New Asya ff:~Unspoken words ~ Link to thread 2 on page 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone me nayab here again to share new story based on Asya..i know i know ek story ongoing hai but i will try to complete that too but not promising..M posting prologue and part 1 here..and for your information its not difffrent concept but a typical love hate relationship..😊
hope u guys will like it and if dont toh u can blame sweet-tehs Aapi coz she told me to post😉


Prologue


Asad Ahmad Khan is a Harvard graduate and comes back to his country to take control of his father's business.
Contrary to his father's personality, he is arrogant and a suave business tycoon.
Zoya Farooqui is a witty, clever and a friendly girl who's studying in a good medical college. When she meets him, she dislikes him instantly because of his snobby attitude. Her personality doesn't click with him either as he is more of an unemotional guy.
But as time progresses, they find that they are not that d ifferent and gradually develop a liking for each other. Just when Asad decides to leave his ego and stubbornness to marry her, he discovers something about her that shatters him completely. Believing that he had been fooled by a girl lower than him, he tries in all ways to hate her. The result being that life becomes miserable for both of them.
But how long will this continue before he finally comes to know the truth and would it be too late for both of them to mend things?...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part -1

Time To Go Back
She still didn't know where to go at this middle of the night. But she would figure that out...she always did. Walking towards the gate, she started thinking about whether her home would be a good place to go or not when she bumped into someone.
"Oh, I'm sorr- " she stopped just in time.
It was Asad with a livid expression on his face. Not a big deal for her. He always had that kind of
expression on his face... She didn't say anything- she had had too much of him.
She turned away from him- she didn't want any talk whatsoever with him. She had barely taken a few steps when his voice called from behind her.
"Do you know how worried I've been? For the past five hours I have been going berserk trying to find you."
She turned around. For a moment, she thought that he...
"I couldn't even tell my family about your whereabouts." He spoke every word with gritted teeth now.
"Does it matter?" Her face flushed with anger at his words.
His expression slackened a little. It was as if he was a fighting for a response. Zoya stood for like a very long time before he finally answered;
"Doesn't matter to me but it does to the family."
She wanted to cry now but crying in front of him was the biggest mistake she could ever make. So, she kept quiet, fighting her feelings down. How could a person be this cruel, she thought. Her sister had said it wrong 'he wasn't a borderline running between good and evil. He was purely mean.'
"The car is outside. Come quickly." He didn't wait for her response. Something that he never did. And never will, Zoya thought.
"Maybe you didn't hear me right when I said that I didn't want this marriage anymore, Mr. Asad. I really meant what I said today." He stopped at her words.
"Didn't YOU hear me right, when I said I want you to come outside?" She looked at him amazed; she
was at a loss for words. Was he going to keep doing this? Wasn't he even going to listen to what she had to say?
"Or are you waiting for me to take you back home forcibly?" He continued.
She almost shouted at him, "I DON'T WANT THIS MARRIAGE. I DON'T WANT..."
"I don't want it either," his reply was simple and honest. "But as if now, I will have to tolerate this
crappy thing. So don't make it harder on me than it already is."
They both glared at each other. Then suddenly, he grabbed her by her arm and almost dragged her
outside the building. There was no one besides them on the street. His car was parked at the entrance.
He made his way towards it.
Within no time, they were both sitting inside the car. Zoya showed some resistance so Asad had to
forcibly push her inside. Once inside the car, he started driving it back to their home.
"And let me tell you once and for all. If you ever run away like this in the future, I'm not going to try
and find you. I am going to tell your family that you have decided to separate from me." he looked
straight ahead on the road as he said this. "And in case I haven't made myself clear, I'LL DO IT." he
added.
"My family trusts me, Mr. Khan. They won't believe..."
"Then I'll make them believe it. And you know that it's not at all hard for me."
Zoya became quiet. Although she was still angry at him but she had to admit that he did do anything
he said. So she didn't want to try his patience and besides, there was no way to get rid of him. If only
she knew why he was doing this to her...he had not always been like this. Sure, he had been arrogant
and brusque since the beginning but it was something that he was with everyone. Then why did he
react like this just with her only...
Whatever the reason was, she didn't have enough time to ask. They were both at the home now. The
guard was opening the gate. Asad parked his car in the driveway.
"Go inside quietly. Just don't create any noise," he said, while taking the key out of the engine.
"Everyone's sleeping. I don't want them to wake up."
By now, the guard had come to open his door.
They both came out of the car and made their way towards the main door. But at that very moment, the
door opened from inside. Asad's Abbu had been waiting for them.
"Where were you?" He directed his question at Zoya with a worried expression.
Before she could give him any reply, Asad said; "She was with me Abbu. I had found her long ago. It
was just that we decided to stop by her house which made us late."
Zoya looked at him disbelievingly.
A smile came across his father's face now.
"Oh- you should have stayed there for the whole night then?" He said, moving away from the door to allow them to cross it. "Why did you come back?"
Both of them were quiet now. They didn't know how to answer this question. But thankfully, his father didn't insist for one and before they could even think for a suitable response, he turned around to go to
his room.
"Does this satisfy you now?" Asad asked as soon as his father had closed the door behind them. "I have to lie to my Abbu because of you." His voice and face was full of hatred for her.
And with this, he went upstairs to go to his room.
*******
Zoya woke up early the next morning. Asad had created so much noise while getting ready for
office that she couldn't sleep. Lying on the bed with her eyes open, she thought about last night.
Asad had not let her go. She was once again stuck with him in this house. If she was really going to be stuck with him god knows till when, she decided to make it as torturing for him as it was for her.
Standing up from the bed, she went into the bathroom to brush her teeth. And when she came out, she had a plan for how to irritate him in the best possible way. She smiled at her own childishness.
"What are you doing late at night?" Asad's mother asked Zoya who was sitting idle on the dining
table with food on it.
"Why aren't you eating?"
"Ma," she replied. "I'm waiting for Asad since it is not suitable for a wife to eat without her husband.
I'll start eating only when Asad is back."
Dilshad stared at her daughter-in- law for a long moment and then, a smile lit her face.
"Why don't you just say that you miss him?" she said teasingly.
Miss him! Zoya thought. I would rather not see his face for the entire lifetime.
But she managed to give a smile to her mother and said, "You see ma, I have been trying to call him but he doesn't pick up my call."
Dilshad understood. "Don't worry, I'll call him myself."
And then Dilshad took out her cell phone and started dialing her son's number.
"Hello," it was Asad on the phone.
"Asad, where are you my child? Why don't you come early tonight to eat dinner with us?"
"Sorry ma. It won't be possible today. I have a lot of work here." He replied.
Her mother decided to use another tactic to bring him home.
"Oho! So much work that you can't take out time for your own family! Zoya is waiting terribly for you here. She wouldn't even eat food without you." She said, smiling at Zoya.
It took some time for Asad to register what she had just said. Then realizing the truth, he said to her mother. "Ma, why don't you give the phone to Zoya?"
"He wants to talk to you." Dilshad handed the phone to Zoya.
"Hello baby!" Zoya said, without worrying about what her mother would think. She had to play as
long as it took to irritate him.
"Baby?" Asad asked her. "Anyways, what the hell is this? You can't eat food without me, since when
did that happen?"
"Since the time I realized I haven't been a good wife to you. But now I have decided to change myself."
Asad rolled his eyes in irritation. As if she knew that he had just done that, she further added;
"When you'll come home, we'll eat the food together. Like true husband and wife."
"O shut up!" He remarked. "I'm not coming home. If you don't want to eat, it's your choice. But stop
disturbing me and my family."
She pretended as if she had not heard him; "OK then. I'll wait for you, love." She feigned to coy at the
last word.
"What the..." Asad said angrily.
But Zoya had already cut the call.
Asad threw his own phone at the table. Zoya was getting impossible for him now, he thought
angrily.
******
Zoya looked at the clock that hung on the wall. It was 1:00 at night. To her dismay, Asad still
hadn't come. The food had gone cold by now. She groaned in frustration. The aroma was too much for
her to tolerate now. With one swipe, she grabbed a plate and poured the gravy on it and started eating.
*******************************
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Edited by Kanwal4salman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved
Me first 😳
Awesome blossom
Amazing start
What can I say
When I started read prolonge it's mysterious
But part one dashing

