#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13) - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
so asad is responsible fr zoya's condition
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏👏👏

Excellent update...

The emotions bang on..loved it very very very much...

The way you described Asad and his emotions and his state is just awesome...

Prasad is getting more footage here compared to other stories...

But I like it.. One more thing I noticed Prasad has prASAD in his name🤣

Azam the cutie pie...and ankie 😆dint leave your love for stationeries here too🤣


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
i am late in commenting this time
going to update its beautiful
asad brought zoya hospital
his uncle is upset with him
i loved prasad and azam scene where the child called him Ramsad
poor azam has to face her mother in such bad condition
asad is guilty
does zoya knew that asad is responsible for her misery in zail?
waiting for the story unfold what the politition's son did to zoya and why?
update soon this time
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
@teh : LOL that wasn't the intention but yea. I loved loved loved Mr Clean colors I had like a HUGE SET of all their colors. All the shades and types. Sketchpens Crayons Wax Crayons and I think I still do. 😆 yea I do. I did show you 🤣
P.s. next chapter we have borrowed something from you. We know u won't mind 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
@cutie - Nash it's not a sad story it has EVERYTHING in it. More of an Action Romcom :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

finally u updated
loved it
apne dil pe bada sa pathar rakh ke i ve to admit dat asad is beyond disgusting . .he framed zoya ...abhi wen zoya cums to know ...she ll also blame asad ...n ny heart ..sth ll happen to it
plz update jaldi dena baby
thanks for pm

n res ke liye 🤗



U were very angry with me with the promo but you know I always provide a suitable justification 😆 I wanted him to do worse but then Asad being Saurav was unsettling for me even to think 😆
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you Amina Raspi Nilu Riddhi and everyone else who have commented also alwaysasya :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Also * Uncle had an idea what Asad was doing that's why he was like in a foul mood with him. But it was a shocker for him to see Asad could go to such an extent. Catch scene---> Asad had gone too far in saving the politicians' kin...

This Answer only reminded me of one thing...
You being Uncle...Kajol being Asad and this case being #DILWALE...😆
If you know what I mean...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I really am LOVING the way readers who are interested are SO INVOLVED with the story.

@ihopelove : That is what I wanted to establish. I had already mentioned Asad did things wrong. Though he could have taken the harder way to success but he chose what seemed more luxurious. But he isn't a bad guy. He has his own baggage of guilt. Rest awaits is redemption. :D Thank U.

@mayur : Tatti! I liked how you pointed out Why he had no idea who was the other person. I had waited like EVERYONE to point it out. 😆 Anyway the answer is that he had helped to frame not fought a case or court trials. That's why Zoya didn't have a lawyer. Catch was there in the magistrate scene 😉 Kyun Kab Kahan Kaise... I guess ab toh andaza agaya hoga when that will be revealed 😉
Ahaha she didn't speak a word right? She spoke too much in past. Bahut bahut bahut zyada. That's why she hasn't spoken much 😆 DONT WORRY once she starts speaking again u will only want her to shut up. Like Asad 🤣 Thank U once again 🤗

See the thing is...
Even when a serial / hired killer is appointed to kill someone...they will atleast see the photo and name of that person and then ask one of his side kick to do the deed...same aise hee yeh court matter hai...watch #JOLLY LLB
Ab aise darao mat warna...Zoya ke baarein mein mere khaayalat badal jayenge..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
@tatti -- ASAD ISN'T KAJOL FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE 🤣
As per the other one. Trust the writer. 😆

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