NEW ASAD ZOYA STORY:THE EXCUSE, to love you updated part8on page48 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Glad to read it..
So even asad Has feelings for zoya...
Poor zoya...
I can see so many are trying to play cupid...
Plz continue soon

thank you very much dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
So Asad also have feelings for her
Its so exciting yaar
Awww they are so shy and embarrassed 😆
Precap is so cute ❤️
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER-6

GUNS AND ROSES... OR MAYBE HORMONES

" So, ready to learn some quick kicks and punches?" Sanaya beamed excitedly at me and I gave a tiny smile, trying desperately to not show exactly how much freaked out I was.

" Let's start then." She extended a hand towards me and I , though a little awkward and confused, grabbed hold of it. But it turned out to be a bad idea as she suddenly pulled at my hand with a swift jerk and I found my hand in a strange pose, trapped in her firm grip and completely unable to move. Seeing my bewildered face, she released it and giggled a little at my startled face.

" Sorry, couldn't help giving you a little demonstration. This is what you have to do if someone ever tries to hold your hand in a wrong way. Hope I didn't hurt you?" She asked me kindly and I nodded in a daze. I looked at my hands and her face in silent fascination. Though this didn't hurt me, I knew it was because she didn't intent to and if we actually do it properly with force, this move can hurt pretty bad. This was really amazing and cool and I could feel the excitement to know some more moves bubbling inside me. I had a feeling that it was going to be great and I all of a sudden looked forward to it. I beamed at an equally enthusiastic Sanaya, my honeymoon trouble thankfully taking a back seat.

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It had been three hours since Sanaya is giving this self-defense training and I could hardly imagine when was the last time when I had so much fun. What I thought to be some military training camp type experience with lots of awkwardness in the air, turned out to be a utter joyful learning experience and the air around us tinged with girly giggles. Ok, I know that joyful learning' part sounds like some kinder-garden advertisement but to be honest, I never thought that we would get along so well and that too soon. And the credit for that goes to Sanaya who kept cracking silly jokes and we continued to talk about nonsensical stuff amidst those pulls and kicks. Sanaya taught me few more moves and they were also very useful, something which every girl should know, mission or no mission. Though I wasn't perfect but I was sure that I would become better in three days.

"Ok, so now it is time for something more... fun." Sanaya said with a wicked grin etched on her face as we finally decided that we had too much kicking for a day. Confused, as I was about to ask about it, she went towards the cabinet in the corner of this huge room. I watched in puzzlement as she came back to me in a minute with a triumphed smile on her face and finally brought the object of attention in front of me, a huge gasp left my mouth.

" A... gun?" I said with ultra-wide eyes and my palms still stayed clamped over my gaping mouth.

" Well, you are going to learn shooting now." She said brightly as I continued to gape stupidly at the gun. Don't take me wrong. I wasn't some really scared-about-adventure girl, in fact I was quite a brave one but having to hold a real gun and the thought of shooting some real person with it is quite unnerving.

Sanaya was about to say something when her phone rang shrilly and she excused herself. She came in a jiffy looking rather apologetic. But before she could explain the problem to me, the door of the room opened and Asad entered the room which happened to be his cabin only ( we used this one for training because firstly he was with Mr. William and secondly the training room had a few works going on and thirdly it was bigger than Sanaya's... well these really make quite a lot of points!). After giving a brief look at us, he went to his desk in the corner and Sanaya's face lightened, as if a light bulb had went on in her head.

" Asad can train you." She said in such a euphoric tone that for a moment I could actually see her in place of Archimedes, jumping in the middle of his shower and screaming Eureka' Eureka' like a crazed lunatic. I could feel Asad mirroring my expressions as we both turned towards her with confused bewilderment.

" You know I got this urgent call from Mr. William, summoning me right now but I had to train you in shooting. So I was a little torn but now that Asad is here, I am sure he can train you in shooting till I come back. He has an amazing aim. I am sure he is the best one to train you this. You guys carry on, I will come back as soon as I can." She said in a breath ignoring our mortified expressions and dashed out of the door giving us a smile before we could really understand what was happening.

