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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Linsie

2..

Zoya did not hear the full convo... and

all ready judge them...
Zoya is judgemental here

Zeenat is so mean... 😡 😡

how can she throw her dreams on her daughter..

Many children suffer due to such parents😔

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie


zoya is cold...

and her bad habits ...she turn to this cause of

zeenat...

asad hurt zoya cursing ... good



I can't say Zoya is a grey character but she is badly affected by her past
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Linsie


precap is good...



always clear with your story... to avoid any MU...

if you are getting it from somewhere cleared..

lately lot of the writer very pissed of...

with plagiarism...

and opening up blog for their stories...


Only dat Zoya-Zeenat school part is copied. Its actuallya 2-3 minutes scene out of 45 minutes episode of dat show. I don't mind revealing anything 4m where I lifted anything. In dat way, I will not be caught later n someone who is familiar wid wat I copied will get to know dat.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice updates
They all reached college. Zoya saw Imran giving bribe & thought all his friends was like that. She didn't hear asad & ria reply. Asad was shocked by her cold behaviour. They went to same hotel where Zoya & humeira did job. Song was nice. Asad feel the pain in her voice. She hate rich people & as far as her past revealed, it was justified. Curious to know what happen next. Update soon plz
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Thank u😊
Zoya really had some very disturbing issues wid her family😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice updates

So zoya is rich she come from richness and name brands
But she hates it all be cuz of her mother and brother
So he mother wanted to live her dreams through her daughter
A supermodel but zoya wants to design the clothes for the models
So seems zoya ran away after she turned 18
Oh boy Imran actions cause bad for all his friends in zoya eyes
So Asya met and bump fall and catch and eye lock
Asad is smitten but zoya is not giving him a chance 😊
Cont


Thank u😊
Zoya is neither a villain nor a grey character
She has just misconception abt rich people due to her past
Asad will someday lose his cool wid her rude behaviour😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome update
Loved it
Update soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariam1368

Superb start
Loved reading it
Looking forward to know what happens next


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4

Next morning, Karan comes to d suite to meet Zoya n Humeira n discuss wid them regarding their subjects in d college. Imraan who was walking around wid Ria sees Karan n comes to him.

"How can u come here widout money?" asked Imraan in a teasing tone.

"I came to meet my friends Zoya n Humeira," replied Karan calmly.

"U got dis place only to meet them. How come u r allowed here widout money? Have u came here on a lottery?" taunted Imraan.

Ria felt bad for him.

"Imraan, shut up. He said na he came to meet his friends. Stop troubling him," said Ria.

Humeira who saw d argument came.

"Wats going on?" asked Humeira.

"Ur friend came to meet u & Zoya in dis suite which does not suits his status," replied Imraan wid a laugh.

Zoya who was seeing all dis had enough n came there.

"U are a guest here so u sud be in ur limits n behave like a gentleman," said Zoya firmly.

"Oh so a poor girl who sings for money will teach me to behave like a gentleman ha," mocked Imraan n laughed.

Zoya felt hurt.

"Imraan, mind ur language," said Karan angrily.

"Wat wrong did I said?" asked Imraan, "She is a poor singer only na."

"U sud talk properly wid a girl," replied Karan.

"Don't teach me how to talk wid a girl," said Imraan.

"Enough Imraan, lets go 4m here," said Ria firmly.

Imraan nodded n left wid Ria 4m there. Karan, Zoya n Humeira were discussing abt their subjects n also talking abt other things. Asad n Ayaan came there.

"Before u both ask dat how come Karan came here widout money or whether he won a lottery lemme tell u both dat Karan came here to discuss abt our subjects," said Zoya.

"Why we will ask dat?" asked Ayaan.

"Can we also talk wid u as we have d same subjects?" asked Asad.

"No need to discuss wid us poor people. U better go n discuss wid ur rich friends like u," replied Zoya rudely.

"Why r u talking like dis wid us?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Wat have we done?" asked Ayaan shockingly.

