Qubool hai: a second chance [link for the second thread=p20]. - Page 13

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update

Loved it

Especially the downfall of tanveer

Sahil scene was cute

And rehan kidnapped

Looking forward to know what happens next

Please continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Aw zoya saw sanam and knows her daughters r together

So tanveer haunting spells r so good and having Najma added to the mix too sweet revenge

So zoya pregnancy at risk and Asad is scared

Rehan kidnapped

Tanveer doom is near

Continue

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Thanks for pm

Rehaan's pov.

My head was hurting so bad. I was going to take Seher out for a date when I got hit by someone. I looked around and it looked like an abandoned house. I tried to got up to leave but I was tied!

Seher's pov.

I was waiting for Rehaan but he was nowhere to be seen. Sanam and I were planning to use our relationship with Tanveer's sons to take our revenge. Both of us were finding it bad to use Rehaan and Aahil but we would use any way to make Tanveer pay for her sins. I looked once more outside but he was nowhere to be seen.

"You seem very in love with this boy!" Badi ammi said behind me.

"I'm not in love with him badi ammi!" I lied because dammit he was so cute and everything.

"Seher beta, you have to learn that being your grandmother, I know you like the palm of my hand. Just like your sisters Sanam and Haaya." She said and I smiled sadly.

"But he will hate me when he would realize that I'm using him to take revenge on his mother."

"Listen to me Seher. He won't hate you because he'll know that you truly love him and you just used your love for him as a weapon to cease your pain, to move on with your life." I cried and I hugged her.

"I love you so much badi ammi!" I was so damn happy to have badi ammi with me to help me go on with my life.

I had waited for Rehaan but he never came. I was sad but I didn't show it to anyone. I had cooked with Haaya who actually had the same bond with me as the one she had with Sanam. Haaya turned around and I pulled flour on her head.

She glared at me then she threw an egg at me. I laughed and she laughed as well. I hugged her so we were both covered with egg and flour.

"Allah miyaan!" Sanam shouted. "You did a food fight!" She said with signs as well so that Haaya would understand.

"I'm sorry I'm the one who started this..I'm gonna.." I was apologising when she threw milk towards me.

"This is for not inviting me!" We continued our fight not even noticing that badi ammi was here. Haaya was holding Sanam as I was pouring chocolate all over her face then I felt water on me and when I looked in front of me, baddi ammi was holding a bucket and Sanam along with Haaya were as soaked as me.

She smirked then looked around her.

"Look at this mess! You're going to clean it!" She declared with signs as well and we just nodded.

"That makes me remember when Asad wanted to cook for Zoya..The mess he made in the kitchen was nothing compared to what you have just did!" She said.

"But badi ammi, he was alone but it's the three of us who did this, so that's normal." Sanam declared and badi ammi put whipped cream on her face.

"Don't try to argue with me and do your job!" badi ammi said and Sanam just pouted and cleaned our mess with Haaya and I.

After we cleaned the room, I called Rehaan and he picked up.

"Rehaan?"

"Mr Khan, his phone and keys are there. I had written a letter to his mother saying that she had to come to the Godiya factory."

"Ok Saif, you can go, my wife will take care of him."

No one's pov.

Asad didn't notice that he had pressed the answering button so Seher had heard the conversation between Saif and him. Seher was pretty disturbed to hear this but she knew that she had to go there. So she left with Sanam to the Godiya factory.

Zoya was giving water to Rehaan, her burqa was still on her face.

"Please tell me who are you?" Rehaan asked again. Zoya finally removed her burqa and Rehaan got the shock of his life.

"Seher?!" He exclaimed.

"Nahin Rehaan. I'm Seher's mother, Zoya." Asad was staying in the corner of the room while Zoya was explaining everything to Rehaan.

"So my mother is the reason behind all those awful things!" He said with tears in his eyes.

"Rehaan beta, I have to ask you something. Are you her first born child?" Zoya asked and he nodded.

"What will you do to her? Will you kill her?" Rehaan asked.

"Nahin Rehaan, we're not like her. We're going to make her reveal all her crimes while we record her then we'll send her to jail thanks to it. Rehaan we don't want to harm you or your brother Aahil but your mother has destroyed our life. She has taken my family from me." Rehaan was understanding Zoya's point of view but would he be capable to stand against his own mother??

