I'll look after you [update p34](Asya ff )

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: shailu123
Sad update yaar😔
Atleast she remember evrything
Hope she will be fine
Continue soon😃

Sorry 😔 I wonder how it happens that any of you didn't kill me yet 😆 I hope you're ready for my story "The colour of devil" because it will be worst😲

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Amazing update

Loved reading it

Firstly, I am loving how you are adding sanam and seher scenes in between to make them realize their feelings and circumstances

Asad saving zoya from the drunkard was a treat to read

The mature part of hot

And finally the acceptance of love by zoya

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Perriewinkle

THank you ! 😃 Her memory is finally back! She's not made of stone. This is definitely her breaking point 😭 He will bring her back home but their happy ending won't be soon 😭

I guess I have already realized that by now

But I am loving the pace of the story

It's not stretched and it is not hurried

Asad has done many wrong deeds intentionally as well as unintentionally

Hope he manages to gain zoya's forgiveness

Looking forward to know what happens next in their story😊

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing update
Loved reading it
Firstly, I am loving how you are adding sanam and seher scenes in between to make them realize their feelings and circumstances
Asad saving zoya from the drunkard was a treat to read
The mature part of hot
And finally the acceptance of love by zoya
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you 😆 I loved writing it 😉 I try my best to make them realize their love through Sanam and Seher as they're too fool to know this themselves 😛 He'll be her knight no matter what 😃 I know that it was hot 😳 Now that they know their love for each other, the most difficult thing is to make them face it 😆

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

I guess I have already realized that by now
But I am loving the pace of the story
It's not stretched and it is not hurried
Asad has done many wrong deeds intentionally as well as unintentionally
Hope he manages to gain zoya's forgiveness
Looking forward to know what happens next in their story😊

Thank you! I'm not the type of person who'll make a world war just to bring people to love each other in the story..Except if I'm too amused by reactions of my readers..I know that's a bad move but if some of you think that Asad hadn't been punished enough, I can continue on her anger for a while but not too much because I'll get boring and I hate being boring on writing, that's not an accepted feeling 😛 He'll sure get her forgiveness because she loves him, and he loves her. Love can bring the best out of people.