'Jab we met' AsYa short story [updates pages 4;8;11;13] - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: tikit

So will it be zoya who bring sweetness in asads life as he now does not maybe rely or depend on anything sweet in life except his mother, sisters, brother and zoya. By any chance are u going to introduce tanveer maybe as another childhood friend.

I'm going to introduce Tanveer for sure 😆 And yes Zoya will be the one to bring back sweetness in Asad's life 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Wow that was super cute loved it
Continue soon plzz 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

Wow that was super cute loved it
Continue soon plzz 😳

Thank you 😊 I'll continue ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Perriewinkle

I'm going to introduce Tanveer for sure 😆 And yes Zoya will be the one to bring back sweetness in Asad's life 😃

Allah...Tanveer aayegi..agar us billo rani ki bachi ne kuch aisa vaisa kiya na tho mai 💔
Haan...agar wo Asad -Zoya ko karib layegi...tho mai ❤️😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arakad

Allah...Tanveer aayegi..agar us billo rani ki bachi ne kuch aisa vaisa kiya na tho mai 💔
Haan...agar wo Asad -Zoya ko karib layegi...tho mai ❤️😳

Can you please translate it? I can't understand Hindi 😕 In my stories i just use to write basic sentences I know
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Perriewinkle

Can you please translate it? I can't understand Hindi 😕 In my stories i just use to write basic sentences I know

😆Lol sorry...didnt know that...I meant that if tanveer is gonna do something bad to AsYa then 💔
But if she's gonna bring them closer then ❤️😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arakad

😆Lol sorry...didnt know that...I meant that if tanveer is gonna do something bad to AsYa then 💔
But if she's gonna bring them closer then ❤️😳

Oh right! Don't worry she won't harm them 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys! This is the next chapter! And Tanveer is in this chapter! I hope you'll like it! 😆


Day two.

Zoya and Asad were in front of Zainab's grave. Zoya cried seeing her mother's grave. Asad hugged her tighly.

"Ammi I'm sorry, I didn't come here to visit you. It's been 17 years now and the pain is still here. I miss you so much. You won't be here to see me as someone's wife, you won't be here to soothe me when I'll be afraid of being a bad wife. You won't be here to give me advices to raise my children.." She sobbed and Asad hugged her more tightly.

"Zainab phuphi, I had visited you during all those years, praying you to bring back Zoya into my life, now that I have her, I promise that I will love her no matter what. You had gifted me with the most beautiful woman of the world and I am so thankful for that. Please phuphi don't take her away from me again.. I won't bear it this time." Asad thought. They got up, Asad had wrapped his hand around Zoya's waist protectively. Then all of sudden, they saw Gafoor Ahmed Siddiqui. Zoya knew about her father and she knew that he had left them because his second wife threatened him to take her step-sister away from him. Zoya never got the chance to meet Humeira as Raziya had always dismissed her.

"Abbu?"

Gafoor turned around and looked at the woman before him, he recognized Zainab features in Zoya's face.

"Zoya beta.." He whispered before engulfing her into a hug. "When I knew that you mother was dead, I did everything to find you but Dilshad told me that you had left with her niece. I'm so sorry for letting you go Zoya. I have always loved your mother." He declared.

"Abbu don't worry I forgive you. It's not your fault. Am I allowed to see Humeira?" Siddiqui took Zoya's face into his hands and nodded, silently crying of happiness. Asad just wanted to punch him in the face for abandoning Zoya but he stopped himself from doing so as Siddiqui seemed to be really sorry and he couldn't stop Zoya from seeing his father if she wanted to. Siddiqui hugged her tightly then he finally noticed Asad.

"Asad beta, you've grown up so fast! Thank you for taking care of Zoya when I couldn't." He declared and Asad face soften as he finally forgave Siddiqui. They followed Siddiqui to his house and he declared:

"Raziya is in a trip in Mangalpur so you can stay and talk with Humeira if you want to. I've talked to her about you but I made her swear that she won't say anything to her mother. Asad I may tell you..your father is here as well." Asad knew already that Rashid had abandoned them for Sheereen, Siddiqui's sister but he didn't care about him.

"I'm here for Zoya, I don't care about Rashid." He declared. They entered the house and Rashid was stupefied to see his son with Siddiqui.

"Asalam'alaikum." The trio said. "This is my daughter, Zoya." Siddiqui added and Humeira smiled before running towards her sister and she engulfed her into a hug.

"Bhaji! Abbu had talked to me about you! Mashallah! You're so gorgeous!" Zoya smiled shyly.

"You're beautiful Humeira." They talked for a few hours while Asad was talking with Nikhat, Ayaan and Nuzrat, not caring about his father and wife.

"Thank you Asad. You gave me the most beautiful thing you could give me, a family." Zoya said once they were on the car. Asad held her hand tightly and smirked at her.

"That's because you deserve all the best things in this world and even more." Zoya gripped his tie and he leaned towards her. She kissed him lustfully. Asad gripped her thighs and made her sit on his lap. Zoya wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed his neck. Her gloss was all over his neck and she smirked as she bit his neck. Asad groaned but they were disturbed when someone knocked at the window. Zoya got back to her seat and Asad pulled down the tinted window.

"Bhaijan, you had forgotten your cellphone." Ayaan said and Zoya blushed even more as she noticed the gloss mark on Asad's neck.

"And Asad I don't know for you but it seems that they are really big mosquitoes lately." Ayaan said in a playful tone and Zoya eyes were wide open.

"Asad will kill me.." She muttered and Asad looked at her quizzically when Ayaan left.

"What's Happening Zoya?"

"As..Asad..Remember that we have to go to Van Vihar national park!"