"Rehaan!" he heard Aahil shout.

"This is my brother Aahil." Zoya looked at him surprisingly. What if Aahil was the one who found the letter? Zoya and Asad hid themselves as they watched the scene. Tanveer was with Aahil and they sighed. When they came in front of Rehaan, Asad and Zoya came into view.

"Tanveer!" Zoya shouted

"Seher, don't you think that it's dangerous?" Sanam asked while they were driving to the Godiya factory. "Plus we didn't even say to badi ammi or Haaya anything, they will be worried."

"Sanam please, stop it and just do what I tell you and nothing will happen." Seher ordered.

"Jeez, badi ammi was right about your bossing attitude!" Sanam exclaimed but held her sister's hand as they approached the factory. They entered the factory and saw something unreal. Their parents were standing before them!

"Tanveer today is the day your reign is ended. You have destroyed a family, my family, you separated a mother from her son, you separated me from my family, you killed my father, Rashid abbu, you made my poor little Sanam see her parents being stabbed and you separated my babies from each other but you'll pay for your sins Tanveer. Today itself!" Zoya said. Seher and Sanam admired their mother, she was like a goddess and was facing Tanveer like a warrior.

"I was trusting you Tanveer but you decide to chose power over friendship! You destroyed our friendship for money, you destroyed my life, my mother, my family for money! What did we do to you?! Does it bring you satisfaction to know that because of you I have been paralysed for 17 years! Do you know how much it hurts to know that this friendship we had, has been destroyed by you because of your love for power?!" Aahil was shocked to hear that his mother was this bad.

"Stop it! You had chosen your..how do you call her again? Ah your musibat magnet! You had chosen her over me! What I wanted was just to give a name for my son! I did all of this for Rehaan!" Tanveer said. Then she put out a gun and pointed it towards Zoya. Asad was going to ran towards her when she said:

"If you move, I'll kill her."

"Ammi!" Seher shouted running towards her mother while Sanam had gone to look for help and Tanveer smirked. "Oh! We have another Zoya!" Tanveer said and as soon as Seher was near her, she hit her with her gun.

"Sanam/Seher" Aahil and Rehaan shouted at the same time.

"Have you seen! She played with you hearts to take revenge on her parents death!" Tanveer said and Aahil, believing his mother got angry at Seher. Tanveer came near Seher and tied her with a rope.

"Tanveer! Don't touch my daughter!" Zoya shouted.

Tanveer smirked and hit Seher on the head again.

"Ammi!" Both Rehaan and Aahil shouted.

"Don't worry they will be out of our lives soon." She then tied Asad and Zoya. Both of them were in front of Seher and Tanveer was beside Seher. Aahil couldn't do anything as she could harm someone with this gun.

"You know what Zoya? I'm not stupid. I realized that you were alive as soon as I saw you in Rehaan's party few days ago. Anyway I can't see how did you do to find a third person who looks exactly like you and your daughter?" Tanveer declared.

"Leave my daughter and Zoya alone Tanveer!" Asad shouted.

"Why? I had made other plans! You're going to watch your daughter die and you won't be able to do anything to save her!" She declared.

"Ammi! Nahin!" Rehaan and Aahil screamed at the same time. When Aahil tried to save Seher, Tanveer hit him on the head with the gun so he fell unconscious on the floor.

"Seher! Please Tanveer, no! Don't kill her!" Zoya pleaded but Tanveer had already put the gun in front of Seher's unconscious body.

"Say goodbye to your loving daughter!" Tanveer said and when she was going to shoot at Seher, a rock coming from nowhere hit her arm and she let the gun fall.

"Tanveer, you had already made this family suffer but now it's over!" Sanam said as she saw her parents and sister along with Aahil and Rehaan.

"Do you imagine how much it's hard to know that I had a sister who lived in the streets, who had been left all alone just because of you?! Can you imagine how it's hard for a baby to grow up without parents? Can you imagine how it's hard for a mother to see her children dying in front of her? You have destroyed this family and now it's time for you to pay for all your sins! Today itself you'll see that you're not that powerful!" Sanam took the gun from the ground and Tanveer ran towards her. Both of them gripped the gun tightly as they were trying to make the other one drop it.

"Sanam!" Zoya and Asad screamed when they heard the gunshot.

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

be warned its mine

Originally posted by: Perriewinkle

what do you mean?