#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13)

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Monica

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

I know you've only done two chapters, but I think this is gonna be one of my faves in the story. The way Asad's heart melted for Azam and his pleas was heart warming and heart breaking all at the same time.

And 🤣 at Dr. Mehta for putting Asad in his place. At least someone can scold him when he needs it lol. I hope the nurse isn't too harsh on Asad. I mean after seeing them cuddled up like that

Can't wait to read more of this story 😳

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Priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

itna chotu part?????
bt awesum che

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

What is the res res game everyone plays? even me wants to..

Res for V - DMG - Teh - Tatti - Teddy - Pet - Sue Lue Tue - Sona Dee - Shanatic Bibi (winks*) also Noddle mama 😆

baki bolo kin kin logo ke liye karrooon 😆

p.s. i am NOT playing res-res with you HOOMAN coz MERI MARRR-ZII! 😳

Thank U for the RES 😃

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Coming to the Update...

Iss bandey ko tumne bhi MCP kehdiyaa...😲😲

Maine nhi socha tha ki yeh word mein yahan bhi dekhunga..🤪...but khair...jaane anjane mein Asad se galti hui zaroor hai...and usko yeh daant deserve hoti hai...Uske Uncle se bhi..

Baki ab Yeh Azam ki "Mama" apne darshan kab dengi...

I can't wait to read more of this...

Very well written part...

Continue soonish...😃

# waise Asad ne office room mein ghuste hee Prasad ko kya kaha tha ki fire the A$$hole who locked that boy here ri8...and then infront of his uncle he accepted that he was responsible for all of this...so ab meko yeh poochna tha galti kiski thi...and ab kaun naukri se jayega...uss watchman ki toh nhi thi...atleast.😕😆

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Nice update

So asad guilt took him back to find azam

I am guessing to be zoya child he uas dimples

So love the scolding asad got

So he promise to find azam mama

Cont soon

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Abhi I want to read moreee... Asad at least came back and saved Azam but where is Azam's mother?! so many questions are there and I have no patience!

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rajsmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Interesting story...Please update me with this story. Thanks!

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

This is sooo awesome

The prologue... Its sooo cute...azams dialogues were so cute and funny

I want that kid!!!

Okay the first chapter... Asad seems so rude! Okay never mind...

Chalo lawyer he is ...

N azam is sooo much wala adorable!!

Determined

Is zoya his mother?

N asad related hai kya?

But Azaam is one cute little thing...

And I lovee that chappy so much...yeshh it was just for the base and start but still azaam ki vajah se it wasss solo adorable...funny indeed...means that can make u smile...each and every dialogue is well penned with realistic features...

Second chapter me honestly the best part was their cuddling up in sleep..

Something which is a visual treat!!

An awestruck moment!

And the way his concern is written is absolutely perfect...in the character and not the sudden change!

Sanjay n asad was cute

N his staff seems to be mast ekdum

The nurse chipka dala ekdum!

N all those AsZaam moments were so cute n supa adorable!!

Oh no! I wanted to read that...

This is one awesomeee story

The way it is penned is absolutely fabulous n perfect

Gradual changes ...

Its a delight reading this..

Plzzz update soonishesty!!!

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Ek aur sawwal ...

Asad zoya are related kyunki title se mujhe kuch laga..

Par uska jawab mujhe malum hai Abhi nahi milega

Kam horahi hai asad aur azaam ki duriya, faasle nhi hai darmiya...badal raha hai vo Jo kabhi badla na...

kya hai asad zoya ka raaz

Kon hai azaam

Kya rishta hai uska sabse

Kaha hai zoya

Kya asad ka hai koi raaz

Kyu hai vo ESA

Kya azaam badal paega asad ko

Jaane k liye bane rahiye kyunki har sawal ka jawab sirf yaha aur kaha!!

Tantannan

Stay tuned 😆

Edited by riddhi1206 - 9 years ago

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Azooo! I love the baby. PERIOD.

U were right that it was really refreshing to read about Lion Ahmed Khan after so long

Now I have two things to wait for...

What the nurse will do to make Asad pay for his 'deeds'

Mummy hunt ka intezaar

And yes more chocolate moments between asoo n azoo

Continue soony

P.S- though I am late but I know Ankie the Alien will forgive me

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