hey sara *waves*
mai aagai😃😃
poore 24 hr late hehe
15 ka kaha tha i knw but busy ho gai thi mai
sholly 😳😳😳
i've marked your thread you see 🤣
why m i joking with you😲 wo last me kya likha be😡 aisa bhi koi likhta hai
I know the chapter is horrible but I'm sorry you'll have to endure crappy updates a little while longer..I need some practice to sharpen my writing skills...lol that is if I have any skill in the first place
ye upar kahe shabd tere hi hena?😡 what the hell is wrong with you...your writing is probably the best on this forum i have no doubt...and i do have reasons to base what i say
and u say u haven't got skill puhleezz!!! back in some month when i read this story after reading this haven't i scraped u telling the same thing that ur the fav writer i would always keep reaing...and after a long long superb update reading this below is infuriating now don't u smile sheepish smile ⭐️⭐️
idiot kahin ki
and now thanku so much for this long long really long update 🤗
i sit here to review and well this is the story the best and idk mai kitna bolungi 😆
like all of ur readers i too read it from the beginning
where it all started ah!! ❤️
so m gonna go all over again 😆 m not to be blamed okay warning u coz
this is just my love for this story that u wrote so beautifully and there are many updates to come!!!😃😃😃
the prolouge...that was so gripping and wo padhte hi i had the image of stephen creating edward,,...and u my stephen created that asad...i love asad in this story!!! shades he have so many shades to him
and then when zoya sketches it it seemed as a movie rolled with its first scene😆
her first shayri 😆 and zoya...i love her frm wherever u brought her character frm i just love her innocent sassiness and rebellious naive nature...😳
their first meeting wasn't actually the first meeting😆😆
asad knew frm beginning and i just can't wait to know how did he know her...you gotta keep updating and reveal that soon haan!
ab ye mat bolna seedhe seedhe bina twist ke ni bataungi
i know itni asaani se batayegi ni aur na mujhe jaana he
jaldi jaan na he but masale ke sath😆😆
and then the library when she got to know about the owner wowie ka zowie!!!!! it was so beautiful!!! u rock yar...when she said "you came" that was beautiful...and bichare ko abhi tak ni bataya esa kyu likha...there are a lot of unanswered questions...it looks like a mess but it isn't trust me the story is moving forward outstandingly and the characters are growing.the understanding and feelings are getting mutual
and then there's one thing cracking me up...well u didn't write it in a humorous way but u also know that m crazy so maybe i read it in a funny way
that was when the rainy night he knew where she was by the tracker he'd fitted in her cell
and when she was in his car he said no one can keep her away frm him
and she sat muttering he s crazyy and after that whenever he would say she belongs to him and she declared him insane in her mind it would always turn my laughing button on! crazy that i knw ii am 🤣 not a laughable thing but can't help how she mutters under her breath and he on the other hand keeps saying she's mine she's mine
😆
there u did ur beautiful write up thingy with that dream of hers in a meadow!!! nicely penned
👏 and her annoyance when he watched her waking up frm a dream in her room...him offering to drop her at college and oh god!!! asad has so many mood swings 😆😆 ❤️
that makes me love him and adore how u made him
and zoya throwing back at him haha i agree u created a jerk sarah 🤣
sexy jerk😉
her reaction when he told her he bought her...there comes the uniqueness...no marriage seedha khareed liya...wah teri soch janeman 😆
her emotions and then when she consoled nikhat to marry ...and it all made me love zoya more... how u showed a grown up woman inside her when she dared to sacrifice for her sister's happiness
hate razia as always...the day she came to khan mansion na.wo uski kuch cheeze lautaane ...so cruel ergh!! 😡 i wish asad thikaane lagaye usey.but then it is best to ignore her as zoya said
love aliyaan and zoya together😃😃😃 humairah gives zzoya's ego a boost and is challenging
like her too
aliyaan a possessive admirer of her...i can wholly imagine what would his face be like when zoya blind folded did that seducting dance on a dare 🤣
and i love the rebellious zoya...the attempts to run away...her condition...her arguments after every day to let her stay at her uncle's place...she never gave up asking him...and not to forget her slapping him,hitting with her heel or slashing water at his face 😆 m sure asad had a nice time for being a jerk lol but actually he wasn't it was her who made it difficult for her all he did was took care of her😳😳
and then there one another dream happen hahaa
the jahapanah one lol
😆 i was surprised how easily she told him what she dreamt like they were on talking terms and then jese mene socha uski akal thikaane aayi haha
i loved when she was angry at him accused him why she shud follow his orders and all that!!! 😆
and then asad! ah his anger ...thats a very dangerous asad u write about 😆
but with such infectious perfection i can't help loving th scenes i imagine taking place...
