'Jab we met' AsYa short story [updates pages 4;8;11;13]

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arakad

@arakad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Perriewinkle

Sorry I'm gonna try to write a longer one next time! 😆 AsYa just slay 😳 You welcome Zoe ❤️ As I'm Mounira, you can call me Mo or Mouni my mamma use to call me 'Hitler' because regarding to her I'm an emotionally challenged and I don't forget easily you can chose another one if you want to, the choice is yours 😊

Hey there. ...I'm gonna call u Mouni...I like that...don't worry my mom calls me pagal...coz according to her I'm still childish..

Awww and thanks for calling me Zoe 😳..love u loads❤️

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Lovely update
Both were cutie pie in childhood
Like his proposal in childhood
Dilshad knew that they will be together soon. Waiting for his proposal again the way Zoya wanted.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Eshita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

So cute, adorable friendship of jam and pizza eater. Looks like i can read this story again and again. Possibly a fairy tale come true. One question was it beacause of zoya jammy stopped eating jam though it looks like. Definitely not just love at first sight but but also heat meeting at first sight. So this was the reason both kissed each other. A cute story though a short one. Try writing it on alternate days. Thanks for the pm and do pm me. You are an awesome writer for both the stories.

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Aww this is so sweet

I just love Asya they r so cute

So since as kids he give her a ring

And they made promises

Aww I loved it

Especially the last bit in his room

He is just so so sexy

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Lovely update
Both were cutie pie in childhood
Like his proposal in childhood
Dilshad knew that they will be together soon. Waiting for his proposal again the way Zoya wanted.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thank you! Dilshad is like Cinderella's godmother she will help them no matter what 😆

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: arakad

Hey there. ...I'm gonna call u Mouni...I like that...don't worry my mom calls me pagal...coz according to her I'm still childish..
Awww and thanks for calling me Zoe 😳..love u loads❤️

Good! Mouni is my favorite nickname 😳 your mom is just like my mom! They just love giving nicknames! And Zoe is just so cute ❤️...love you too ❤️

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: tikit
So cute, adorable friendship of jam and pizza eater. Looks like i can read this story again and again. Possibly a fairy tale come true. One question was it beacause of zoya jammy stopped eating jam though it looks like. Definitely not just love at first sight but but also heat meeting at first sight. So this was the reason both kissed each other. A cute story though a short one. Try writing it on alternate days. Thanks for the pm and do pm me. You are an awesome writer for both the stories.

Well thank you! They're just so cute, aren't they? And it's mostly because of Zoya that he stopped eating jam but it's also because of his father, Zoya had left but with his father cheating on his mother, he didn't have something to rely on so he stopped all sweets things that would make him happy..It's just like I say on the second chapter, their hearts recognizing each other. I don't know what to write to make it longer 😕 And I won't write it day by day it's just the beginning so I'm writing like this but I won't do a chapter for each day don't worry about that.😆 And thank you! But I'm not that talented 😳

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: anopama
Aww this is so sweet
I just love Asya they r so cute
So since as kids he give her a ring
And they made promises
Aww I loved it
Especially the last bit in his room
He is just so so sexy

Thank you! We must define their love as a love they began as kids and they will continue as adults 😆

I wanted to add a funny part that's why I talked about his abs😉

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: EddyCurrents
good to read
amazing

thank you 😆

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Eshita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

So will it be zoya who bring sweetness in asads life as he now does not maybe rely or depend on anything sweet in life except his mother, sisters, brother and zoya. By any chance are u going to introduce tanveer maybe as another childhood friend.