[~MRS. FANGURL*~] ~ REVIEWS THREAD # 2 - Page 13

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update bro. loved it.
Both their emotions were beautifully described.
Continue soon plz.

Originally posted by: kadia717

Unressed at 12...😳

Originally posted by: kadia717

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Unres here tooo...

ufff... how much will you stress!! >> I told na take time.. hmm.. anyways but soo happy to see your comment.

Hiii tedhe medhe tamater flying mamu motu khitpit hiipppooo🤗

hehe hello jolly queen.. sorry energy less hai isiliye short name ..😆

Sry for being very late here...😳 Dnt mind...😆

its perfectly ok.. not minding hehe.

Hehe hw bad rania is...huh...

hmm bure bure log mein bhi accha dil hosakta hai.. but haan she is a different type of human being. 😉 bad? really? nai to.. I love her..😆

Zoya ko dara diya snack se...stupid kahiki...

hww hww.. haan .. it was bad but it was her pet na.. Jeff naam hai uska..😆

Andd their fight yaar, haan sadly.. ab yehi baaki reh gya tha kya!!! haan.. zaroorat thi.. lol And omg zoya slapped him huh, pagal girl..yup pagal girl but that was accidental.. you will see it in next update but haan slap nahi marna tha. .Cant she see hw much he cares for her, love her...yup ..and she is stuck with guilty and dont know to apologise properly ..Hamesha limitations huh..hmm har past experience have made her like this.. so ,..

Zoya's jelousy and Asad's too in alst hehe..

yup that was awesome.. honi chahiye na..😆

bichari zoya none of her family member was there to console her..

yup that was heart breaking one.

But finnaly najma yaar, great..👍🏼 hehe yup great 😆.. her funny plans lol.. lv najma...❤️ hmm lil bit..😉

Mission asad se I lv u kehlwana start...lol yup.. sounds so interesting ..yup yup.. 😆

Maza aayega aage...haan aayega but do you think? najma plan will succeed.?

Continue soon

yup writing for this only..

Thanxs for pm...

welcome.. but no thanks needed

Urs,

Jolly Queen...😳😃

yours flying motuu hippo😳

Originally posted by: vidhu1

Dekho bhaiyu mai aagayi hehe... sooo happy.. 🤗tight hugs,... and as u said ek din ka rest leke hi read kiya maine!! 😛 😛 oh good gal..😳
Start badi achi thi bhaiyuu... hmm thankuuu
tHan this Rania...oh god..huh!! LOL..😆 your expression?
Good good asad ne use atleast uske dressing sense ke bare mein realise toh karwaya atleast!! 😛 haan that was good thing.. hope she understands ..😊
Than snake dekha aur Zoya behosh jogayi!! 😲 yup tragic and horrific..
RAnia bhi naa.hehe.. ..but it is good that she realised her mistake... yup her mistake.. but she was too excited to flaunt her pet..😆
Aap uski sTorykab reveal kar rahe hoo mai badi excited ho rahi hoon jan ne ke liye ki uski stTory kya hai ki hmm... chapter 13 or 14 mein hogi.. 😉 chill down but its not intended to be read by you.. bohot sad hai and not for lil kid thingo.. 😉 plz dont be excited .. its extremely heartbreaking.. (I suggest you to skip it and in return I will send you small summary after you read that update..) abb wo madam lock hone se bhi darti hai!! yup all related to her painful past..
Than zoya ne asad ko slap kardiya? 😲 yup.. accidently kitni limitations hai... hmm zoya believes in love without physical intimacy so ..😉
Uff phir dOno ki tabiyat kharab...haan ek duje se na milne ke gham mein dono hi doob gayi bimari ke bhawandar mein.. 😆good to see how much asad care for her... yup that was sweet..
Lolwa...maaz bhaiyu phaas gaye ki sadia ko bhi shak ho gaya!! 😆 haan bohot nach rahe the na maaz bhaijaan.. phas gaye online chatting se..will reveal it later.. how and when it happened.. but very small scene.
than najma...OMG kitni mature bacchi hai!! 😆 🤣 yup OMG!😆
Bhaiyu what awesome dialogues u wrote!! 👏 Maza aaya... 🤣 aww really ?? thankooo!!
ATlast jealousy track shuru... awesome!! yup finally but it will be like rain.. on off and then on and then .. chalte rahegi real life type.. not like TV shows. hehe
Bhaiyu srsly maza aaya padh ke... aww so glad ..😳
Next update mein aur maza aayega right!! yup right.. bohoottt bohhott but its a mixed update.. things will be shifting i=to asya focus and mostly zoya story as its her story.. Maaz bhaijaan story is sidelined bcoz its not prime plot. Afterall maaz ka secret jo bahar aajayega!! 😉

hmm secret is already out.. we will have a quick wedding update of maaz but in reality it will be with all bells and whistles.. but as we are reading zoya's story so Maaz's story is limited with POV of zoya and her troubles.

Originally posted by: _RagNaMyLove_

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