AsYa OS : Survivor

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Here's another OS
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AsYa OS : Survivor


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It was a mansion of grandeur and class made from marbles, attraction of every human and dream of every person if only they would've understand the phrase don't judge the book by its cover . If the mansion was beautiful then it's luck was not as it has not seen beauty residing in it; there was devilness and helplessness; it was nothing but a mere play for man and a nightmare for woman.

There was something different today the airs were not the same as before; sun was shining more brightly promising something.

In the biggest room of the mansion where at this time rudness rule was silent. There was laying the king on his bed but in different situation today. A large white band around his forehead.

He tried to opened his eyes but couldn't, they were heavy like there was huge weight on them. Slowly he opened his eyes it was blurry, everything he tried to look on was blurred. Slowly his vision clear up the first thing he did was trying to regain his memory; his eyes fall on his life his wife arranging something on table. She was looking as beautiful as always and this brought a smile on his face that was replaced by unknown feelings.

She looked at him and flashed a smile. She looked fresh and happy like a flower but there was something hidden behind this mask.

"Its good that you woke up, I hope you are feeling better now" Her voice was soft

He opened his mouth to say something but couldn't he felt weak so just give a nod.

She didn't say anything and get back to her work. She came and stood near him with a tray.

"Will you like to eat it now or later?" She asked softly

His lips changed into side loop and he chuckled weakly

"I thought you will force me like every wife do to her sick husband"His voice was dull

"I don't see myself as every wife neither I find that I have a right to" Her smile was more than a happy smile it was like that she has took off the mask telling lot of stories in her smile

His face lost its colour as he understood her meaning and read the silent words dancing on her face.

"Zoya" he whisper with a hint of plead

His voice! She closed her eyes. His voice had a thing that remind her every thing letting different feelings ran through her.

"I forgot to bring your tea! I will be right back" She ignored him and almost ran out of room

He closes his eyes feeling utterly upset. His helplessness was laughing at him mocking his situation. The irony of the situation was when he could have gone behind her he never went but now when he want to he is stuck on his bed.

It has not even been a minute and he was restless for her. He looked at the bell placed on the side table so he could call her if he need anything. With a difficulty he ring it.

After a minute or two she arrived with a cup of tea fresh like before. He looked at her closely as she place the tea on side table.

"You need something?" She asked

He keep on looking at her and she remained silent. He was surprised to see that she didn't complained on his eagerness. He felt sad to realise that she has changed in his fights.

"What's wrong with you Asad? You know na I was coming here only. You should understand that it takes time" he reminiscences her complain when he was shouting for her to come while he knew she was on her way

"Yeah... I want to eat" he said softly

She noded and hold his left hand by her one hand and placed her other hand behind his head; using full force she make him sit. As she stood so close to him busy in helping him sit, he keep on looking at her.

She sat beside him and start to feed him. As her concentration was on feeding him she didn't notice his constant gaze on her.

"Why didn't you went away?"

Her hands freeze listening his question and she looked at him stunned.

"If there would've been anyone on your place she would've left a person like me. It was a golden chance to run away from a torturing husband like me when he met with an accident and can't even move" he was guilty his face showed it

She was shocked not just by his words but his expressions. The spoon in her frozen hands fall down with a clink bringing her back to senses. She looked down and then at him; there was no change in his expressions.

"Kyun bhagty mai? Or kahn tk bhagty akhir? I have not done something wrong to hide myself? Aur wese bhi kabhi na kabhi to ap mjhe dhoond hy lete! Phr kya krty? Aur agr ap na bhidhoond pate to kisi corner mai isi khof k sath rehty k kahin ap dhoond na lain. I have the power to face the challenges till now so why should I ran away from them" She was strong he could see

"I am truly sorry Zoya and I mean it!"he continued "I have realised whatever I did to you. All those pains, suffering and suffocation... I realised that I was absolutely wrong... I am really sorry" he had tears in his eyes

"Sorry?" Zoya laughed softly "sorry! You ruined my whole life, you caged me in this mansion of yours. You did everything you wanted. I have to even breath on your orders and now you are saying sorry. So that I forget everything and live a happy life! It's not that easy Asad. Its my life you played. I had worst memories that your sorry cannot erase" she looked at him with pain the mask had fallen down

