Asya/KaBhi OS: The Perfect Vow

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Get well soon sis..:-))

Coming to the os

As usual it was so so amazing

Very well written

I really become fan of ur stories

Amazing one

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BeIndependent

@BeIndependent

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Sweet and interesting ,👏

Take Care, dear. Get well soon. 😃

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Aww, these pieces of fiction are just so warm and fluffy, I'm sorry to say but if you being ill and in bed get you to produce these keep them coming. ☺️

On a serious note, Get Well Soon!

P.S. Update Red!

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome OS...

Loved it a lot...

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Such a lovely OS
I loved it so much...
Asad was so sweet...

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautiful
Loved it so much ❤️

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This is absolutely wonderful !!!!

What a lovely read...enjoyed it so much...!!!

your beautiful stories & always different...lovely concepts...means a treat...!!!!

Thanks for pm 😊

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Damn!

You're sick yet you come up with such awesome stuff!

This is too good!

Well balanced!

Romance and fights totally balanced!

How can you write so amazingly?

This is honestly too good though in the start it was a bit hazy as to what was taking place where...!

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Mojo my jaan hugs🤗

awe u fell ill again poor u why don't u take care of urself

its freezing cold & u want 2 play in snow😆

Just stay in ur blanket wid ur Ipad 2 write amazing stuff😆

hehe just kidding take care of urself yaar health is wealth🤗

Coming 2 OS

u back again wid ur excellence😃

I m so so happy u don't fail 2 amaze me😛

D awesome concepts makes me go gaga over them😳

Asad & Zoya BFF's of there soon 2 b married frnds & their BM & BOH cum wedding planners

they had too much on there plates😆

As soon as Asad entered d caf he had me swooning over his looks

They bicker here too Asya can't b frnds from start na 😆

d cake testing part was awesome I wanted 2 have some too😳

btw I loved how u showed Asad's monologues he was stumped from long time already😉

That part had me surprised too when Zoya suddenly straightened his tie I was like when she became so casual about it 😆

D unexpected kiss did caused a little awkwardness but when Asad came 2 her place after knowing her past & took care of her I was smiling goofily

& d end part of proposal during their dance in Zack's wedding left me mesmerised I felt I was present there at d moment😎

Mojo Jani I don't know from where u bring those mind blowing ideas but they do warms our heart & leave us wanting more 2 read

U deserve all d love hugs kisses & appreciation 🤗👏👏

Quit finding job & start writing ur own novel u'll earn billions & than mayb 1 day ur books get adapted in movies but don't forget 2 ask producers 2 cast Asya(Kabhi) in it😆😉

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