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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555

just ready your story...wow new reader!! yippie!! very good thank you so much!! and i love that asads boss is twisted etc hehe glad you loved her sis! 😆 and zoya is jealous..yup yup fuming jealous!! .it would have been great if you narrated the big fight they had about his boss hmm we shall have it in next update... as a flashback 😉 hmm it was removed because of the increasing length of the update.. but im assuming there will be plenty more.maybe ... LOL.. but there will be lil bit of bamm bamm dhishoom dhishoom 😆..looking forward to more updates.hmm next update will be here in 10days.. I hope so.. and there is only 25% story left ..😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
Phew!!

Finished next Chappy (Chapter # 11) scene list!

There are possibly 10 Scenes, hard to imagine it in one Part! So get excited we will have Part A and B ... I'm purposely delaying to get them both released same day!

Hmm... One thing!

Its (romchy-jolsy) beautiful!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice
So we have jealousy
Fights can't believe she slapped him
Both r not talking to each other
Both r in grievance of each other
Hope it is fixed soon
Poor zoya has no one in her family to help
Asad is a good guy and hubby
Hope Najma work be fruitful for Asya
Don't like Raina
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Very nice

Thank you so much sis. 😃
So we have jealousy
Yup full jealousy and on both sides. Hehe.
Fights can't believe she slapped him

Hmm something happened which made her slap unintentionally. And suddenly.
Both r not talking to each other
Yup broken hearts... And now they both are upset with Each other.
Both r in grievance of each other
Yup.. Sadly.
Hope it is fixed soon

Hmm It will be like fixing and then Rania will trick and then it will be distances... Until something big happens.
Poor zoya has no one in her family to help
Yup all busy.
Asad is a good guy and hubby
Haan he is but? He can be used in a bad way by someone easily.
Hope Najma work be fruitful for Asya

Lol I hope.. Najma and sultan did so much harkwork lol. I wish their efforts don't go in vain.
Don't like Raina

Hmm yup she is scary and dangerous. But you will tell the something else when her character ends in Chapter 14.

Continue
Hmm next update is a bit delayed. 😉 25th March. I guess.

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: teja21

nice update dear

thanx fr d pm


Thank you so much sis for your comment and taking time to read! 😊

Welcome. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update dear
i loved it very much
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

amazing update dear
i loved it very much
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear


oye first of all yeh dear dear kya hai hmm? I'm your bhai do you really remember me? hmm hmm?

now coming to comment..

hmm.. thank you so much lollipop sista! 😳
glad you loved it so much..
hmm next update is delayed but its worth the wait..
and no thanks for the PM ..


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(btw TEI wale FF par no comment? )
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update bro. loved it.
Both their emotions were beautifully described.
Continue soon plz.

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