"But am glad that you are atleast sorry. You should be actually sorry for all you did that's the only thing you can do" Zoya wiped her tears that wetted her cheeks

Asad looked at her from the corner of his eyes while he couldn't find the strength to look up

"I will do everything you say! If you'll say I'll le.ave" he choked "leave you alone for forever"

Zoya looked at her shocked

"But please Zoya give me one chance , one chance to be with you just one! I want to live with you happily" he pleaded

Zoya sit thinking. Pondering over every thing. Now when she had chance to decide she want the best for them. She composed herself.

"Let's forget it Asad! Forget whatever happened in this one year of our marriage. Let's start afresh" she said strongly

Asad looked at her shocked

"Don't pressure yourself Zoya. You can take time I don't want that you regret anything." He was confused at her sudden change of words

"I have decided it myself Asad." She looked in her eyes

He was melting in her strong gaze

"How can you be so good Zoya! You just decided to forget all that and live with me happily how?" It was true anyone would have been shocked at her sudden quick answer but maybe she knew better

"Because no matter what happened we are survivor! We survive from the demons that were ruling us. We are not victim but survivor" Zoya replied and walked away

She cried happily as she sit in the garden. She moved inside the mansion and call someone.

"Abu..." she cried as she heared her father voice

Her father was shock. It has been year he met or talk with his only daughter.

"Zoya... meri bachi! How are you?" His voice was shaking

"Am fine abu am alright." She said

"Zoya where is he?" He was concerned not for Asad but for his daughter

Zoya understood

"Abu, he apologised! He wanted a chance! He realised his mistake" Zoya had soft smile on her face

"Really? Am surprised that happened! But what did you replied?" He was curious

"I..I agreed!"

"Why? He is such a monster Zoya! Why did you agreed to live with him? " he was shocked

"Because I wanted to..." she replied shortly

"I'll talk to you later abu... Allah hafiz" Zoya cut the call quickly

Zoya closed her eyes as the past one year flows in the back of her mind like a movie. How Asad married her as a nice boy and then later showed his colours being strict to her. He wanted her to be only his so he caged her in this mansion and cutted out everything that could connect her to outer world. Didn't let her call or meet her father. He wanted everything according to his wish. If she tried to argue he would shout at her. She started to fear from him and slowly her own feelings died and tear dried. But Zoya knew there was more than what was happening and she knew that too...

"How should I tell you abu that how much I strived to live with him how much I tried to change him? How should I tell you that it was my fault too that he changed into such a monster? I can't left him in loneliness from where I brought him. Aur phr ab to mai chahte hoye bhi usse nhy chor skty" Silent tears fall down her cheeks as she clutched her stomach

Zoya was right! They had survived the pain they afflicted themselves to, now they have to just decorate their life with happiness.

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I know a very short OS that too baseless but I wanted to write a short story on this plot but don't wanted to write something as torturing Asad so just made it OS where he has changed.
Hopefully you guys will like it I know too much to hope for...

Asshi

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Originally posted by: ameena671

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Awesome OS Dear👏😊
I liked it only for ur writing. I did not liled Asad a bit even if he apologised. He was such a jerk n monster. Zoya sid have really divorced him instead of forgiving him. He trapped her in his love acting as nice but then showed his true colours. I will nit even want my enemies to live dis kind of life. Sorry, it was actually an emotional abuse.
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Kuch samaj nahi aya
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome OS Dear👏😊

I liked it only for ur writing. I did not liled Asad a bit even if he apologised. He was such a jerk n monster. Zoya sid have really divorced him instead of forgiving him. He trapped her in his love acting as nice but then showed his true colours. I will nit even want my enemies to live dis kind of life. Sorry, it was actually an emotional abuse.


Thanks juhi
I know I made Asad jerk and Zoya life hell but I left the reasons hint that there was more than what happened zoya would've left him immediately she knew she had got the ryt for decision but there was something else that hold her behind I didn't cleared the reasons I left it for readers to think about why Asad did what he did or why zoya forgave him though I gave the hints 😊
No sorry you are absolutely right from your point
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