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ritikaRatz

@ritikaRatz

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#171

..i dnt knw wt to say...it ws..beyond wt i cn put into wrds..i hv nvr cried in a story...bt u managed to do tht with d last part...
p.s...i rd it almost in one go...nddd its my frst comment everrr...
p.s.s...hv u evr thot f writing a book or smthng...bcoz...ur sooo good...xoxo..
love
ritika

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: MayurChan
RES for Choco and Nims..😊

Thank you Mayur 🤗

Sis Ab mein kya boloon. As emotional as this update was, still it was beautifully written. Emotions that every character felt were so well described that they directly reached my heart. The love that Asad and Zoya felt for each other, the pain that they were going through, the emotional turmoil and the impending separation that they were aware of was describe described in simple yet heart touching words.

My heart constructed with pain buy only imagining what the whole family went through. It must have been painful not only for Zoya but for everyone around her to see the inevitable approaching so quickly. I cannot explain what she must have felt knowing that she will not live on to see her child grow to see what Karan as a father would be like. It must have been equally heartbreaking for her to see her family going through the same pain as she was. If she was dreading her end then so were they. It's not easy for anyone to see there loved ones health deteriorating.

As painful as this story was it was equally beautiful . Hands down you are an amazing writer who even with a sad ending is capable of keeping the reader engaged until the last word. You know that I I am not fond of sad ending but I am a sucker for happy ones. The brilliance with which you write makes me want to read till the end even though I know that my asya will not be together till the end.

As always I loved reading this piece of brilliance and can only wait for the next one. I know you are taking a break and I hope it is not a long one and you come back soon with a new story for us.

Love you loads my superstar. Mmwaahh!!!!

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#173

No words for ur amazing superb writing skills..the way u portrait ur ffs it was purely awsm
U think this ff is going to be my one of my fav on IF and qubool hai forum.
Realllyyy luvd it.
Part was superb awsm.
I have tears while reading this.
Superbly amazing work done by u dear.
Plzzz do write more ffs...
Thnx for all the pm u sent.
T.c

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#174

superb loved it

really emotional

perfect ending but i hope if you let zoya alive

thanx for pm

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

I jst cried at last.
Dnt knw wht 2 say.
No words bt thnks 4 ths beautiful story.

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Di 🤗
i love love the updates
Those three were like ki ek bacche ko choclate de di jaaye aur phr cheen li jaaye 😆
For i felt like that
First two updates were so full of happiness that i almost expected ki a miracle wud happen and aap zoya ko bacha loge and will give a happy end jb karan ko avantika samjha ri thi
But di teesri update to aapne kya kiyaaa
okay no blaming u coz that was a part of story and though it made me cry so much
I really appreciate the turn up u put in that is zoya leaving back zara ...and asad writing desert rose
So it was nice updatee...can a reader feel the pain of characters ...
Yea when the writer is as gud as u
Di it was heartbreaking really to read karan...and the last scene together u wrote emoted nicely..
I love that scene the most...well i love such scenes no no not a sadist haha
I just have this beautiful stry ...i remember due to my exams mene late start ki thi ye padhna and how i loved the concept the road trip that it started with till the esert rose
So much they kept hiding bt farhaan did say yes ..
So so loved how the characters grew nd u took it forward
Sad end itna nahi tha kyuki zara thi bt last scene of asya together m unable to get it out of my head ...mai ek aur baar padhti hu wo scene 😆
Di hugsss 🤗

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kaju27

@kaju27

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

hey what is the name of your other story on zoya and karan

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

I really don't understand what to write di

It was breathtaking

And extremely heart touching

I actually cried reading the last part though

I have enjoyed every bit of this story. Although many would have loved a happy ending to it, i feel that the story has got an ending that it was meant to get

reading how strong zoya was till her last breadth was an inspiration😭

It tells that life does not give chances to many and we should live the life we have got to the fullest because you never know what the next moment has in store for you

Thankyou for such a beautiful story di

It would always be remembered by me and would always have a special place in my heart 😊