New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: jas91
A spot 4 all my lovely readers🤗

Ashi, Aloo, Yumi, Rada, Tehsu, Trish, Aish (Aishwarya),Chandu darling,Mayur, Depu, Binnu, Shailu, Asif, Nilu, Aju, Anopama, Muskaan, Riddhi, Cutie, Nilu, Juhi, Linsie, Arpita,

& every silent reader who left a like on last updt😊

Hello Jas Darling 🤗

finally I am here... Thank you for the RES 😊

Coming to the update...it was beautifully written as always 👏

But it was unexpected twist in the tale...feel so sad for both of them...

now I wonder what is going to happen next...how they will reunite...

eager to know...

continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Hi Jas !!!
When will you update the next part ???
Eagerly waiting for it ... Please post it soon ...!!!

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Kya baat kya baat..
Yeh flashback waali story bade twist pe ruko thi..
Asad ne galat kiya tha Zoya ko nikal ke...

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Btw apni hi story ke link dhundna is so difficult 😆 😆

their should b a separate seq 4 this I feel kitna asaan ho jata 😳

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Kya baat kya baat..
Yeh flashback waali story bade twist pe ruko thi..
Asad ne galat kiya tha Zoya ko nikal ke...

Sometimes I feel bad main kitna slow hun

main reader toh mera kya haal hota sochke 😆

Waise Mayur u kabhi kuch likh na teri bhi iss kala ko sab dekhna chahenge 😛

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Just noticed ur seggy is cool RK ka dialogue lol 😆 powerful hai

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: jas91
Btw apni hi story ke link dhundna is so difficult 😆 😆

their should b a separate seq 4 this I feel kitna asaan ho jata 😳

Because aap khud reader hoo toh difficult hai warna kayi writers bahut kum stories follow karte haina...so unko yeh takleef nahi hoti hogi..

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: jas91
Just noticed ur seggy is cool RK ka dialogue lol 😆 powerful hai

I just love it...ek dum sahi hai

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: jas91

Sometimes I feel bad main kitna slow hun

main reader toh mera kya haal hota sochke 😆

Waise Mayur u kabhi kuch likh na teri bhi iss kala ko sab dekhna chahenge 😛

Nooo...mein comments main mushkil se words jamata hu...likhna bahut badi responsibility hai...
And you don't feel sad...u r a writer soo u have much bigger responsibility to give the best...so bas aap lage raho...hum aapke saath hai...

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Because aap khud reader hoo toh difficult hai warna kayi writers bahut kum stories follow karte haina...so unko yeh takleef nahi hoti hogi..

I know right dusron ki padke comnt bhi karni hai & khubki bhi 😆 but thing is main plots main achi hun but dialogues time atak jaati hun 😳

abhi ADHM main bhi yahi hua hai ending main kya baatchit ho wohi likhte nahi ban raha 😆