First part 👏
Asya fight was too qute 😳
Drama mashaalah
Rashid advice them to stuck out in night 😉😳
Loved it totally
Hugs
Miss you so much 😊😭
Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story niyu 🤗
And yaar awesome start love it 😳
So they don't like each other 😲
Why o why?
But it's so interesting yaar 😳
Love yaa ❤️
Edited by shailu123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
unres

prolouge was good n quiet mysterious cool soon
what is zoya 's past that asad hates about her?
part1
loved zoya n dil
they both rocked during the show
n a friendly bond here also.
good keep it up.

asad too cruel as for now
hope he turns out cool soon.
why fear when zoya is here?
anyways

interesting plot
loved it
reading it was jouful.
so enthusiastic

did u see the post regading zee tv appointing writers
do take part if possible
my best regards r with u
all the best.

thanks for the pm.
do cnt soon.
waiting here.
bye bye.
Edited by ashlesha2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res sabke liye😉 teh di, ankie,shampoo,sue,mini di,n all my ksgianzzz🤗😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww aju hugs 🤗 i knew mai nahi aati tb bhi ur thr to res for me
love yyyooouuu
congooo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajuswa19

res sabke liye😉 teh di, ankie,shampoo,sue,mini di,n all my ksgianzzz🤗😳

🤗love uu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unress at pg 1
sue di
howz u?

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