Fun ASYA/KaBhi OS: Emergency Bailout Procedure - (PART TWO/PAGE 5)

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: fatima30
Brilliant
I would love to read Asya's date...

I am glad you liked it! Ahahaha, maybe not a date but there is something else if you still want to read more.

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: cutie15
omg that was amazinggg
You are awesome
I'm really loving your writings these days
Keep up the good work ;)
This os was mind blowing
I loved the ending
How adorably asad kissed zoya and declared her as his
Awww this was very cute
Loved it..:)

Hey there cutie! Aha,

You are awesome! Always making my day with your comments! I am glad you enjoyed it. Aww that is such a compliment, it means a lot coming from you. Thank you for the motivation. And sorry there was less of ASYA but that's how they are, a little of them still blows us away! Zoya was always Asad's!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh
Ahhh!! I loved it!!!! So so cute!!!
I was laughing so hard!!!
Amazing!

Boy am I glad to hear that you found it as funny as me when I was writing it. Otherwise was starting to feel like a clown. I am happy that you liked it! Thank you for your comment!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Amina...
Awesome 👍🏼

Thank you beautiful!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: asyafreva
I'm totally melting!!!

This was so effin' good!

Why the hell did you stop?!

He had a very small appearance but it was enough for us to just combust! Poof!

Damn... Why is this man so damn hot and appealing?

HEY THERE BEAUTIFUL!

I am so glad you liked it and your comment made me feel so great! I didn't know what else to write that's why I stopped, tbh going back I felt like I forgot to describe how HOT our Asad was looking or whatever I had in my mind imagining him, leaning there, all sexy and shizzz!

I literally realized that there wasn't much of him but I agree with you, a little bit of Asad is always enough for us to burn to ashes!

Girl, if only I knew the answer to that question. I ask myself everyday and then drool some more!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing
Abd really very funny too
But no u cannot end it their
Please continue it😊

I am glad you liked it! Ahahaa, I didn't know what else to write! But I might continue it!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Wonderful OS
Loved it
Thanks for pm

Thank you bro! Glad you liked it!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs
Wowww!!!!! That was really awesome...
Loved the way u have written it...
So finally ASYA are going on a date...
U should write second part too...
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you so much lovely! I am glad you liked it!

Will try writing a part two!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jas91
Mojo 🤗
another new OS 😃

OMG that was awesome blossom & so funny 🤣

I love u girl...God bless ur super smart brain which brings this ideas muwah pecking ur head😛

Zoya going on a date wid Zak & teasing Asad their Ass sending her sexy date ready pics😆

Zak seemed nice in start bringing flower wid a smile

but when he took d menu I knew it will b disaster😆

Zoya was remembering how Asad orders 4 her too when they come😉

& than Zak started doing galti pe galti ruining his golden chance 😆

Zoya & Samie were hilarious there each dialogue was spot on Mojo I loved it😃

I m imagining that u r playing Samie here & ur friend is Zoya is it🤣 u said na its inspired
& in d end Asad entered in all his glory man was he in town how he made it so fast😲

but truly saying that's their chemistry Samie was talking about which can burn/lite d whole house on fire😉

Mojo my jaan I love u so much 🤗

U always bring d classiest concepts & I love them all😃

Stay blessed Sweets😛

& take care

Lots of Love🤗

PS- still have 2 catch up wid Revenge😳

JAS! Sweetheart, hope you are doing well! It is so good to be hearing from you after so long!

Happy Belated New Year beautiful, wishing and praying for a wonderful new year for you, full of love, success, good health and happiness!

I am glad you found it funny, I was starting to think I was the only one laughing like a maniac. She was very annoyed that he missed their trio cocktail party and therefore was not indulging much details regarding her date and the fact that he is a player and could be with girls in London so she sent him a picture to annoy his overprotective side! Zak sounded sweet in my head too, it was difficult to make the date into a flop! LOOOL! I loved Samie and Zoya's banter, reminds me of my best friend! But that is not where the inspiration came from. I was in my PJ's when my friend said he'll come pick me up so we can go chill but I was like no way is that happening. And then he called me selfish and apparently I was making excuses. He got called an ASSHOLE and that is where the story started! But he is just a friend, no boyfriend just so that I make that clear! HAAHA!

In my head, Asad's entry was meant to be HOT and mentally I was swooning at the image but I couldnt it pen it properly! Only realised after that he is literally in it for like two lines! BAHAHAHA! But their chemistry, will always top the charts, burn New York to fire!

I love you girl! Thank you for your wonderful comment. I am glad you enjoyed it! And it means a lot. A LOT!

You take care, and dont worry about not reading Revenge, I have no idea what I am doing with that story tbh. You just reminded me that I have a lot of reading to do on IF! If only I can get away from my Kindle, bed and my lazy ass to stop sleeping!

BTW I LOVED THOSE GIFS!

I was melted by the first one, second one had me thinking and third one I had decided I am going to write you a second part! BUT BUT, my second shots never turn out good so I am warning you. I was actually writing this OS for fun and as quick thing so Idk how this second will turn out. But I will try, for your sake!

MWAH! Much love doll

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