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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Gr8 part

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Originally posted by: anopama

So the passionate nite is finally revealed

So love seher she is like a counsellor
So glad Asad found her
But he is still with for zeenat ammi and Najma not him
So she returns but ignore all
Aww she feels ashamed
Guess Asad has to work his ass off to get her trust again and love
Continue soon

Seher is like their psychologist, but you'll know why soon 😃 The poor man has just realized that he's human, we can't ask him to open up his heart 😆, I think Miss Farooqui will be dead for a while, now it's the emotionless Zoya who'll take her spot in Khan Villa..
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Read all the chapters at one go

Amazing story
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~7~

Zoya woke up, feeling a bit dizzy. It's been three weeks since she had talked to Mr Khan. She couldn't be able to face him because she was scared. She was scared of his reaction. She knew that she had her part of culpability because she couldn't understand him. She always criticized him because he couldn't express his feelings and when he had expressed them, she pushed him away. But this morning, it was Holi. Her very first Holi in India. She woke up early and entered her api's room with a hand full of colour.

"Happy Holi!!" She screamed before running outside. She tripped over her own feet and fell on Asad. They both fell on the ground and his chest was covered with her hands' prints.

"Happy Holi." Zoya whispered. He felt her breath on his face and his heart warmed up.

"Happy Holi Zoya." He said and she got up, feeling shy of being this close to him. He got up too and they left . Zoya went to her room to prepare herself for the party and Asad did the same. She noticed that her kurta was a bit too tight but she thought that it was because of the amount of pizza she was eating a few minutes ago.

They were driving to the party's place. Asad was driving and Zoya was sitting next to him while Zeenat, Dilshad and Najma were on the backseat.

"Zoya, I've booked two ticket for us. We're leaving this Wednesday." Zeenat said out of sudden and Asad got tensed immediately while Zoya just wanted to shout at her sister.

"But api, it's only in three days!" Najma replied.

"That's enough for you to tell her goodbye." Zeenat argued.

"Please api, bas! Don't talk like this to Najma." Zoya said in anger. She had never felt this angry about someone, not even her Jahanpanah. Zeenat, on the other hand, was fuming with anger. How dare Zoya defend a family which did nothing but hurt her? She had accepted to stay over at the Khan's just because Zoya asked her.


They were finally at the party's place. Najma was already looking for her friends while Dilshad was speaking to relatives and Zeenat and Zoya were just chilling. Asad on the other hand was standing in a corner in deep thoughts. He couldn't bear to know that she was going far away from him. Maybe this was his punishment for hurting her.. He sat on a chair and put his arms on the table before putting his head over them. He drifted to sleep, not even being bothered by the noise.

He was in a park, walking when someone threw colour at him. It was the same girl of last time, Seher..

"Why did you do this?"

"Why not?" She asked back. "Allah miyaan! What's wrong with you? It's Holi dammit!" She exclaimed and Asad looked at her in disbelief. She was the exact replica of his Zoya.

"I don't want to talk to you Seher, so tell me what do you want and leave me alone." He said sadly.

"The real question is what do YOU want!" Seher said. "Are you really going to let her slip from your fingers like this?" Seher asked clapping her fingers in front of him and Asad lowered his head.

"That's my punishment for hurting her."

"Even the worst of the men deserves some happiness. And not only you but she deserves happiness too."

"She will never be happy with me I can't stop hurting her."

"Only the people you love can hurt you. And only true love can hurts you. You love each other to pieces. Don't let this go away. You're the only one who can heal her after hurting her." She said before disappearing while Asad woke up.

Dilshad was putting some colours on Zoya's cheek when she saw Sheereen and Rashid behind Zoya. Sheereen approached her along with Rashid and she put some colours on Dilshad's cheek.

"Happy Holi Dilshad!" She said smiling at her then she hugged her. Dilshad felt relieved as she had always been dismissed by Raziya who used to criticize her and Sheereen had always believed Raziya.

"Happy Holi Sheereen." Dilshad said and put some colours on Sheereen's cheek.

Asad saw this scene and he was fuming with anger. He approached them and glared at his father.

"Please Mr Rashid Ahmed Khan, stay away from my mother." He said and Zoya looked at him in disbelief.

"Mr Khan?" It was the first time after three weeks that she had said his name..

"Zoya please stay out of this." He said sternly.

"What if I don't? Will you slap me once again?" She asked and Asad glared at her before looking at Rashid once again.

"Please stay away from my family and I'll stay away from yours too." He said again and Rashid was going to hug Zoya goodbye but Asad stopped him.

"I said stay away from my family." He came between Zoya and Rashid and Rashid just lowered his head but Sheereen didn't go with him though.

"Will you be able to forgive us someday? How can you ask your father to stay away from you when you're keeping a relationship with your step-brother?" Sheereen asked before walking away.

Asad looked at her in anger. Never in his life someone had made him doubt about his relationship with Ayaan. But she was unhappily right.. How could he dare forbidding Rashid from approaching his family when he was maintaining a stronger bond with Ayaan, Nikhat and Nuzrat?

He got out of his reverie when Najma threw colours on him. Then she ran away laughing. He ran after her, picking a handful of red colour and when he was ready to put colour on her, he got blinded by other people throwing colour at each other and just put colour on someone's head believing that it was Najma but after that, he saw that it was Zoya!

"I'm sorry, Miss Farooqui. I was running after Najma and then..."

"Zoya! Come with me, I've just found our aunt Nama celebrating here as well, she wants to meet you!" Zeenat said dragging Zoya away from Asad. She couldn't let Zoya come near this disrespectful man! Zoya on the other hand just listened to her sister and after they talked to their aunt Nama, Zoya said to Zeenat that she was going back home as she was feeling nauseous.

"But Zoya, we came here with Asad. You can't leave like this."

"Don't worry api. I'm okay now. I'll just look for a cab." Zoya said, kissed her sister's cheek and left. When she was going to enter the cab, Asad held her arm.

"Where are you going?" He asked but she set her arm free.

"This is none of your business Mr Khan." She said and got into the car before leaving. She held the small card on her hand which fell on the ground when he was shouting at Rashid.

'Monica's phone number: 755-36965214'

"Who's this Monica?" She asked to herself. "And then he's claiming his love for me?" She asked herself once again but she let it go. She had to do something. It's been way too long that she was asking herself this question. As soon as she arrived at Khan Villa, she went to her room and did it.

"Okay, don't stress Zoya. It's nothing..As soon as you'll get the results, you'll see it by yourself!" She tried to stay positive but it was difficult. She took the stick, her eyes were closed with anxiety. She finally opened them and gasped.

"Ya Allah..." Zoya stuttered while looking at the stick in her hand. Zoya Farooqui was pregnant with her Jahanpanah..

~8~

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chapter
Loved reading it
Have always loved asad's scenes with seher and today was no exception
And the last part was a shocker
Zoya pregnant
Looking forward to know what happens next
And not to forget monica?
New characters excite me as well as make me nervous
Hope it's a positive character
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow
baby on board
zoya is pregnant
knew tht would have happen
who the hell is monica asad seems to know her after all he had her number
aww zoya jealousy he claims to love me but have her #
so shireen told asad wonder if he will consider
love asad and seher wonder what he will do
will zoya tell him of the baby
zeenat is getting on my nerves she needs to leave
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey thank you for the pm
But you can not end it on such a cliff
I want more
Please update quickly
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was awesome n nice n tnxx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Zoya tripped on Asad & put colour. She said to zeenat not to talk rudely with najma. She left holi party & then a blast. She was pregnant. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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