NEW ASYA SS: His Captive **UPDATED 29/05/2017**

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Jasmeet(Jass)

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Rubyaasyafan

@Rubyaasyafan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Oh girl i luv u 4 this.thank u soo much 4 updating this one,bcz dis is my fav story in IF.I jst luv dark stories nd this part ws awesome.The way u described their feelings 4 each other,that thing actually touched my heart

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

this is amazing

cant wait to read more

asya married

but feelings are in play big time

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Wow wow wow..

What a dhamakedaar update u gave...

Just loved the way things were explained and everything everything so beautifully written...

The suspense and drama was keeping my heartbeats drum faster.

Loved the way they got married..

He has guts for sure..

Really can't wait to read more and u already gave a 3 month leave application..

Not fair yaar..

Please try to update in between if possible.

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Wow love it

Fabulous plot

After a long time very impatient to read more

Plz pm me of upcoming updates

Will wait for your pm

Update soon

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Ihopelove

@Ihopelove

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Wow awesome chapter. You described zoyas feeling beautifully.

Asya are married now. What exactly asad wants. I don't think asad will be able to get rid off zoya.

Dose zoyas appi know about asad-zoya marriage.

Eager to know whats going to happen next.

Will be waiting.

Update soon.

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Tabs

@hatelove2012

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Very interesting start. Can't wait to read more

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Jasmeet(Jass)

@-jass-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

won't thread got closed in 3 months?

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Nice update dear
Loved it
Flashback scene was painful
Zoya family was disgusting
They sold her & tell that as wedding
Asad saved her & I liked the way he took revenge from ghafoor
Zoya was not happy with his way. She stood for herself when ghafoor/razia was insulting her.
She saw her aapi in asad mansion, all ready as bride mother, confused her & bam, she fainted.
Update soon plz
Do pm me when u update
Thanks