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Posted: 9 years ago
Sad update yaar😔
Atleast she remember evrything
Hope she will be fine
Continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Here I am for a new chapter! 😆 You'll finally know what happened in this holy night where they did the naughty 😳🤪🤣


~6~

Zoya was at the dargah, in a corner where she couldn't be seen. She was just sitting here, asking the Almighty to help her because she didn't know what was right for her. She didn't even notice when she fell asleep.

She felt someone tugging at her kurta and she opened her eyes.

"Tum?" She asked as she saw Seher sitting next to her.

"Ji, it's me ammi." Seher said.

"Why are you calling me ammi?" Zoya asked.

"Because you are my ammi. But forget it, why are you sad?" Seher asked.

"Love hurts." She said once again.

"What did he do this time?" Seher enquired.

"He told me the truth. I know everything. I know that his feelings are untrue." She said.

"What makes you believe that he lied to you?" She asked.

"He keeps hurting me. He slapped me twice. Once because he thought that because of me his mother got shot and the other time was because I tried to put some senses in his mind. He wanted to put his father to jail and along with his brother, I tried to stop him but he didn't listen to me. Instead, he slapped me and he insulted me." She explained sobbing.

"But for you, if I understand everything, he has slapped you for no reason?" She asked.

"Yes..No..I don't know." Zoya revealed, looking down.

"To you, parents are important, aren't they?" Seher said and Zoya nodded. "His mother means the world to him, isn't she?" Seher asked and Zoya nodded once again. "I'm not saying that what he did is right but he did this in anger because his mother was dying. People lose their mind once they see their loved ones in pain."

"But that doesn't explain why he keeps insulting me every time he gets the chance to!" Zoya argued.

"Do you really believe that he insults you because he hates you?" Seher asked and Zoya nodded.

"He always criticize how I dress, how I act.. Everything I do is wrong for him!" She said.

"Some people are scared of changing their habits. If he's bad with you maybe he's just scared of letting his feelings take control over him." Seher said.

"Where did you learn all these things Seher?" Zoya asked quizzically.

"From you ammi." Seher answered and she disappeared as Zoya was waking up.

What a mind blowing dream! Thought Zoya sceptically. She frowned as she saw that it was already dark outside. She remembered the words Seher said to her and realized that Asad had told her exactly these same words. He was scared to love her. She got up and prayed to the Almighty before leaving. She barely knew where to go as she had her memory back but still she couldn't remember everything yet. She walked carefully, avoiding dark corners. She was already walking for twenty minutes when she felt as if someone was behind her.

'Ya Allah please, protect me.' She prayed silently as she was walking faster. She turned to the right and began running until her lungs were burning. She stopped running and spotted a car coming towards her. She looked behind her and saw a drunk man approaching her. He had a bottle of alcohol in his hand and was nearing her dangerously. He raised his hand to hit her and she closed her eyes in fear but the hit never came. She opened her eyes and saw Asad himself. He was holding the man's hand and he was looking at the man in anger. He punched him in the stomach and Zoya gasped.

"Don't even dare to touch her!" He said gritting his teeth.

He punched the man here and there and when he finally stopped, the man was on the ground, unconscious. He looked towards Zoya and in one swift move, he was holding her tightly against him.

Zoya hugged him back. He had saved her from this man like he did months ago when she had been attacked by those men near the train station.

He kissed her hair and she shivered. But then she remembered their argument and she took a step back. He looked at her surprised then he recomposed himself and gulped.

"Woh..Actually.. Zeenat, Najma and ammi were worried for you as it's already 7.00 pm. They asked me to look after you." He said, avoiding to look into her dark orbs.

'So they were worried about me but not you?' She thought and followed him to his car.

She sat silently in the car as he drove back home. Asad was preoccupied about Zoya and her behaviour. As soon as she got back home, she didn't even talk to the women in the house. She just locked herself in her room.

Zoya on the other hand, pulled off her kurta and looked at her back. The marks of their love making were still present on her back and she began to cry once she saw them. She felt ashamed of herself. How could she explain it, that in a moment of love..because it wasn't only due to the bhang...She had given herself to Asad Ahmed Khan. She remembered it clearly now.

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"I don't even know how I can love you and hate you on the same time..?" He asked and she smiled at him before coming near him and sitting on his lap. Then she smiled.

"Do you see this dimple? That's why you love me. Everyone loves this dimple!" She said, wrapping her arms around his neck. Their noses were slightly touching and next thing they knew, they were kissing each other. Zoya tugged at his hair while he was holding her waist. Zoya sucked his upper lip while he was suckling her lower lip.

"Mr Khan!" She moaned as he was kissing her neck. He moved aside the sleeve of her blouse to kiss her shoulder and she gripped his shoulders, moaning loudly.

"I think I've found you sensitive spot.." He whispered against her shoulder and she shivered on feeling his hot breath on her.

They undressed each other and soon they were both naked. Asad massaged her boobs with one hand while he was touching her womanhood with his other hand. She was still sitting on his lap, his arousal was obvious as she could feel it on her back.

