AsYa(KaBhi) FF 'You Are Mine' Ch.7 updated,pg 50-(28/04)

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Liked determined zoya.
Cute precap
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot Asif...m glad you like it 😊

will try to update soon

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hello DI..

Hope you are doing good...

Khair coming to the update directly...well to be honest I really want to read the precap part soon because Part B of this update really had some intense drama going on..

Update started of on a lighter note..

But the confrontation at the end was coming but yess now they both have decided on this...ab dekhte hai aagey kya hota hai..

About the note at the end...I just want this to be a fair thing...jaise like as you said Zoya is not a cry baby but will have her break downs but won't it be better for both her and Asad if she go away from her life...yaa it should be like this that it should not be about on Zoya's ordeal and break downs...Asad should also give it a fair chance as much as Zoya is trying to do...yes he has a broken past but see you can't be mean to your wife ...

And also Shaad is going to be in big trouble because he has not cleared everything about Asad's past to Zoya which will come into play later...

Sorry mein zyada bol gaya...😳

I just want this to be both ASYA's journey and struggle to a better future...

Continue soonish...

Hello Champ

I am fine...what about you...hope everything is well

About precap...not much intense like part B actually...but spoil toh hogi hi wo moment...

okay...I get your point here...it's better if Zoya go away...it's not a right thing to force him...

But see, for Zoya she loves him and now as they are married...in whatever situation, she just want to give it a chance and most imp. she don't have any idea about his real past matters...so she just want to try for bringing that smile back in his life...she want to see the real Asad about whom she heard a lot from Humeira and Shaad...her mind is aware that she cant force him but then when its a matter of heart mind took a back seat na...

As for Asad...his life has become a mess...see, he is frustrated here...still he is not over with whatever happen in past...and as you see in flashback, wo Rida se bohat pyaar karta tha...and actually here he don't want to hurt Zoya...but it happens when person is in emotional mess he do the things even though he don't intend... And he still can't see Zoya as his wife...coz he just can't imagine that...

About Zoya's break down at some points...that will be not much but I have planned a lot drama for this story...but I don't know how it will turn out coz last update was not actually what I have planned...

Shaad...that was his decision to hide the truth so he has to face the consequences in future...past me nahi kiya but future me he has to do that...very tough moment for him when Zoya will ask for the truth...

See Asad will change with time...there is sure a better future for both...😊

I guess yeh kuch jyada hi explanation ho gaya...😆

I know you don't like this type of stories like love triangle and all drama...but I'll try to make it a better journey for AsYa and for readers too...

well, thank you for review...will try to continue soon 😊

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Finally managed to read the story!

I see Shaad has a role to play here, If Asad is stubborn then Zoya is. his wife 😛 his past has been disturbing but Zoya is right here if they r tied they deserve a chance!!!! But again Asad is holding. bck god knows what happens if his past deccides to peek in his present... MY POOR ZOE!!! 😭 I wonder when will he comes out of shell hopefully before his past barges in!!!

Now precap it looks cute until you ruin it with that warning😆 I dont know why in between the lines my gutter mind reads that Asad is jealous of Shaad. n Zoe I know its impossible bt still 🤣

Update soon!!!

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#294

Beautiful update dear

Loved reading it to the core

Happy to see some progression is asya relationship

Thankfully asad agreed to give zoya and their relation some time

Loved how you used ishqbaaaz background music on them

It indeed suits them

The precap is very interesting

Seems as the official start of their relationship

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently

Thanks for the pm😊

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Daljit Dhami

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#295

Deepti where are you?
it is long time since you update any of your story dear
update something please

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-Prinky-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: Zephyr.
Finally managed to read the story!

I see Shaad has a role to play here, If Asad is stubborn then Zoya is. his wife 😛 his past has been disturbing but Zoya is right here if they r tied they deserve a chance!!!! But again Asad is holding. bck god knows what happens if his past deccides to peek in his present... MY POOR ZOE!!! 😭 I wonder when will he comes out of shell hopefully before his past barges in!!!

Now precap it looks cute until you ruin it with that warning😆 I dont know why in between the lines my gutter mind reads that Asad is jealous of Shaad. n Zoe I know its impossible bt still 🤣

Update soon!!!

Thank you so much Sans for a lovely review
yes...Shaad has a role to play...and that too very tough
Hmm...past is disturbing and it will hard for Asad to forget...he will come out of shell soon with a stubborn Zoya around...
hehe...that will not actually happen...😆
about ruining the moment...i guess you should guess it...the only thing...
will try to continue soon 😊

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-Prinky-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Beautiful update dear
Loved reading it to the core
Happy to see some progression is asya relationship
Thankfully asad agreed to give zoya and their relation some time
Loved how you used ishqbaaaz background music on them
It indeed suits them
The precap is very interesting
Seems as the official start of their relationship
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊

Muskaan...finally I got your review...I really miss you on the thread...
Thank you so much for took out time from a busy schedule...
yes...its a start of their relationship...
will try to continue soon 😊

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-Prinky-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Deepti where are you?
it is long time since you update any of your story dear
update something please

I am here only Daljit 😊
I know...I know...but I am thinking about taking a little break...
but you will get something from me to read before the year ends...😊

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

I am here only Daljit 😊
I know...I know...but I am thinking about taking a little break...
but you will get something from me to read before the year ends...😊

Why break Deepti
acche writers toh waise hi gaayb ho rahe ab tum bhi break le rahi ho kyun
ok give something before New year