Asya/Haira SS :Do Hassena Thi , Do Deewane The (Chap 4 Pg 16) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the first part
Thanks for the pm
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WOW!! beautiful start dear...loved it
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Chapter 2


Flashback

Sana and Zahra are busy preparing for the party "Di,I can't wait for the party" Sana smiled and went near Zahra and hugged her "Yes my doll, even I can't wait for the party" they both clicked a selfie




Haider and Asad come inside their room "Hello Your Highness, is everything alright and help is needed" Sana and Zahra smiled "No,nothing, the workers will do it ,you guys just wear this gift which we want you guys to wear " Asad and Haider smiled took their gifts

At the party

Haider and Asad wore suits which the girls gifted them and Zahra wore a stunning black saree and Sana wore a beautiful dress and Haider went up to her and took her hand "May I beautiful" Sana gives her hand and she puts her hand around his arm and Zahra smiles seeing this .Asad comes takes Zahra's hand "Senorita may I" Zahra blushes and she wraps her arm around his she walks down along with Asad.

The media takes pictures of theirs and they all pose for a pic and then both the couples go for a dance when all insist them .

Zahra got lost in Asad's touches and felt really romatic,she didn't knew what was happening to her ,shiver ran down her spine

Sana felt she was very passionate by his touches,it brought cold shiver into her .

Flashback Ends


Humaira was busy gardening at her house and one small girl came up to her and gave her the Rose "Di,this is for you" Humaira gazed at the letter and she read through




"Tumhari 440 volt ki smile mujhe bohot pasand hai" Humaira blushed, she thought it could be that man who saved her "Oh my Hero where are you ? Stop playing hide and seek with me "

Haider comes with a bouquet covering his face and he romatically sways the bouquet down "Hey beautiful" hearing beautiful, it brings a red blush on her cheeks and she shys by bringing the lashes down "This bouquet is for me ?"




Haider smiles "Yes it is " "You are very romatic I must say" Haider smirks and they both shake hands and they gazed at each other "Friends" they nodded in agreement.

*




Zoya was sitting on the bench of a park and busy checking her watsapp messages and waiting for Humaira's message "Ya Allah,Humaira mujhe message kyun nahi kar rahi ,I hope everything is fine ,para nahi kyun mujhe bure kayahalath aa rahe he" she makes a frown face ,suddenly Asad sings her fav song "Aaja mein haawaon mein betakein le chaloon, tu hi toh mera dost hain"

Asad shows a romantic gesture and bends on his knees and gives her the flowers "Dost? Mr.Khan you ? and thanks for this flowers by " her brows nitted in confusion. "Yes,me Miss.Zoya ,did you love my singing in a way of becoming friends" .

"Well Mr.Khan this way of expressing that you wanna become friends with me is very unique and very nice way of getting it done ,cause I am really awestruck by it and I do wanna become friends with you" Asad and Zoya shakes hand ,Zoya smirks evily and suddenly her phone beeps with a message "kaam hogaya Di,Mission Friendship pura!!" Zoya syly checks her phone and goes through the message .

Asad hints about it "Zoya you started with your phone, give our friendship a good quality time ,what message was it that you got engrossed so much" .Zoya stared at Asad giving a blank look "Oh..ya haan Mr.Khan it's actually my..my sister message that she called me home soon because she has ordered pizzas so she just asked me about the restaurant from which to order from ,so I just texting her that" Zoya texts Humaira to order pizza and she says also a phass gayi ,which indicates to Humaira about that it was neccessary to do so cause she tried to hide something and plus she even texted to Humaira in code words "bring him too" which means Haider.

*

Zoya come home with Asad and Asad is surprised to see Haider and a girl ,Asad goes near Haider "Haider you here not bad ,see where destiny brought us together where the sisters have brought us together .By the way whats you name ?" Asad gazes at the girl sitting besides Haider .

"My name is Humaira and what's your name ?" Humaira questions Asad and Asad smiles "My name is Asad Ahmed Khan" Humaira smiles and she then looks at Haider "Haider ,this is my sister Zoya?" Haider smiles "Nice meeting you Zoya,by the way I am Haider"




Zoya comes in between "If Introduction and Greeting is done ? then kindly let's have pizza ,Humaira can you join me in the kitchen"




Humaira smiles "Yes Di ,I am coming" Asad and Haider smiles .Humaira goes near Zoya "Di,I just can't wait to get near our ultimate goal ,our goal to take Sanam and Zidan from those devils " Zoya nods her head in agreement "Yes choti,I can't wait to get closer to them and take them from the devils.Come let's serve the devil's pizza".




