*New* AsYa OS 'Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan' - Page 7

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

thank you so much bestu

i'm glad meri effort rang laayi 😛

P.S reema really did a great job

Originally posted by: jas91

Thanku😲
han rang laayi 👏 but girl need 2 stop thinking over it now

Undoubtedly its fab😉

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

to be honest i don't know the story of other side

girl's story effected me so much that i decided to put it in words

so don't know Asad's POV at all

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Dearest Ashii 😊 😊
First of all really sorry for the late reply 😭 😭
Was a bit busy due to exams .
Coming to your OS , it was a treat to read your OS. 👏
👏 for the banner .
Its just beautiful . Loved it .
The OS was such a heart touching piece.
Amazingly written and beautifully portrayed every bit of OS .
It takes a lot to write such piece and you have done it so well.
I just felt while reading that you have written this by putting your feets in Zoya's shoes.
The way you showed Zoya's excitement for her marriage , the way she falls for him ,that 26 days ...
Truly great job 👏 👏
Zoya's pain after her parents said , "Its over"
Beautifully written Zoya's monologue .
I do know it is one shot but would love to read its continuation if you wish to write 😊 😊
Stay blessed and Keep writing .
- Harshada

Originally posted by: binuuu

Ohh...

Then it's okay ashii...koi ni...