NEW ASYA SS: His Captive **UPDATED 29/05/2017**

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey all , it's me 😳

I hope you are all well. I won't say I'm back, only because my presence on here will be intermittent as always because of my career overall but I will pop in every now and then with a few treats.

Once again thank you for your patience and kindness, it means a lot. And before you say it - yes I should complete my other stories which are a work in progress as I have a few ideas I'm playing with in my spare time. Not that I have a lot of spare time haha. As always I will also be posting this story on my blog.

Without further ado, I'm back with a new story. It's called His Captive.

It's a little dark but hopefully you will let me know what you think.

So far I've written a prologue (which isn't so dark just yet lol 😆 ) ... and part one is semi-complete but won't be posted till it's ready.

So this story revolves around two powerful families and their feud. In the aftermath of a bloody fight, Asad and Zoya meet, but there's more to this meeting which will unfold as the story progresses. He takes her captive for his own motives but soon resents his decisions as he learns the truth of her identity. Saying no more but it's about forbidden love, a war between two families and murder.


I have created a few gifs for this story, but I'll post just the one below:




I'll post the story directly below this post 😳

Chaper 1 A: page 1 (below this post)

Chapter 1 B: page 6



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very gud one...interesting awesomeness
zoya is asad captive... an exciting new one.
really, cant wait to knw what'll happen nxt
nd secrets to be unfold makes me crazy by thnkng this amazng update
update soon ...and yess its an amazing update with so perfect, out of the world image of ASYA...luvd LUVD luvd it.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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specially i luv the pic u used it on the prologue
nice work dear,
cont...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuv6

very gud one...interesting awesomeness
zoya is asad captive... an exciting new one.
really, cant wait to knw what'll happen nxt
nd secrets to be unfold makes me crazy by thnkng this amazng update
update soon ...and yess its an amazing update with so perfect, out of the world image of ASYA...luvd LUVD luvd it.



Thank you for your beautiful & positive comments.
I'm happy you loved it and I hope the next update will appease you 😳
I'll try and update soonish. Love Fati aka Ambreen
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: siyasharma94

Intersting prologue

Update soon


Thank you for your lovely comments 😳 and I will do.
Love Fati aka Ambreen
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Vry intreseting start dear..
Luv to read prt 1st soon ..hope u update soon
N ya the second gif is vry nice ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting story.
Asad captivate zoya for six months. Excited to know what happened.
Thanks for PM.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey!
Good to see you!
I loved the prologue!!
Very intriguing..
Looking forward to the story!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its really interesting
I am totally intrigued
The captive and captor
Plese do continue soon
Please do pm me

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