Zoya and Humaira serves the pizzas to Haider and Asad .Zoya looks at Humaira and they both smile at each other thinking about their plan ,Asad and Haider smiled " What's the matter, what's so special that you both are smiling and gazing at each other ,something funny."

Zoya smirks "Mr.Khan it's nothing like that well please have the pizzas " Haider ,Asad ,Zoya and Humaira are busy having the pizzas .Haider cracks and a joke and they all started to laugh .Humaira laughs alot so much that she fell on to Haider while laughing and Haider and Humaira gazed at each other romatically.

Asad looked at Zoya "Isn't Haider and Humaira make a great pair what do you think?" Zoya stares at Asad "Mr.Khan what are you saying? How can a friendship be called love when they just met and love cannot happen so soon ?" Asad goes closer to Zoya "Zoya ,I have fallen in n love with you and it's love at first sight and my love is so true like Laila and Majnu and I am ready to give my life for you " Zoya was surprised "Mr.Khan ,please stop this .We are just friends and I feel our relationship should be till here itself and Mr.Khan I feel you need to leave ,you really spoilt my day by saying that you love me " .

Their small fight brought Haider and Humaira to reality and Humaira felt conscious of herself and she went near Zoya "Di,are you ok ,what's the matter ?" Zoya gazes at Humaira in a upset way "Humaira, this man is such cheap ,he started saying in a very filmy way that he loves me ,what the hell does he think how he just propose me like that"

Haider goes near Asad "Bhai,I feel we need to leave .It's not tge right time to speak,so let's go home ". Asad and Haider goes home disheartened.

Zoya and Humaira smirks and they both give a high five to each other.

*

Asad and Haider were walking on the pavement ,Haider goes near Asad " Bhai,I feel I am also in love with Humaira like how you love Zoya and I really feel Humaira is my true soulmate. I really love her and I can do anything for her but I am scared what she will react when she will come to know that I am a single father and I have a daughter named Sanam and what if she will ask me about who is my wife and how she died? " Asad agrees "Yeah same with me ,I too feel that what's gonna happen when they will come to know that we are single father's .I am of Zidan and you are of Sanam and the worst part that even though we will never tell them that we only killed our own wifes for money but if they get to know from somewhere else about Zarah and Sana's murder is done by us then we will land up in trouble".

*

Zoya smiles" Eventhough we know now both Asad I mean Mr.Khan and Haider are in true love with us but they don't know that we know about Sana and Zahra's murder is done by them and we even know about Zidan and Sanam ."

"Yes Humaira Di ,I too feel the same ,but it's nice to play with love for sometime"

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Loved chapter 2👏
Want Haider and Asad to be punished😡
Hope Humaira and Zoya don't fall in love with them😕
Eager for the next part.
Thank you beforehand for the pm😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
awesome chapter sid
loved it soo much
good job
thansk for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What goes around comes around...Those cheapos Asad&Haider cheated Zahra&Sana for money and even had children withthem...Atleast for the children they didnt retort back from killing SZidan&Sanam's mommies!!!!But they will surely pay for this when the children will leave them, Zahra&Sana come back, with Zoya&Humeira eventually ditching them...Nice game plan!!!Keep it coming!!!But pls update fastly...Thanks for d PM!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow wonderful update loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update. loved it.
asad n haider r single fathers of zidan n sanam.
zoya n humaira knows that asad n haider r single father and they only killed their wives.
waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one
Haider n Asad so smug thinking they've won over zoya and humaira
but the girls aint no fouls n have made the boys fall in love with them
hoping the girls succeed in punishin the boys but little part of me also hoping the girls can change them for the good
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Fb scene of asad zahra haider sana party scene was nice tho they are faking luv, sad that thry r only uding the girls 4 money n fame, plz show more fb scenes of thrm n their pix.haider n asad seeked asya humaira friendship thru roses song.but happy that these girls r only faking luv n not getting trapped in their luv like poor sana zahra.haimaira eye lock was romantic tho its fake.never thought thi asad will propose asya shamelessly, but asya rejecting n insulting him was cool.shocking that haider n asad had married sana zahra n they have kids too.then only they tried to kill their wives.how will they react when they come to know that they r not dead.it will b nice when they realize that the new siatees were cheating them.they r in true luv with asya humaira was least expected.this ff is very thrilling. Cant wait

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