*New* AsYa TS : The Ties Of Heartbeatsl completed l Last part pg13 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
riddhi 🤗

le tere liye



🤣
🤣

i seriously love you yaar
armaan ka song aur wo bhi itne beautiful se concept pe bethaya tune
i loved reading this seriously
written beautifully
start was gripping enough and thats where my interest lies everytime there's a question at the start of the stry
so i guess kuch mangalpuri si stry h
and kuch mishap hui
i love love mangalpuri track
abhi qh me bhi wohi dekhing na 😆
to full on mood me hu haha
so tune bohat acha likha
and how the flashback starts
asya ke bich ki convos bohat enjoy ki read karte waqt
somehow improper hi sahi
that was cute and natural



and m so curious ki kya hua asad ko
abhi mai last part ke baad lamba comment dungi
kabhi net ni chalta aur kabhi ye bhai pichepadta hai

but really wanna thanku u
ki net tera bhi nahi chala but u called and u did so much
made me happy 😃😃


love you ❤️
update soonish ok


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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Amazing start ridzz...👏👏
Totally loved this first part😃
Asya's encounters...Masha Allah...those were superb👏
Loved Asad's nature...
Loved the way their friendship formed...
And that changed to love...
Aww. ..zoya's didn't go there...bechara Asad
His surprise ruined
Hope that will take a proper decision and gaffur will accept their wish..
Ek minute...ek minute...Is gaffur the reason for asya's this condition😡
And humeirah's trick went very well...he believed her😆
About Rashid and Dilshad...I think asad experienced the love and care within some minutes which he never got from his parents...
Waiting to know what happened next...
Plzz update soon...😊😊
Edited by binuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Great work..
Awesome..!
Loved it..
Curious to read how they ended up in jail..?
Is there any other connection between Dilshad and Asad..?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Very Good part Riddhi.. It was intriguing as well...would love to read more..
Continue soonish..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
beautiful update... very nice👏
i luvd it.
Looking forward to know what happens next
continue soon... waiting impatiently😊

LUV ASYA ( KABHI ) FOREVER❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
First I want to cry .. Me kise dekh ri Hun meri pumpy 😭😭😭
Ages baad .. God I can't believe it's u .. Pumpy I missed u like anything .. N Teri story I m really up for it 😃😃
Next post about the ts ..
I really wanted to post this reply .. Still miss every fun we had .. U aishu, reema Di everyone ..

Love u pumpy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Pumpy it's so damn interesting articles to it .. It's just outstanding ..
Perfect command of language 👏👏

It's beyond beautiful

Love
Niyati
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Hey riddhi
My doll thanks for dedication🤗

Love you❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Pumpy ki Di!!
I missed u too!!🤗
Sid k dp
Mee too
U me Reema Di aishu Di enoi rosy Di faru Di everyone!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Love u too rasmalai!!!
Kya karing?

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