[~MRS. FANGURL*~] ~ REVIEWS THREAD # 2 - Page 45

Originally posted by: Chillichick

Firstly never be apologetic for what you believe in and what you express. Hmm.. True. But for what is it..? I can't understand lol.

Honestly i ended up spending an entire day on reading this in one go but it was absolutely worth it. Omg really.. I'm touched.. Thank you soo much sista. Your message made my day.

Each and every chapter. :))

And you have been realistic . Hmm.. Yup I love writing realistic stories because I think unrealistic ones are waste of time.. They doesn't bring that unique interest and emotions I want the readers should feel from my works.

The incidents you mentioned were highly disturbing and there were pretty heavy chapters. I'm sorry for disturbing parts, actually that period in my life was going from a bad turn.. Hmm heavy in the sense lengthy? Or emotionally filled. I'm I wanted then both. 😉

But you have written the absolute reality of today's world. Yes and I love doing it.

Not all stories are roses and hearts and kisses.

Exactly.

And i found it simply beautiful how you developed their love story.

Thnx again. Glad you found it beautiful that way.

They may not have had the ideal love story but then in a world of reality where does ideals exist?

Absolutely right... Agree word to word.

Everyone has the right to live their own story and battle through their journey...

Yes.. Right

My heart broke reading Maria's story,

Hmm.. I'm sorry. I don't want to say anything more on her story. Because It has a party from my life... ... ..

Rania's story,

Hmm.. I made her story that way to prove, not all that we hate, hate us back, probably they love us more than our imagination... And many a times we hate ppl watching one of the several angles of their personality.

the times when Zoya felt like an outsider in her own maternal house

Hmm.. That was added so show how life can play dirty games on the wrong time. But it is realistic. Right?

but then also it uplifted hearing how Alisha who wasn't even in blood related become more closer than anyone in her family,

Yes.. And it is realistic because I have many ppl in my life who are like Alisha. And I want to meet then.. But those are just dreams.

how both Asad and Zoya slowly fell in love and not just through words but also through them discovering each other.

That was the main purpose of the story. Glad you felt nice reading it.

But this does teach us that life isn't always rosy and there are no happy endings but just some normal ups and downs...

Yes, exactly. After all the meaning of life is ups and downs just like the heartbeat looks in the ecg.. 😆

Beautiful story!

Thank you so much.

Please do PM me if you write more!

Hmm Ohkay BTW there is an extension to this story called *Dil Se Direct* Please check it for - Untold episodes from the Mrs. FANGURL Story.

I would absolutely love to read your other works!

Hmm for other works please check the complete collection on my website. (Registration and email activation required.)

Lots of love,same to you sista!

Aashka

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Read 6th chappy.. Omg.. You back? Exams? Preparation? 😲 but thankoo so much sista.

It was very sweet ..Yuppy Hehe.

Well portrayed one!! Thnk u again.

From Zoya's birthdy till the first day after their Nikah everything is beautifully penned down..yes.. It was a mighty update.

Both are already in love..now their relationship has to be strengthened!

Yes, exactly..

Rereading this gives a heartwarming feeling..!!😳

Hehe, I know. Yesterday I read chappy 3-4-5 on my flight back india and I cried at few scenes, thankfully the lights were dim and was dad sleeping beside me. Haha. 😆

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Exam preparations are going well!😳

Nowadays busy with online applications for Entrance exams..so while the form get loaded I wander around here..!

Originally posted by: CuteMonsta

(Mummy's only cute lil monster!)

- Cute Monsta (MNsTrous)

Originally posted by: Chillichick

In the last update I guess you had apologised for something but I can't seem to remember either! Sorry! 😕 lol.. that was not for you... but if it was for you then it was an apologize for hurting or making you cry with some parts of the story.. forget it. I just wrote it thinking something else. 😆

Heavy with the emotions... length wise too! 😆

hehe .. that is all I could provide ... **emotions** .. length?? probably my technique of segmenting the story-line into chapters made them lengthy.. lol

I'm sorry to hear that! its ok.. And you don't have to say much! :)) Her life's story is beautifully told how she was the life for many! yup exactly.. She brought smiles and left a deep impact to everyone's memory! yes.. She definitely must have been a beautiful soul! yes she was...🤗

Yes that is true.. We do have the tendency to judge people wrongly with just one glance. yes and that is a bad quality that I too have... We never really know unless we make an effort to know and understand them well. yes right... But you also have to be careful as to who are genuinely caring and those under a pretence. exactly..

Definitely! I have seen this happen to so many people! It's honestly terrible and disgusting how you can turn against someone who is your own? yes, its heartbreaking when we come to know that someone we love a lot not really love us equally or not at all.. that breaks the heart.. secondly feeling left-out is the worst feeling of all.

That sounds really nice and you should hold on to those dreams! those are just dreams .. that make me sad.. You never know how lucky you might be and just happen to meet them! I wished so badly that if I could really walk out and meet them just for a small meeting... It's never good to loose hope! 😊 haha yup hope on things out of my limits. lol

Hahahhahahaha! Couldn't agree more! 😆 hehe yup 😉

Definitely will do!

thanks a ton// here you go the link to DilSeDirect

also if you would like to read my stories on IPKKND ArShi then check these two

1. Half Hearted > (sad ending with a point) >> click here

2. Dil Kinaare > (very emotional but happy ending) >> click here

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Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Reread this during my study-breaks... omg reallyy??? but studies are imp lil sista.. plz dont distract.. and read only when you are free and got time.. but you got exams so plz dont distract.. I want you to score awesome marks. best of luck once again lil sista! 👍🏼

Truly you made CRY, oops sorry for that.. SMILE, LAUGH AND LOVE.. glad I made you smile laugh and love.. hehe.. and Thanks for the comment 😳

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