"U both have not done anything but ur friend Imraan had done," replied Karan.

"Wat he had done?" asked Ayaan.

"Let it be. Why it will be matter to u?" asked Zoya.

"Karan, Zoe, its not their fault. Plz don't say anything to them," replied Humeira.

"Humi, I thought u r our friend not theirs," said Zoya.

"I am but its not right to say anything to anyone widout their fault," said Humeira.

"D people u r defending Humi will only hurt u," said Zoya.

"Enough," said Asad wid frustration, "I don't know wats ur problem wid us. U never talk properly wid us."(Finally, Asad lost his cool😆)

"U did not saw who has not talked properly wid whom," said Zoya rudely, "U can go n ask Imraan n Ria wat happened."

"Fine, we will talk wid them," said Asad n left wid Ayaan 4m there.

"Zoe, why r u always rude wid them?" asked Humeira.

"Cuz these rich people only knows how to put down people," replied Zoya.

"But they did not do anything," said Humeira.

"U will not know wen they will do sumthn," said Zoya.

Asad n Ayaan goes to Imraan n Farhan's room where all their friends were there.

"Imraan, did u said sumthn to Zoya n her friends?" asked Asad.

"Dude, let it be. Don't spoil our time talking abt them," replied Imraan coolly.

"We can't it. Ria, u tell wat happened," said Ayaan.

Ria told them everything.

"Imraan, its not right to tease anyone like dat," said Asad.

"I was only having fun," said Imraan.

"Its not right to make fun of someone's poverty," said Ayaan.

"Plz yaar, stop dis boring talk n talk abt our plans," said Imraan.

"Fine," said Asad reluctantly.

In d evening, it was party time. Everyone was dressed in clothes suitable for disco. Ayaan who came to d lobby wid his friends was mesmerized on seeing Humeira who instead of her white shirt n red mini-skirt uniform wore a short orange helter-neck dress.

"Hiii," said Ayaan wid a smile as he went to her.

"Hiii," said Humeira wid a smile.

"U r so different 4m ur akdu friend Zoya," said Ayaan amusingly.

"She is not bad. Don't say dat to her," said Humeira firmly.

"Sorry but she behaves like dat only wid us," said Ayaan.

"She hates rich people especially who r spoilt-brats," said Humeira.

"But why she hates them so much to talk rudely wid them always?" asked Ayaan.

"Don't know," replied Humeira, "But she is a great friend to us."

"Dat we all can see," said Ayaan.

Ayaan went to his friends after Asad called him. D orchestra group came on d stage. Zoya was wearing a black leather crop top wid black jeans. D music played.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mWzTZE-B1fM[/YOUTUBE]

Zoya started singing d original Disco Deewane song while moving her body.

Disco

(Disco)

(Disco Deewane)

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco Deewane)

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

Ho.

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

Nasheeli Hai Raat

Haathon Main Haath

Naachain Sitaaron Kay Saath

Sunder Badan

Yeh Chanchal Dahel

Naachain Gaayen Saath

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

Ho.

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

La La...

La La...

(Asad smiled hearing d song she was singing.

"Guys, she is singing d song d wrong lyrics," said Imraan.

"Dude, its d original song 4m 80s by Nazia Hassan. Its one of my favourite song. My mom used to love dis song a lot in her childhood days being her favourite song," said Asad.

"Even I know dis song," sai Aditi.

All d guests including Asad's group started to dance along wid d song. D employees to were dancing while doing their work.)

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

Ho.

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

Humari Awaz

Mohabbat Ka Saaz

Aao Saja Dain Yeh Naa

Jhoomay Qadam

Behaktay Qadam

Subho Ya Ho Raat

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

Ho.

Disco Deewane

Ahaan

Ahaan

La La.

La La La La...

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco Deewane)

Ho Ho.

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco Deewane)

Ho Ho.

(Disco)

(Disco)

(Disco Deewane)

(Zoya keeps on singing as everyone dances wid her.

"Its really a very amazing song," said Ayaan.

