*New* AsYa OS 'Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan' - Page 6

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Emotional one Ashi
Feeling sad for Zoya. I knew the pain which person felt after that type of incident in life but life goes on. We should be brave & face the truth of life. Pray for that girl that she will cope up & move on in her life.
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Linsie

Beautiful banner
nice and sad update

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

ye acha analyse ki tu...i roya matlab mast sad...😆 waisa sahi h hai ye bhe😉

muwah❤️

Originally posted by: Amin21

Really love it as a story but reading the note and know it's a true story so felt really bad for the girl.

The best part was that whatever happens it's for people's own good

Just a request please update it's part two and write about asad's pov

Waiting😊

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

🤗😭

U actually made me cry and all emotional..

And what you wrote is true that no one can understand what she must have gone through...

Rest I can't say much here but it was beautifully penned down and I could imagine each and every scene in real..😒

Banner was just perfect..too good.

Loved the attempt..

And I don't know what else to say.

Thanks for writing this.

I hope the girl in real has coped up by now.

Originally posted by: suganti

beautiful os.

zoya's emotions was described beautifully..brilliant.

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

binshi... asad didn't do anything yaar... we don't know his POV so we can't blame him

yeah we can hope zoya move on ASAP

In Sha Allah

thank you so much for a lovely review

Originally posted by: binuuu

Yeah..that's also correct...

But what about this sudden decision..y r they not bothered about telling the reason to Zoya...

Yeah...In Sha Allah...

My pleasure ashii😃

Originally posted by: Aimer_vous

Superb dear👏

Dearest Ashii 😊 😊
First of all really sorry for the late reply 😭 😭
Was a bit busy due to exams .
Coming to your OS , it was a treat to read your OS. 👏
👏 for the banner .
Its just beautiful . Loved it .
The OS was such a heart touching piece.
Amazingly written and beautifully portrayed every bit of OS .
It takes a lot to write such piece and you have done it so well.
I just felt while reading that you have written this by putting your feets in Zoya's shoes.
The way you showed Zoya's excitement for her marriage , the way she falls for him ,that 26 days ...
Truly great job 👏 👏
Zoya's pain after her parents said , "Its over"
Beautifully written Zoya's monologue .
I do know it is one shot but would love to read its continuation if you wish to write 😊 😊
Stay blessed and Keep writing .
- Harshada