Asad-Zoya SS: It Happened One Night - Latest Update Pg 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Yes on the pm. Please. Just please. Anything you have just gimme.

Thank you for not abandoning this idea, my friend. The 9 rasas. While I do not know nor am I familiar with it, the themes I sure would know. Absolute delight reading an Asad-Zoya story from you.

Hello My Dear Friend, hope that life is treating you well! Yes, even I am glad that I got to work on this idea.

Disgust I think is even worse than hatred. And I'll be very honest here that I wasn't sure if I was ready for a disgust emotion between this two, but I sure was ready (and will always be) for a story from you. And it way exceeded my already exceedingly high expectations. Noe at her best. As always. And I sure do not mind this kind of disgust between them. Very real!!!

I agree about disgust. Disgust as a rasa is meant more for underbelly of human existence and like you even I was not ready to throw Asad and Zoya in that space. At the same time, rasas are not fixed, they have their own range and I am picking the most suitable point from the gamut of each emotion. I have softened this rasa. But, still I think it has come out well.

Thank you! 😊 And, keep your expectations high 😳

Thank you so much for doing this Noe. For writing and posting and...you know, for that brilliant mind of yours! For sharing this with us. I sometimes find myself reading you previous stories. The random ones strike me the most. Remember the airport one? The one with her bag still unfixed (the wheels?) and they were engaged previously? Something about a ring? Them meeting after...three years? That one I only read once but honest to God, I was thinking of this story a couple of days ago and I was trying to remember it and thought to myself I gotta browse through your posts and find it again so I can read. I haven't yet but imagine I just came on IF after weeks and I get a pm from you. It's a sign. Wait coming back to the story was there something about a company logo? See how very effective your writing is?

Here you go, the airport one: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4061756/asad-zoya-os-life-status-delayed

Wow...you do remember many details of this one. A secret...whenever I am on airport, I look around if there is a flight departing to Bhopal from any of nearby gates...aise hi...remembering this story...😳

Give us more. Anything. Just do.

Lot's of love babe.

Good to see you, too!🤗

Originally posted by: maha70

Amazing Update..cant wait for next.

Update Soon

Originally posted by: Chillichick

This is gripping and written brilliantly!

Can't wait for the next part!

Res

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Nyc strtng...luvd it...
So dey r married...
Eager to read more

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

So glad to read a new story from you

A very interesting start

With an amazing plot

Gives the feels of forming an intense and emotional story

But hopefully, we would get some light-hearted and romantic scenes too

Looking forward to this beautiful piece of work

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written...👏

Originally posted by: life4me

Nice start. Continue soon pls.

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

An amazing concept and an equally amazing execution of the whole thing. Noe, its just outstanding 👏

Though I had forgotten that you had mentioned this concept but did remember immediately thatbi read your first post. Lok forward to this one as eagerlyas I had waited for 'Heartbeat Warfare'. Please continue soon and its definitely a YES for PMs for this one 😊

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

What do you mean that mera shuru ho Gaya? Abhi tak Maine START hi nahi Kiya 😳

Kuch nahi Sunna, update.