"Which is copied in SOTY," said Asad amusingly.)

Everyone clapped as Zoya finished singing.

Scene shifts to Farooqui Mansion. Zeenat was sitting in her room lukn sad. Anwar enters d room n Zeenat luks at him.

"Zoya ka kuch pata chala?" asked Zeenat.

"Tumhe kya farak padta hai?" asked Anwar rudely.

"Zoya meri beti hai," replied Zeenat.

"Agar tum use apni beti maanti to use itni takleef nahi deti," said Anwar.

"Anwar, I did not meant to hurt her," said Zeenat sadly.

"But u hurt her so much dat she left," said Anwar furiously, "Its been a month since Zoya left. Dunno know in which condition she will be. She is a child of just 18 years."

"I am worried for her," said Zeenat.

"I don't think so," said Anwar.

"Anwar, why r u saying like dis?" asked Zeenat sadly, "I was only thinking for her best."

"How can u decide wats best for her?" asked Anwar angrily, "U wanted to throw ur unfulfilled dreams on ur daughter even though she did not wanted dat but u always emotionally blackmailed her into doing wat u want 4m her."

"Its ur fault, Anwar," replied Zeenat angrily, "U did not let me fulfill me dreams. Ur parents n relatives did not wanted me to fulfill my dreams & u did not supported me."

"Oh really?" asked Anwar angrily, "I did not supported u? I stood against my own family to support u but u decided to sacrifice ur dreams to please my family. I told u again n again to do wat u want but u said u wanted others to be happy. And now, u r blaming me."

"U will not understand how society people including some of my friends ridiculed me of not being able to fulfill my dreams so I wanted to prove them dat I cud not do my daughter will do. But I did not knew dat due to all dis, I will lose my daughter," replied Zeenat sadly.

"2mrw, people will say sumthn else so to prove to them u will do sumthn else," said Anwar.

"Anwar plz, I am really sorry," said Zeenat.

"4m 2 years, u r after Zoya forcing harsh diet n exercise on her. I tried to stop all dis but due to ur emotional blackmail Zoya always defended u by saying she wants to bcum d supermodel. I wish I had known dat Zoya was doing all da against her wishes. Now, u must be sad not cuz Zoya left but cuz u cud not fulfill ur dreams thru Zoya," said Anwar.

"Anwar, its not like dis. I realized my mistakes," said Zeenat as tears came in her eyes.

"Don't shed crocodile tears," said Anwar rudely n left d room.

"Zoya beta, whereva u r plz come back. Plz forgive me," said Zeenat wid tears in her eyes.

Scene shifts to Seventh Heaven. Zoya was talking wid Humeira.

"Zoe, I find Ayaan so cute," said Humeira wid a smile.

Zoya was shocked hearing dis.

"Humi, I hope u don't fall for him. U don't know rich guys like him," said Zoya.

"Zoe, come one. He has not done anything wrong," said Humeira.

"R u having a crush on him?" asked Zoya.

"May be yes," replied Humeira.

"I want to be happy for u but hope he did not hurt u," said Zoya.

Humeira did not knew why Zoya was talking like dat.

"Humi, tum jis raaste se guzar rahi ho main vaha se guzar chuki hu," thinks Zoya sadly.

Unknown to them, Imraan was eyeing Humeira in a wrong way.

Precap: #Imraan corners Humeira on d 22nd floor wen she was going to her room commenting on how she is lukn so hot in her dress unlike her boring uniform. Humeira tries to leave but he holds her shoulder n tries to kiss. He feels a hard slap on his face making him leave Humeira. He turns around to find Zoya lukn angrily at him.

#Asad n his group left d same morning their college started. Imraan decides to take revenge 4m Zoya for his slap. He luks for an opportunity to find her alone in d college.


A/N: Zoya is neither a villain nor a grey character. She is acting rudely with only Asad and his friends as she had some really bad experiences among rich people in her past which makes her hate rich people.

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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really lovely update
The choice of songs is amazing
Update soon

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