AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10)

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

meri Sweetheart agayi !!! 🤗
kya karun ? subah ko online hona it's hard for me because i'm in class at that time 😆
acha means only on spcl occasions u go 2 Uni 8 8 baje🤣

i love u too ❤️ haan bohot sweet hai humara Mayur 😳
Shukar sweet hai warna humesha iske 1st aane pe humara krodh sehna padta isse😆

FS toh kya ? lagta hai yeh SS banne wala hai 😆 nahi i'll be updating quite frequently more than i thought actually 😆
Peanut ke Mummy papa ko bhol na jana😭😭

thank u so much !! i'm really glad that this plot got so much attention fr'om people
Aapi ki toh shayari waise bhie Ma Sha Allah hoti hai !!😳
When anything comes from awesome writers we grab it wid both hands Janna & yahan tohh 2 brilliant writers ka sangam hua hai😆... i Know Sam di ki poems r classy but main poems dept main boht buri hun mere school main bhi kabhi pale nahi padti thin🤣 isliye acha hua u decided 2 use it in d story ab story ke saath meko Poem kafi ache se samjh aa rahi hai😆

Asad is a great human being because he has been helpless in life and now when he has the means to help, he's doing it generously 👏
haha that's exactly what i wanted to show, Asad ke aane pe hi, Zoya can be how she wants to be without any pretenses 😳
Issi hi kehte hain soulmates😉... when u can b d real u wid d one's u love.. does it make sense🤔

it's cruel the way her parents abandonned her 🤢

concept yehi tha !!😆 i said something that quite happens in India/Pakistan😆
LOL tune aisa nahi kaha tha pehle 🤣 main buddhu hun par itni bhi nahi😆

love u too !!🤗
i'll be updating both so don't worry 😆

Love u more❤️❤️🤗... han i'm counting days 😆 u said u'll finish this TS cum FS cum SS in 1 week jiske ab koi asar nahi dikh rahe😆😆

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Special RES for Jas ...😊

Especial RES for Tehs...😊

Special RES also for Sue and Riddhi...😊

Mayur thanku 4 d res buddy😛... mera gif is so Para & Fweet just like me☺️

Riddhi Suri AAk ko aisi halat main matt dekho Zoe paas hi khadi hai 🤣🤣 chodegi nahi😆

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Ok so now coming 2 updt
aag toh dono taraf lag chuki hai😉
Asad is so curious that he can't help it 2 read her diary even if he knows its wrong😆
football part was my fvrt where Asad met Asad part 2🤣 & chota wala boht grumpy tha😆 & bda chalu bhi incomplete info ke liye bhi Ice-cream kama li😆😆 d momnt Asad saw him i was already thinking ki Asad usse shoulder pe uthake khelega & it happened... Hi5 Janna 4 same soch😆😆
Zoya was chup chup ke watching😳... her monologues were touchy when she thought she'll be a charity case wid Asad... Her fears or say mindset at that point is very realistic... ppl in society keeps saying such hurtful things & outcast u that after a point u also start jugding urself wid their eyes & Zoe is doing d same
Although she believes that she & Asad r a no match still her heart doesn't want 2 see disgust in his eyes d only man her heart has ever desired upon.. so she hid in d same storeroom😔
But Asad reaches her & he told d whole truth about her diary & a little piece of info from his own life... & they were direct dil se words.. just like Zoe had written her unmasked feelings on her diary.
Asad's poem came as a suprise... i thought it'll b just Zoya's side 😛
So he left a hint in d poem that he wishes 2 have Zoya in his life... haina haina yahi hai na Janna bolo i m right😆
Well since Zoya was shocked i assume its a type of confession only😆 ya fir Asad ki Poem dekhke she's shocked😆 Poem ka jawab poem se thodi der main mushayra start ho jayega🤣

Khair jokes aside I loved this updt Janna❤️ kyunki yeh mera fvrt part tha light happy shappy 😆 but knowing ur lack of interest in happy phase i know next updt main kuch drama hoga 😆 ane do ane do drama bhi aane do🤣 Love u🤗

Edited by jas91 - 8 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

double post😆

Edited by jas91 - 8 years ago

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JASLEEN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

It was really another wonderful update..

I was waiting for it n u updated..

I really liked the way u have written asads emotions towards zoya...

Happy to know Asad dont judge her through her scars..

N Asad interaction with little asad was very cute...

Especially when asad said he would appoint little asad later in his office...

The poem was soo deep in emotion n literally made me cry...

But i loved every bit of the update..

Thanks for the update n waiting for the next part...

~JAZ~

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Ashii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: MayurChan
A Res for " I.B.P "

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mine 😎

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blueberry02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Beautiful update again
asad nd asad moments r so cute
nd u wrote asad's feelings through a poem...dats really amazing
totally loved it
eagerly waiting 2 no abt zoya's reaction
continue soon