and then they go with kitten and evil jahapanah...agreed again he is just evil so evil ! i love him though ❤️ and his punishments😳😳 once she was scared now she wants him to kiss him and then throwing i the pool thingy is so cool punishment...i have experienced it 😆
it is fun though hehe 😆
asad has this playful side as well and i loe it
even zoya started to enjoy his company and things went easy between the two
then there's this mysteriousness...his ammi knows zoya...
and how that mark A came on her forehead...
it was delight reading when she relaxed after he told her the scratch makes her who she is
and then then then!!!!! him talking about family...sarah ur doing a wonderful job.there is so much to asad and its amazing how from zoya's pov ur showing the asad ahmed khan
oh how can i forget his ocd 🤣
the washing hands process\
eating chips in even number and tv's volume even 🤣
or ordering her to clean the chlorinated water on her legs
and hahhaah 🤣
funny how she threatened him to eat cookie in his cupboard or eat pizza on his bed 🤣
the most funny scene ever
he is shameless too...that trotting lecture and his imaginations 😳😳☺️ 😆 apparently ur imaginations 🤣😛
horse ride together was a treat
did she really called him overbearing ass 😆 this is zoya...wanting to do everything she's told not to...that is human tendency 😆 we all do 😆
that she did riding frisky aanha 😆 well agar asad kisses me that heady one mouted on a horse i would ride frisky everyday!!!
ahem ahem excuse me 😆
that kiss ghode wala i loved it so much m still under the effect how perfectly u potrayed zoya's emotions!!
and her wet dream well i am afraid she he would trick her soon into telling him what she saw haha😳😳
and aren't i forgetting two important ppl 😲
dean and sam!!! haha she thought them to be a gay couple 🤣
that cracked me so much 🤣 coz i imagined dean doing all the funny things he does in SPN 🤣
DEAN'S FUNNY 😆 and look look sarah meri siggy me nichu 😆
mere saath leke ghuming mai in dono ko 😆
i love the winchester boys ❤️ much more of an acklesholic that i am 😆
and the time away anha!!! another challenge to get drunk and fool mr. khan wow !!
what was that gun man doing??? there sure is a danger
dean when angry is so cute nahin??
lol i started all over dean and spn here 😆
getting back to asya
they missed each other...asad's hesitancy to express is so cute
and then zoya being reckless made him angry
the hug was surprising to me how could he behave so cool but i was surprised more on this that itne lambe time tak gussa raha usse she never gave up
and u know idk what is it in ur writing ya fir something sure is wrong with me
when zoya broke into tears after snapping at him that his mum doesn't love him for same...when she cried i cried too...😭 i am crazy u knw na...hasti roti rehti bu
but effective writ up👏
and then he was again noral and what!!!😲 he lied to his family and proposed her to to...to pretend marriage 😲😲😲 ❤️
m loving the idea already 😆
pretend marriage ki link pls drop in my inbox.tune pucha tha padha ya nahi me kese padhu jb tk tu link ni degi 🥱 and jo bhi post kiya sb ki dede😛
and then zoya zoya zhoya did call him mr khan again and when he answered or i shud say warned her to kiss her in front of staff by looking at dean i was amused 😆
awesome awesome part long and is part me story kitni aage badh gai
zoya is kraziiieee 😆
really sallu dreams of her 😲⭐️ don't tell me sarah its actually ur little dream abt sallu hahhaa
and then the morning intimacy and and and what an entry 1 week earlier👏👏👏
yo pa and tamatar welcome practically to the story 😆
ab aayega maza when they would share a room...
haaha u know i've enjoyed reading zoya attracted to him sexually so much
at times she woul zone out
his six packs .his perfume...😆 she would stare at his lips and he wud catch her doing it
his shamelessness admitting his dreams about her and the fantasy of his what she did in her dare
i love all these things and just so so excited for them to live in a same room and pretend lovey dovey in front of pa and tamatar
and sarah trust me mene shuru se padhi na story i loved it and mujhe to ulta ye part aur zada achaa laga..koi difference tha agar wo 12 part me aur is waale me to ye ki ye bohat achaa tha un sab me mera favr8 and teri launguage par bohat solid command he
ur vocab is just so full of new words
u use so many adjectives to enhace the write up
and i just preach u yes! i do and i learn frm u
ab aage jaldi update kar dena plzzz...
ma wait to kar ni paaungi 😳😳
dare say u don't have any skills coz m already shooting ville oats and curses ur way reading the last note
edit that right now😡 idiot kahin ki
but i just love u so much 🤗
for having put u a chapter
and pls pls update soon na
waiting desperately!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you shd know that
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here this is for u
ab na ek mahine ke andar update aani chaiyee😃😃
kyuki me to aaungi 14 march ko
exam khatam hote hi tere thread ko attack karungi
so u better keep an update ready
😃 mwuaah ❤️
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