#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#281

brilliantly written..the way the emotions were portrayed in the update literally gave me goosebumps...interesting...👏

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

I know I didn't unres the last comment
I'm so sry..
Dil se sorry
But i guess i wont be unressing because I seriously have no words
This is such a painful story
And you have written it so so well..!
It is like so amazing
I'm so loving the twists and turns
So emotional and awesome
Such a different concept
I cant wait to read more
Kudos to you
I so wanna know asad and zoya's story
How zoya ended in such a trouble
And ol the questions
Update sooon
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Poonam

@Buddhu_Sa_Mann

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#283

hi. i was away due to exams. coming back read chapter 3 and 4
extremely well written parts and i am in love with the flow this plot took to carry forward. next update jalsi se do

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#284

This was absolutely adorable

And I really loved the way Azaam and Asad are portrayed

Beyond the height of cuteness

Azaam is seriously sooo adorable

N asads whole thing is awesomely written

I loved it!!!

Sanjay n Asad especially

Amazing

Ramprasad was funny indeed

But everyone seems to grow fond of Azaam

I don't think so zoya azaam k real mum hai bcoz he said Mumma and mum

Azaam and zoya were pretty cute

I loved the chapter

Awesome

Amazing

I loved that so much

Everything is a delight to read

Loved the chapter

Brilliant part

Eagerly waiting for next

Thanks for the pm!

Hey I dont know ur name(TheNamesV)...but thanks for the images

Great choice!!!

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#285

And yes how is Asad responsible for whatever zoyas condition is

And zoya jail kese pohachgayi

N minister and zoya kese involved hue

Whose azaams actual mother

N actually zoya and asad alag kyu hue?

n all the leftover mysteries...

Sab upar se gaya

Plzz jaldi se tell na

Actually story padhte waqt me bhul gayi kyunki itna adorable chappies hote hai

N jab padhne k bad aage ka socho tab yaad ata hai

Update soonishesty

Edited by riddhi1206 - 9 years ago

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CaptainV

@CaptainV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Unres-ed

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Ihopelove

@Ihopelove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Amazing update.

Sanjay and asad bonding is really good, how sanjay found asad, asads pain very well written.

So asad is responsible for zoyas condition. He should have find the truth before taking case for money. Its really disgusting. Framing innocent people for money. Well at list he got his lesson. I hope he won't do something like that in future.

Some people use their profession for wrong doings just so they could have money and luxurious life. Disgusting.

Azam And asads talk was emotional.

Curious for next part.

Update soon. Thanks for pm.

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#288

Hello Humpty Dumpty...😳😊.

Again an Intriguing and a Well written part Ankieee...👏😊

Well Coming to the update...we got to know much more about Asad the man , about his childhood I mean what happened in his past...though still past mysteries are to be unraveled but yes...that was such a sad scene when Sanjay his uncle found him on a road crying...

And then the next thing...I know in a way Asad feels he is responsible for Zoya's current state...but I was wondering ki if this was done in court premises , then how come Asad didn't had any idea about the fact that to whom he has to wrongly frame in order to protect his client's A$$ 😡...I mean details toh exchange hote honge na...and did Zoya knew about this very thing that she is being framed by Nilesh Yadav's ( THAT WAS CLOSE FOR A NAME 😆 ) Lawyer Asad Ahmed Khan...that is why she said to Azam that only Asad can help her...and from their this all started...

And the Uncle's part of Anger also I understand...but this is not the first time he got to know what Asad do...but why this one is disgusting even though Asad didn't had any idea about the person supposedly he was framing wrongly...😡🤪😆

The only cute part was between Prasad and Azam...Ramsad is funny name...😆 but Ram Prasad bhi naukaron wala naam nhi laga...😆

The scene in the hospital room between Azam and Asad was very well emoted and written too...👏...but haan meko aisa kyun lag raha hai ki pehli baar mein aisi ASYA story padh raha hu jismein 4 updates hoogaye par Zoya ne kuch bola hee nhi...Zoya kab uthegi...pehle aayi ni...aur ab uth nhi rahi hai...jaldi theek karo usko...

All and All an Excellent update...and this is making us crave for me without any wait...so hamari Bardasht ki Hadd ko challenge na kijiye...🤣

Continue soonish...

# Thanks for the RES too...😳

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#289

I really am LOVING the way readers who are interested are SO INVOLVED with the story.

@ihopelove : That is what I wanted to establish. I had already mentioned Asad did things wrong. Though he could have taken the harder way to success but he chose what seemed more luxurious. But he isn't a bad guy. He has his own baggage of guilt. Rest awaits is redemption. :D Thank U.

@mayur : Tatti! I liked how you pointed out Why he had no idea who was the other person. I had waited like EVERYONE to point it out. 😆 Anyway the answer is that he had helped to frame not fought a case or court trials. That's why Zoya didn't have a lawyer. Catch was there in the magistrate scene 😉 Kyun Kab Kahan Kaise... I guess ab toh andaza agaya hoga when that will be revealed 😉

Ahaha she didn't speak a word right? She spoke too much in past. Bahut bahut bahut zyada. That's why she hasn't spoken much 😆 DONT WORRY once she starts speaking again u will only want her to shut up. Like Asad 🤣 Thank U once again 🤗

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#290

Also * Uncle had an idea what Asad was doing that's why he was like in a foul mood with him. But it was a shocker for him to see Asad could go to such an extent. Catch scene---> Asad had gone too far in saving the politicians' kin...

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