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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

f**kin Rajat

Yes Asad,

Marry her

😃

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-BeYourSelf-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Wonderful start.. Rajat z a f****** b*****..uughhh..
Loved d updt.. Plz continue..

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

you won't entertain ghosts 🤣 chal i want pms too. teaser prolouge ek number abhi gonna read chapter 1

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
you won't entertain ghosts 🤣 chal i want pms too. teaser prolouge ek number abhi gonna read chapter 1

abhi meine 400 PMs bheje can u believe?😲 adho ko kabhi dekha bhi nahi!🥱😆

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ajanshul
Amazing update
Asad was in Dillema to choose between his career N zoya
Rajat a f******g b******
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon :-))

He is still in dilemma and that's sad just hope that they don't suffer in future😒

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Amazing Start
First kiss😳
Rajat😡
Continue soon

Rajat is already getting many glares😆 yup first kiss nd the caught bad lime light Let's see kya hota hai!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
I am seriously at loss of words today
The dedication was totally unexpected and an extremely special gesture by you
Thankyou so much for it
Well commenting before pm just explains what amazing timing we have with your updates and my availability😉😆
But on a serious not, I love this sweet surprise by you
Thankyou once again a lot. It really means a lot to me😳

Coming to the update,
I had fallen in love with the concept of the story with the prologue itself
And the first chapter just explains that what an amazing story it is going to be
Asad wanting to establish his career at first and not ready for responsibility like marriage
There kiss was passionate and intense
And then the antagonist rajat and his cheap intentions
Asad proposing zoya for marriage at the end was unexpected
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story and what turns take place in the lives of asad and zoya
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please try to continue soon😊

Take care
Love you!🤗

well that crediting came in mind last moment, I myself don't know y I felt like to appreciate you😆 but I really pine for big comments and long reviews and when I get them it makes my day! I don't mind small readership but I want them all to give me reviews!<3

Thanks a lot, I have actually seen in many cases where a person has to make choice between marriage and career even my bhabhi, aunt and mom had to make compromises but why shud boys have all the fun?😆 so this is from where this idea popped out😳 and FF hai toh there will be drama for sure😈

Thanks again buddy!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: anuv6
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING...!!!
first when i read ur prologue , thought maybe they will separated
and somehow i'm really felt bad fr zoya bz i thought maybe asad will moveon bt not zoya
and nw when i read this chapter...i really feel so happy
and i'm so connected to the story now...yeah badly
even after the humiliation by that scoundrel rajat, i'm feel happy
bz the way u turned the story and proposal...
wherever asad there is no worries fr our zoya...
nw i'm sooo much curious and waiting fr nxt part
what will happen and what asad will do????
cont sooon as possible...

LUV ASYA AND MISSING THEM

well I have not thought about separation yet but maybe it will be there in sometime in future!😛 Even if Asad would have moved on the Zoya here a high spirited girl she will never ever moan on a rejection even if she loves that guy dearly... but AsYa will get married here in first few chap that's what I assure you😳 Asad loves Zoya and he will let nothing happen to her!

Thanks!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: binuuu
Hey sans🤗
Wonderful start dear...
Very interesting...
Yeh Rajat😡
What was atlast,Asad asked her to marry him😲
Actually he was not interested to marry her now,but Rajat incident made him change the decision
Continue soon dear...

Missed u Binns🤗

Yep they will marry soon the drama in true sens will begin only after that!😈 lets see kya hota hai!

will update asap!