#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13) - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Gulaabo

Azooo! I love the baby. PERIOD.

U were right that it was really refreshing to read about Lion Ahmed Khan after so long

Now I have two things to wait for...

What the nurse will do to make Asad pay for his 'deeds'

Mummy hunt ka intezaar

And yes more chocolate moments between asoo n azoo

Continue soony

P.S- though I am late but I know Ankie the Alien will forgive me


Gulabbooo Zara itaar girado
Yo rabbit!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
OHH MYY!! I am late

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ratings :-⭐️
Well,Ankie isn't this is enough ??😉
Oh, My Ankie You Beauty...
What a Start Baby !!
*I am Speechless*😳
KUDOS !👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I know its early to ask for update
but still update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
-Arpita-- thank u 😊
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Linsie thank u 😊 i really liked the gif 😊
anopama thank u 😊 hope u r not facing any probs with the hindi dialogues any-more 😳
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Hooman Phir bhi nahi game kheling tere saath 😡 😆
Pet ab kare kya.. padh lee.. then hazir ho jaa 😛 😆



Originally posted by: Amin21

Lovely update

Asad and nurse's convo part( if we can say it convo😆)
Was very funny🤣
Love the whole update but want the next update soonish and to be a long one😊
Waiting


Thank U but @Bold : I dont think it was FUNNY or meant to be funny.. but anyway 😳


Originally posted by: mochhug

I know you've only done two chapters, but I think this is gonna be one of my faves in the story. The way Asad's heart melted for Azam and his pleas was heart warming and heart breaking all at the same time.

So much love! I'll melt into a puddle now ☺️


And 🤣 at Dr. Mehta for putting Asad in his place. At least someone can scold him when he needs it lol. I hope the nurse isn't too harsh on Asad. I mean after seeing them cuddled up like that

That part was meant to be. kuch zyada seriousness ho gaya tha.. what do we call it in the language of lit? Yep right Comic relief.. but not always 😉 we shall see whose harshness affects him.. ever.. 😆


Can't wait to read more of this story 😳


Originally posted by: Prizi

itna chotu part?????
bt awesum che


was it THAT small 😳


Originally posted by: MayurChan

Coming to the Update...

Iss bandey ko tumne bhi MCP kehdiyaa...😲😲

Maine kahan kaha? Nurse ne bola. 😕 kaam hi kuch aisa he had done 😆


Maine nhi socha tha ki yeh word mein yahan bhi dekhunga..🤪...but khair...jaane anjane mein Asad se galti hui zaroor hai...and usko yeh daant deserve hoti hai...Uske Uncle se bhi..


80% deliberately he did. Chant hai woh.. baki tu soch le 😈


Baki ab Yeh Azam ki "Mama" apne darshan kab dengi...


Shayad kabhi nahi? Kya pata hai bhi ya nahi who knows 😲



I can't wait to read more of this...
Very well written part...
Continue soonish...😃
# waise Asad ne office room mein ghuste hee Prasad ko kya kaha tha ki fire the A$$hole who locked that boy here ri8...and then infront of his uncle he accepted that he was responsible for all of this...so ab meko yeh poochna tha galti kiski thi...and ab kaun naukri se jayega...uss watchman ki toh nhi thi...atleast.😕😆



Answer is... there are people mostly security guards who mostly check the whole place once before pulling the shutters down.. and he wanted them to be fired.. just like your flat ke guard 😉




Originally posted by: Persiko

Abhi I want to read moreee... Asad at least came back and saved Azam but where is Azam's mother?! so many questions are there and I have no patience!

Ha ha patience my child patience. 😆 i still need to write two chaps before i update 😆




Originally posted by: riddhi1206

This is sooo awesome SO IS YOUR COMMENT thank u 😊

The prologue... Its sooo cute...azams dialogues were so cute and funny aww thanks even me n V love Azaam so much that we feel like eating him most of the times 😆
I want that kid!!! even we do.. alas he is a kid lost in fiction while we are lost in reality 😆
Okay the first chapter... Asad seems so rude! Okay never mind...
Chalo lawyer he is ...
N azam is sooo much wala adorable!! yes indeed 😳
Determined
Is zoya his mother? we shall know 😳
N asad related hai kya? we shall know. 😳
But Azaam is one cute little thing... i know 😳
And I lovee that chappy so much...yeshh it was just for the base and start but still azaam ki vajah se it wasss solo adorable...funny indeed...means that can make u smile...each and every dialogue is well penned with realistic features... thank u 😳
Second chapter me honestly the best part was their cuddling up in sleep.. aww i think everyone is waiting for that day isnt it? 😳 😉
Something which is a visual treat!! aww thanks. 😊
An awestruck moment!
And the way his concern is written is absolutely perfect...in the character and not the sudden change! thanks.. 😊
Sanjay n asad was cute they will be even cuter.. opps too much i revealed 😛
N his staff seems to be mast ekdum sexy is the word more people to come.. 😛
The nurse chipka dala ekdum! chipka diya fevicol se 😉 😆
N all those AsZaam moments were so cute n supa adorable!! thanks 😳
Oh no! I wanted to read that...
This is one awesomeee story thank u 😊
The way it is penned is absolutely fabulous n perfect thank u 😊
Gradual changes ...
Its a delight reading this..
Plzzz update soonishesty!!!


Ek aur sawwal ...
Asad zoya are related kyunki title se mujhe kuch laga.. 😆 i'll reveal the truth behind the title when i post the epilogue 😆
Par uska jawab mujhe malum hai Abhi nahi milega let's see if u r close by 😳
Kam horahi hai asad aur azaam ki duriya, faasle nhi hai darmiya...badal raha hai vo Jo kabhi badla na...
kya hai asad zoya ka raaz
Kon hai azaam
Kya rishta hai uska sabse
Kaha hai zoya
Kya asad ka hai koi raaz
Kyu hai vo ESA
Kya azaam badal paega asad ko
Jaane k liye bane rahiye kyunki har sawal ka jawab sirf yaha aur kaha!!
Tantannan

waah waah waah... 👏
Stay tuned 😆




Originally posted by: allwaysasya

I know its early to ask for update
but still update soon

not at all early to ask for but yes i need to write two more and update on saturday morning? 😳

Originally posted by: The_Ipsita

Ratings :-⭐️ buss ek? 😭

Well,Ankie isn't this is enough ??😉
Oh, My Ankie You Beauty...
What a Start Baby !!
*I am Speechless*😳
KUDOS !👏


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Posted: 9 years ago
zyada patience ke wajhese patient na banjaun!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Poor azaam 😒 thank god asad realized n went back to see azaam asad was guilty he thought it was a childish prank of azaam asad so concerned for azaam how sweet very nice update
What about azaams mom ?
Waiting for next part sorry for being too late to comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm even for replies. Waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
so are we getting update on tomorrow morning as promised?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yes! Everyone is getting one. :D provided there is not much of distractions outside ;)

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