ASYA MOHABBATH KE BINA ZINDAGI ADHOORI part 14 page 35 11 oct 2016 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it
Zoya got to know abt Ayaan & asad.
Liked the hug scene
So it was revealed that ghafoor ahmed Siddiqui was Zoya father
Angry asad. But I think so he will stay for Zoya as he promised.
Update soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing hope Asad gets some sense and don't do something stupid do PM when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
But the ending oh boy
So zoya thinks Asad has a gf😆
Oh boy zoya finds her ammi grave and her abbu all in one day
Asad is red with anger seeing who her abbu is
He leaves
Not nice Asad
Cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Dhasuuu update loveddd it tooo good plz con soon thanks for pm😛😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww poor Zoya
Asad is leaving her
😭
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Love it dear..looking forward..plz continue dear
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Sorry for not updating for a long time giuys.

NEXT UPDATE:

Zoya looks at asad who takes his car looking at both of them with pure hatred nad anger.

Gafoor: aavo beta , humare ghar chalythe hain

Zoya:par abbu, hum apke ghar

Gafoor:apke ghar nahi beta, humara ghar

Zoya is about to speak something but gafoor pleads zoya n takes her with him

In the car, zoya is in deep thoughts

Zoya mv: meine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mein us insan ki beti banungi, jo mere shauhar ke parivaar ko ithna problem kiyahai

Kya asad ke parivar vale ab mujhe accept karenge

Mein kaise unhe face karungi, mere abbu ke vajah se hi unke parivar bikhaad chuki hai

Asad ne mujhe jis gussa ke sath dekha muje nahi lagtha ki ab meri unke parivaar mein koyi jagah hai

N silent tears make way through her eyes

Gafoor sees this .

Gafoor: beta, rona math . sab hai tumhare parivaar mein. Ab tum humare ghar mein ek pari ki tharah jeeyogi beta.

Mein ek bath poochna chahtaha hoon, tum yahan kahan rehethi ho

Zoya: mein newyork mein rehethi hoon abbu, ammi ke kabar dekhne ke liye Bhopal aaya tha, aur apne jiju ke dost ke ghar mein raha mein

Gafoor: achi bath hai beta, lekin ab tum vahan nahi rukna, ab tum SIDDIQUI MANSION mein rahogi.

Zoya: par abbu

Gafoor:arrey humari ghar aah gayi

Zoya looks at the Siddiqui mansion

Zoya mv: yahi vo ghar jo mere asad ka sab kuch cheen chukka tha, ab yahi ghar mein rahoongi kya?

Gafoor holds zoya hands n brings her inside the house

All others are sitting in the hall

Zoya easily recognises rashid n nikhat from the college fiasco

Humeira: abbu, ye ladki kaun hai?

Gafoor: ye meri beti hai

Shireen: ya allah bhaijaan, ye aap kya keh rahe ho?

Raziya: Siddiqui sahib, ye aap kya keh rahe hain? Apki beti? Vo tho humeira hai

Gafoor: ye meri aur Zainab ki beti hai, Zainab, meri peheli pathni

Rashid: ye aap kya keh rahe hain gafoor sahib

Gafoor: haan meri raziya ke pehale bhi , ek shaadi hui thi, Zainab ke sath, jisse mein mohabtah kartha tha, par humare paribvaar vale nahi mane, jab zoya ko 4 saal kit hi tho Zainab guzar gayi, aur meri ammi ne zoya ko orphanage mein dala tha, aaj hi meine usse mila

Humeira: aap aise kaise kar sakthe hain abbu, aap sirf humare abbu hain, iski nahi

Gafoor: nahi beta , ye tumhare aapi hai

Humeira:hum nahi mathe n she runs away

Razia: aapne aise kaise maan liyaki ye anaath mayoos ladki apki beti hai

Gafoor: razia, tumhari himath kaise huyi meri beti ko aise kehane mein, aur tumne poocha na maine ais e kaise aman liya, kyunki ye bilkul zinab ki tharah dikhthi hai( yes guys, she is a replica of Zainab with very minute changes)

Aur vo isi ghar mein rahegi

All leave, zoya looks at all n gafoor

Gafoor holds hre hand n takes her to a room

Gafoor: aaj se ye tumhara karma hai, tumhari sare cheezein jo tumhare frend ke ghar mein hai, use yahan bhijvane ke liye kaho, ab tum kahin nahi javogi n leaves

Zoya closes the door n tries asad numbr, but he cuts the call, she tries lot of time , after few trils, asad switched off the phone

Zoya: ab vo mujhe nahi chhthe hain, kaise chahenge, meri abbu ke vajah se hi aaj unka ye haal hai n starts crying miserably

On the other side,

Asad is in his room thinking how he came to know that zoya is gafoors daughter

Asad mv: ab mein kya akroon , vo Siddiqui saab ki beti hai, kya karoon ab n gets angry

Dilshad comes inside

Dilshad: asad beta zoya kahan hai, kab aayegi

Asad: patha nahi, shayadh kabhi aayegi bhi nahi

Dil: ye tum kya keh rahe ho beta

Asad: vo us gunegar ki ebti hai ammi

Dil: kis gunegar ki, kya batha rahe ho?