"Are you this aroused for me, Miss Farooqui?" He asked as he entered her with one of his finger.

"Yes I am Mr Khan." She moaned and he kissed her scar.

"Mr Khan?" She asked as he was going in and out of her, his finger curling inside her from time to time.

"You're beautiful Miss Farooqui. This scar makes you even more beautiful." He groaned in her ear as she was going over the edge, clutching his finger tightly. She moaned his name loudly while she came on his hand. Then he moved his finger out of her and made her sit on the sofa. He grabbed her thighs and kissed her c**t. Zoya moaned loudly while he was lapping her juices.

"Mr Khan!" She moaned while he was suckling her bud. He added one finger to her pleasure and Zoya cried out as she cum once again. Asad moved up and kissed her passionately. She sucked his tongue, tasting herself on him. She moaned in his throat when she felt his boner pressed against her womanhood. She grabbed his neck and he entered her slowly. She cried out as she was stretching for him. He could feel her walls around him for the first time. Zoya bit his chest when she felt him thrusting in and out of her. He was in full bliss as he was hearing her moan in his ear. She wrapped her legs around him and he grabbed her bum and walked with her towards a wall. She was trapped between the wall and him and each time he was thrusting back into her, she was moaning louder and louder as he was going deeper and deeper.

"I'm going to cum!" She moaned and he stopped thrusting. "Why did you stop?" She asked and he separated from her and led her near a table.

"Please bend forward. I want to see your butt against me." He said as she bent forward, putting her hands on the table.

"Zoya, you're mine and only mine."He whispered in her ear. He was pressed tightly against her back, letting her feel his arousal against her buttocks. He bit her shoulder and soothed the bite with a soft lick. Zoya moaned letting him know that he was doing good. He trailed soft kisses on her spine, biting her here and there then licking the bite straight away.

He got up again and pulled her legs apart. Zoya was too blinded by desire to resist. She was feeling empty without him in her. She moaned loudly when, in a swift thrust, he entered her again. He bit her again on this same spot on her shoulder and Zoya hissed in pain. He plunged in the depths of her wetness again and again, like he wanted, her butt was slapping against his thighs each time he thrust in.

"Don't call me 'Mr Khan.' Call me by my name. Moan it." He said, kissing her neck. She moaned his name loudly and he let his cum fill her up while she milked him totally. Asad gripped her neck from behind and he whispered against her parted lips "I love you Zoya." then he ravaged her plump lips and she let slip from her throat a pleasurable moan while she milked him completely.

"I love you too Mr Khan.." Zoya whispered as tears were slipping from her closed eyes.

TBC

Chapter 7.

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

That was nice update. Eager to know if zoya would come back. The sorry scene was nice. Thanks for the pm. Do update fast.

Thank you! Of course Zoya will come back 😆 I had loved writing this sorry scene. I think, even though they're my OTP, it would have been nice to see Asad apologizing for the way he treated the poor girl 😉...Like a real apology..
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Originally posted by: raspi

She left yrr nd it was overwhelming n tnxxx fr pm

Thank you 😆 It was pretty overwhelming writing it too 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update dear

A roller coaster of emotions
Zoya confronting asad
And then giving up and leaving
Feel really very bad for asad
Hopefully asad would soon bring her back and they would get their happily ever after
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊

THank you ! 😃 Her memory is finally back! She's not made of stone. This is definitely her breaking point 😭 He will bring her back home but their happy ending won't be soon 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Omg omg what did u do

Zoya left she walked away
How can u do this
She confronted Asad she give him a chance to speak tell the truth
Love how she blocked out appi and took him to the room
She listen to him and then she told she remembered all
Omg she is sadden bcuz he broke his promises
After all she give him herself her body and soul
Continue soon

Please don't kill me 😔 I know you didn't expect it to be this way but Asad has to fight for his love. He can't make her feel less than nothing then expect her to be okay with it..But it was a good move of her to let him explain himself first. But when a promise is broken, it's hard to trust again
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Beautiful update

Continue soon :'))

Thank you ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

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Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Asad thinks dat he can dump her anytime n pick her anytime
At least Zoya gave him chance to speak unlike him
He really shattered her self-confidence n her spirit like Zoya said
Zoya is right on not trusting n forgiving him as he is a coward like she said
He slapped her 2wice a month which was wrong no matter wat n left her after sex
How will others react on knowing d entire story?
Asad sud be grateful dat she did not slapped him after all dis
No self-respecting girl can let any man take her for granted
Will Zoya be pregnant or wat due to their act?😲

Thank you! I doubt that I'd made them all know that they had sex. After all it's a bit shameful to expose their sex life when they're supposed to be Muslims in the show. I don't know yet. Truth is that he's tasting his own medicine. How she stopped him from explaining further is the same thing he did to her. For the pregnancy thing, you'll know later.. Don't be too curious😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Zoya remembered everything & asked him why. He apologised for his behaviour & told her why he said those words. Zoya left the house. Curious to know what happens next. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Thank you 😉
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