As I door closed with a small bang, I was snapped out of my stupor and closed my open mouth. Great! Just what I wanted! And with that all those honeymoon-talk came back to me which I was trying so desperately trying to block away. I felt a little faint as hopelessly hoped to somehow get out of this whole mess or at least this room. Why was my luck so bad? Why did it always happened to me? Why me? Like hadn't they got anyone else? I sigh with extreme frustration and suddenly felt half a mind to jump from the roof of this stupid place and half a mind to strangle Asad for being such a big idiot to never talk to me. But at the end all I felt like doing was wail about how much ludicrous was my life getting with each passing moment.

I looked at Asad from the corner of my eyes who was attentively studying his desk as if seeing it for the first time and rolled my eyes discreetly. He still hadn't changed, had he? I looked idiotically at the gun which Sanaya had thrusted in my hands before storming off. With slightly trembling hands I lifted it up to point at the shooting-board in front of me. The most horrendous part was that I was terrible at aiming and I seriously didn't want to cause any fatal blander. But as I held it up, I heard footsteps approaching me, completely numbing me with blind apprehension and internal panic. I felt him standing just behind me and then the next moment I felt his right hand proceeding towards my outstretched hand which was gripping the gun. My mind completely froze and then started screaming in complete panicked frenzy. Why did Sanaya had to go then only? Why did he had to be the one teaching me shooting? And why the hell do we both had to be wearing short sleeves today only out of all the days? Why? Why? Why?" His arm was touching mine in a feathery touch but I still felt my skin burning with some unknown emotion. My breathing had become a little heavy and my throat tightened. To my utmost horror, I found myself wondering if his touch would actually give me those electric jolts about which the romantic novels boost and got my answer immediately as a tingle ran down my rigid spine and goose-bumps erupted all over my tensed body as he placed his hand firmly over mine on the gun. I could feel his breath on my neck and smell his cologne and trust me, it wasn't doing me any good as I realized in horror that my eyes were slowly snapping close. I gulped as my stomach did a number of flip offs. I was starting to lose my sanity when a piercing sound burst my bubble. I opened my eyes in a daze to see a bullet struck to the board and then looked at our joined fingers on the trigger. It took me a moment to realize what had happened but before I could come out of my daze completely, I was thrown in another spell.

" Bull's-eye." He whispered huskily in my ear and then abruptly stepped away from me. It wasn't long before he went out of the and I was left clutching my frantically beating heart, trying to realize what exactly transpired few moments ago.

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PRECAP: " Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan?" The woman behind the counter asked me for confirmation as I handed my new passport to her. I nodded at her, not quite daring to let the words sink in me. As she gave me back my papers, I muttered under my breath, " Switzerland, here I come."

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Hey guys, I am really very sorry for such a late and small update but firstly my net pack ended and then I had this family function and above all I got high fever and cold. Though I don't have fever anymore but still have cold and this is what I could manage. As you can see you will be entering the main part from the next part and I need your support to go on. I don't know how many readers I have still got but if you are interested, don't forget to leave your likes and comments behind. I will update as soon as I get 35+ likes. Promise😃

PS. I will reply to the comments of the previous chapter later😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Meera
You are dping a fabulous job...
Great work..
Loved how you explained Zoya's feelings through out the training
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update yaar👏
really love it
waiting for next update
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thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Loved reading it
Shanaya and zoya were a treat to read
And finally asya hormones were clearly at the peak.
Would have loved to read asad's POV in that situation though
Looking forward to the story ahead
Please continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
Zoya enjoyed her time in training with saniya. Time for gun shooting & Asad was with her. Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm
Hope u r feeling good now
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Short but sweet
Training was good for zoya she got along with shanaya
So Asad was given the job to teach her shooting
I believe shanaya and mr.williams r playing Cupid
I love Asad and zoya in this story
Their both nervousness shyness ackwardness about their feelings and each other it too sweet
Aww bullseyes hope they hit the bullseye too in their relationship
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...very short but it was nice to see zoya interested in Asad romantically:) Asads pov would have been good too. looking forward to more updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome and intense update
This is so interesting
Can't wait to read more

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