Asad: vo gafoor sab I beti hai n tells what all happened

Dil: tho tumne usse unke sath chod diya kya? Ye tum kaise shauhar ho beta?

Asad: ammi vi india apne abbu ko dundne ke liye aaye hain na

Ab jab unhone use doondliya tho mein use kaise lee avoon

Dil: tho tum usse vahin chod doge kya?

Asad: patha nahi, meien unka phone bhi nahi uttaya ammi

Dil: tum phone mujhe do

Asad: nahi ammi, aap bhi unse bath nahi kerengs

N asad leaves from der

In SM,

Gafoor takes zoya from her room n introduces her to all, all show her faces except Ayaan who smiles at her, evn she smiles back as she knows that Ayaan is her asads brother , while meeting others also she remembers what dey did to asad only

All leave not paying heed to her, zoya returns back to her room n locks the door

She hears a knock on her door

Zoya opens it and sees Ayaan

Ayaan comes inside

Zoya: kya chahiye tumhe?

Ayaan: mein bas tumse baath karna chaha

Zoya: tum kyun bath karna chahthe ho, jab ghar mein aur koyi bath nahi karna chathe hain

Ayaa: kyunki mujhe tumme koyi apne nazar aathe hain

Zoya: kya? Keh rahe ho

Ayaan: baji, ap muj se bade ho, I know hoe u r feeling, plsss ap rona bhandh kijiye, ye apka hi ghar hai, bhale hi aap der se aaye hain

Zo: nahi chahiye mujhe ye ghar , aap log, mujhe nahi patha tha ki mein isghar ki beti hoon n starts crying

Her phone rings at the same time, she sees its dilshad call

Zo: mujhe baat karni hai, pls tum yahan se javo

Ayaa leaves

Zoya picks the call

Zo: ammi mujeh nahi patha tha ki mein inki beti hoon n cries

Dil: tum unki beti nahi, meri bahu ho ,ab rona bhand karo meri zoya bahuth strong ahi

Zo: ammi apko mere sach jaane ke bath bhi asad ke jaise nafrath nahi ahi kya mujme?

Dil: nahi beta, kaisi nafrath tum meri ebti ho, aur tumhare paidaish gafoor se hona tumhari galthi nahi hai beta

Zo: apr asad , vo tho mujhse nafrath karthe hain na n cries

Dilshad ons the video call

Dil:koyi tumse nafrath nahi kartha beta, tum jab chaho ayhan aa sakthi ho ye tumahra hi ghar hai

Zo sees asad coming inside the house n the screen blanks out

Zoya starts crying miserably

Zoya: mujhe nahi rehane iss ghar mein apke nafrath ke sath asad, mujhe nahi rehana, aap mujhe yahan se le jayiye

Inki beti hone se bhi mujhe apki biwi banker hi rehana hai n cries horribly

Someone (gafoor) knocks the door n enters inside

Gafoor:ab rona bandh akro beta, tum gafoor ahmed Siddiqui ki beti ho, aaj se tum aisha aur aaram ke zindagi jeeogi, ye sare kapde badaal lo, ye mere status ken ahi hai, aaj tak tum chahe kaaise bhi jeeyi aaj se aise nahi ho saktha n gives her a packet , isme jo kapde hain usse pehano

Zoya: par abbu , mein aisi hi kapde mein teek hon

Gafoor: nahi beta , vo sab nahi chalega

Chalo jaldi ready ho javo n pushes her inside washroom

After sometime zoya comes out in dresses like Shireen( all gaudy)

Zoya moves like a dead person

In the dining hall, on seeing zoya all leave from der but

Gafoor: kyi kahin nahi jayega ab ,a agar gaya tho aaj ke badh ayhan aane kizaroorath nahi hai

All sit back n eat

Later all retire to their room

Zoya eneter inside the room n sees erself in mirror n starts crying thinking abt her fate

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Happy to see you.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
Gafoor took Zoya to his House and Asad(KSG) left from there leaving Zoya,it was so Sad.😭
Zoya became sad on seeing this.😭
Gafoor introduced Zoya to everyone,they shocked to hear this,it was so Interesting.
Asad(KSG) didn't lift the Call of Zoya,it was so sad.😭
Zoya and Dishad Conversation,,she understood Dilshad,it was so Nice.😊
Zoya wanted to be with Asad(KSG) but she is in this situation,it was so sad.😭
It was so sad to see Zoya's Condition.😭
I hope everything will be fine soon.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

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