"Oh yes, you're right." Asad said so he drove home first to change and then they went to the national park along with Najma and Dilshad. They had noticed the mark on Asad's neck but they didn't say anything. But Dilshad was sure going to ask him why he had this mark on his neck. Zoya on the other was in cloud 9. She couldn't stop thinking about her father and sister. They had accepted her and it seemed like phuphi and Najma were accepting her as well. As for Asad..Well he had accepted her and quite well.

"Zoya!" Najma called for the tenth time, Zoya finally looked at Najma and she asked:

"Kya hua Tamatar?" She inquired.

"Look at this bear Zoya! It's so huge!" The family smiled at Najma's behavior. They had never lived such a great time since Rashid left but Asad could see that Zoya was like a ray of sun in his sad life as she gave to him and his family the happiness they were looking for.


Two weeks after.

It's been two weeks since Zoya was at Khan villa. Her attraction towards Asad was becoming more and more difficult to control and it was the same thing for Asad. He had finally decided to bring her to Upper Lake to propose to her. Zoya was unaware of what he was preparing for her this day. They had visited a lot of things and this time he didn't told her anything about their destination. Asad had prepared a basket of food and he had even brought his swimsuit. He had told her to bring a swim suit as well.

"Jaan, where are we going?" Zoya asked while intertwining her hand with his. They had agreed that they were more than best friends now.

"Zoya please, be patient. You won't regret it." Zoya nodded upset, she wanted so bad to know where they were going! They finally arrived and Asad had put a hand on her eyes and they walked towards the lake."

"Asad can I see now?"

"Hold on for a little while Zoya". Asad removed his hand from her eyes and she saw the lake. She smiled remembering the time they had spent there together. She remembered when she had asked him to tell to her future husband to bring her there for his proposal.

'Allah miyaan! He's going to ask me to be his wife!' She thought while she was sitting on the blanket.


Khan villa.

Dilshad was cooking when someone knocked at the door.

"Najma please go open the door." Dilshad said whereas she was adding some salt in her tandoori chicken.

"Asalam'alaikum." A man said and Najma answered before letting him in with his wife and daughter. Dilshad came in the living room and got the shock of her life when she saw the family. It was Ayman and Azizah Beg along with their daughter Tanveer.

Ayman and Rashid were best friends and he was even the one who covered Rashid when he had cheated on her.

"What do you want Ayman?" She asked.

"Please Dilshad don't act coldly towards me."

"I act coldly towards you? Do I have to remind you that you destroyed my wedding?!" She said.

"I don't care about your wedding, the reason I came here is that Rashid and I made a promise and the promise is that Asad and Tanveer will get married.

Upper lake.

Zoya and Asad were swimming in the lake peacefully. Asad was close to her and she was enjoying the feeling of his warm hands on her bare belly. He stopped swimming and she stopped as well.

"Kya hua Asad?" She asked. He picked her up and she wrapped her long legs around his torso. Then he placed one hand under her bum and the other one on her neck. They shared a passionate kiss full of tongue fighting and love. He bit her upper lip while she sucked his lower one. Her hands roamed his back while he was caressing her cheek with his thumb. He knew that they had to stop there as he didn't want their first time together to be like this.

"Zoya." He whispered on her lips. She pecked his lips once more then she parted with him and swim to the shore. Asad followed her and after they dressed, he got on one knee before her.

"Zoya, I don't exactly know how to express it but.. Since I was a child, my dream was to make you as my wife. We have parted ways but I still felt that you were the one for me. Zoya, since you had left me 18 years ago, my life was in darkness but now that you're here, I'm reviving, you put back colors in my life Zoya. I brought you where you wanted to be proposed and I must be crazy to propose to you after two weeks but I'd say that I'm crazy in my love. You probably are unaware of it Zoya but I never had felt something as strong as what I feel for you. So please Zoya will you accept to marry a man like me who is willing to give you his soul, body, heart and love for the rest of his life?" Zoya was crying of happiness on hearing his proposal. He was so damn cute.

"You silly! Of course I will." Asad smiled when he heard her say yes. They kissed and stayed a little while before going back home.

"You know what?" Asad asked while they were walking towards the front door."

"No I don't know, tell me!" She inquired

"Thanks to you I'm the happiest man in the world." Zoya smiled as they entered the house.

When Asad saw people in his living room, he separated himself from Zoya. A woman looked at him smiling.

"Ayman look at him he's so handsome! In my heart he's already my son-in-law."

Zoya felt her heart break into pieces. Dilshad was also upset as they didn't want to listen to her when she said that being unaware of the promise, she won't accept this nikkah.

She looked at Zoya apologizing silently and noticed the diamond ring on her finger.

'Allah miyaan! He had proposed to her!' Dilshad thought and she finally decided to say something. She wouldn't let Rashid destroyed her son's life through this stupid promise.

"Asad beta, please come sit next to your soon-to-be wife." Ayman said. Zoya had enough. She left the living-room muttering something and she went to her room. She picked her phone and dialed her api.

"Zoya?" Zeenat said picking up the phone.

"Api, I think I'll come earlier. I have seen beautiful things but I'm missing New-York so bad!"

"Are you sure?"

"Ji." Zoya said then hung up. She prepared her suitcase and booked a ticket for the next flight which would be in five hours. She left from the window after taking care of leaving the diamond ring on the bedside table.

TBC...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ressy...but lemme read it first 😆
Unressed...Tanveer Tanveer Tanveer...Gawd I hate her😡
But AsYa proposal was awesome
But New musibat(problem) had come...
I'm angry on Rashid too😡
No probs...I'm sure u'll solve everything...
Awesome update mouni 🤗
Edited by arakad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
A beautiful proposal
But the entry of tanveer just spoiled everything
Zoya left. Let's see how asad stops his lady love
Wish that u clear all the problems soon
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

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