENDING ...its a must..

And I love the tune of the song which You are going to use in the next update, " DIL KYUN YEH MERA SHOR KARE " ,

Perfect for this story..

Continue soonish..

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Hey rossy

Finally here I am

Sorry for my lateness

Very nice os

Loved it

Write more

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -jerry-
Please Update

Are u sure u want to read this?😲

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Jasmeet(Jass)

@-jass-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Are u sure u want to read this?😲

of course I do :-)

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -jerry-
of course I do :-)

😃

I will try my best to update in 2-3 days!!

I am actually going out of station tomorrow... So its like a days journey so if I will get time I will write the part!

I m happy now!😳

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Love the banner...

good start...
well written
thanks for the pm...

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