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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Wow
What a start
From the prologue u had me interesested
Then the teaser and chapter of
I was like ok we have this madly in love guy
But he want to establish his career and be successful
Before he thinks of marriage
He was even ready to walk away from the love of his life if she didn't want to wait for him
The girl who was from first crush to BFF to gf
A girl who broke his walls could make him smile and forget his worries and make him poseessive
So being together forever and they never even kissed
And being teased by their friends they decides to give it a shot
Now zoya give an innocent kiss
But Asad got all hot and bother he wanted more and intense kiss and some foreplay
His hands got caught in the wrong place and it is on video and abt to be blackmail
Rajat can anyone be more nasty 😡
So zoya feels her life is abt to be ruin humiliated
Has no choice ready to go give rajat what he wants
HER
And poseessive Asad get all mad and say NO
He will fix it
And he propose her marriage
Now what will be zoya answer
And if yes
I hope it don't come back later to bite her or him
I hope Asad don't hate her down the road for holding him back
And thinking it is all her fault he couldn't reach his dreams his goals
Hope he remembers he was the one who couldn't stop at a simple kiss
Well tht is if u take the story tht way
Waitng impatiently
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Thanks for the PM.
The title...
They will become breathe for each other...Is there separation..??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
amazing start
very interesting
loved it
excited for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
why do i feel that Asad is gonna blame her n hate her for the marriage decision...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Amazing !!!!!
Asad wasn't ready for marriage...but one moment and everything changed in AsYa's life...
Now where this one decision lead their life ?? curious to read more...It was just Amazing...!!!!
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
wow.. what a twist. didnt expect tht
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Amazing is the only word
WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Oh my goddd
This was sooo awesome
I loved the concept
So excited to read it further
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Nice start dear
He love her & wanted to talk to her abt his career plan. They kissed & both lost in their own world. Didn't realise where they were. Hate that Rajat bas***d. Asad proposed her. Waiting for next update soon to know Zoya answer. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

sans 🤗 pehle to concept so close to real life. smthing we cud connect to . gud one on that . also i love the title breathe and talking of chappy 1 written fabulously i always love tra likha kuch bhi ho asad's pov is ryt .and fir one mistake they did to not control . rajat jese log fayda utha lete h just admirable how real this is great yaar will he marry her.. turn of events now love or career awesome u wrote cant wait fr next


yeah close to real life that's y difficult to write nd its not my type light hearted story I can write something like the secret crush very easily but the first chapter of Breathe took almost two days! r u sure I write good... I don't get flattered by non-realistic praising🤢 You won't get dinner when you come home today😡

Asad's character is a real man a part of my life! I have seen a relationship go through rough patch! now how and why I won't speak much wait for the story to unfold!

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