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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

filter kr buddy list 😆
meko bhi krna h

feeling lazy to do that🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: DoremonLove

Hey thanks for pm
Coming to the first chapter it was written very well asad and zoya are childhood friends turned lovers
Asad has plans for his career hence he doesn't want to take. A big step of marriage so he decided he would talk with zoya
Asyas first kiss 😳 but rajat 🤬 cheapo now to save zoya from getting humiliated publicly he asked her to marry him
As asad hadn't decide on marriage but he will marry her now so its gonna be interesting to see how he manages it
Please do pm me for next chap


well that's the story all about that how do they make it, will they stay together or no!
Yeah that''s the tragedy actually ki it was their first kiss and it got filmed! guess Asad went slightly overboard Lets see what both do!⭐️

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

oh no
because of that b*****d Rajat Asad has decided to marry Zoya
but his dream career
looks like its turnin out as I thought
he will marry her but then resent n blame her for missin his opportunity to follow his dream
I just hope im wrong because Zoya doesn't deserve it plus he is the one suggestin the marriage
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


well maybe your gues is nearly correct but Asad does understand that he was at fault to he would have better got a room instead of a PDA, as it does make ppl uncomfortable plus it was their college not any mall or something and it turned worst that they were filmed!
Well Career is his first goal Asad will defo try to pursue it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

A different story. Wish to know what will Asad do with his career now.

Please update the next part.


Asad is a career oriented guy in love so lets see what he does!
Will update as I finish writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Part.😊
Asad(KSG) wanted to convince Zoya about his Dreams,it was so Nice.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Romance was so Cute.😳
But,that Rajat😡 spoiled everything..
It was so sad to see Zoya like that.😭
Asad(KSG) decided to marry Zoya,it was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.


Thanks for the comment Priya, your long comments always fascinates me!
Glad you found it interesting and liked the read<3 Ofcourse they were caught in compromising position thus it was a shame for both!
Lets see what marraige does to them!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: neasya

Nice start...

Asad wanted to start his career on his own ...
He did not want baggage with him for the ups and dwns he woud face during this entire setup f his career...
Both lost heir control and it was recorded... uff can't they be carefull..
Now will they marry each other...
I think Asad will blame her for every wrong that would happen with him in future...
Waiting for next part pls continue soon.


Asad is equally responsible for the cause and he knows it! he defo want his career lets see what marraige puts them through!

Thanks for reading<3
Edited by -Fleurdelice- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Fabulous Start

Asad wanting to establish himself first and now in a dilemma
as to what to chose first his career or Zoya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow

What a start
From the prologue u had me interesested
Then the teaser and chapter of
I was like ok we have this madly in love guy
But he want to establish his career and be successful
Before he thinks of marriage
He was even ready to walk away from the love of his life if she didn't want to wait for him
The girl who was from first crush to BFF to gf
A girl who broke his walls could make him smile and forget his worries and make him poseessive
So being together forever and they never even kissed
And being teased by their friends they decides to give it a shot
Now zoya give an innocent kiss
But Asad got all hot and bother he wanted more and intense kiss and some foreplay
His hands got caught in the wrong place and it is on video and abt to be blackmail
Rajat can anyone be more nasty 😡
So zoya feels her life is abt to be ruin humiliated
Has no choice ready to go give rajat what he wants
HER
And poseessive Asad get all mad and say NO
He will fix it
And he propose her marriage
Now what will be zoya answer
And if yes
I hope it don't come back later to bite her or him
I hope Asad don't hate her down the road for holding him back
And thinking it is all her fault he couldn't reach his dreams his goals
Hope he remembers he was the one who couldn't stop at a simple kiss
Well tht is if u take the story tht way
Waitng impatiently
Cont


Ohh God I so Love you Ano for this comment🤗 you pointed out everything so perfectly and correctly!

How will I take this story is still under wraps I guess you will have to wait for it, as everyone here guesses maybe Asad will slightly blame Zoya but defo he knows he is at fault to so he won't put it all on her only! I hope I am making sense🤔 but I just want to tell Asad know he is at fault too that's it!

Their life will defo take twists and turns lets just wait and watch😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: neasya

Thanks for the PM.

The title...
They will become breathe for each other...Is there separation..??


Maybe, I still haven't planned for them staying apart from eachother but they will take their own space for sure!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

why do i feel that Asad is gonna blame her n hate her for the marriage decision...

its very normal to think that way! No worries you will come to know abt it soon and yes maybe they will have arguements over their decision of marraige!
Thanks!

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