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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Beautiful 😭⭐️

Very emotional had me looking for tissue

So so sweet I could have her that " please "

So glad he was not clueless and found the culprit so quick

Aww love them together at last

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

It was so beautiful

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Amazing work dear

Loved reading it to the core

Extremely beautiful and just took me back to the precious asya days

😊

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Such a beautiful & well written OS Choco...

how beautifully you portrayed Asad's state...his fear...his break down...& his words when he hugged Ayaan & confessed...that made me cry...

AsYa moments at end...m speechless...!!!!

Loved it !!!!

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Omg that was just amazing.. I really dont have words to express..!
We all wanted something like this to happen..!
Thank you soo much dii for writing this one.. 🤗
I loved it.. asad finally realised that zoya's accusations on tanveer weren't false and he realised importanance of zoya in his life as well..:)
I didn't want it to end.. 😳
thank you soo much for this.. love you.. 🤗

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Mine

Unress

Berry.. Hope you are good..😊

This was a beautiful story.. I just loved every bit of it..❤️

This was different from the show but it was so better.. 👏

Zoya pushed Asad out of harm's way and faced the blunt of it..

She was so badly injured..

My heart went out to Asad.. He was just shocked and speechless..

Seeing the love of your life so badly hurt in front of you..😔😭

But thank goodness everything was well in the end..

If anything had happened to Zoya, I wonder how Asad would have been..😭

Glad that Ayaan did enquire into the whole matter and realised it was not an accident..

Everyone now knows what Tanveer did.. She will be punished.. 😡

The most I liked about this story was that it was simple and really focussed on Asad and Zoya rather than Tanveer and her misdeeds.. 👍🏼

But are you going to write a part 2? If you aren't writing, then please do..😳

I would love to read how Asad takes care of Zoya and also show Tanveer her place..😃

That would be awesome..😃

Please make a part 2 Berry.. 😊

Love you loads! 🤗

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: yumna.imad
Ek aur 😆

Yeh IBP ka aue jas , sue, Aur Mayur bhai ka 😆

Thank You for the RES* Yumna...😊

Beautiful O.S Choco..👏👍🏼

Very Emotional and Brilliantly written 👏⭐️

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

hii choco

very beautiful os yaar

i just love it really

very well written

me to fan ho gayi hu aapki writting ki

gud job

thanks for the pm dear

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hello My Lovely,

Finally i get to read this beauty. U kno i need to think of new lines to describe the kind of work u n sis do. My tareefs luk so old infront of this now.

But for the time being u will hav to do guzara on this only.

Chocooo.. this was absolutely amazing. I loved every bit of the os from the moment Zoe pushed Asad to save him till their unsaid but heartfelt confession.

Goshh.. im fida over this Asad. The way he expresses his deepest emotions makes me go gaga over him though it hurts a lot to see him shed even a single tear.

You know I honestly feel that if QH was done around the lines of this, it would have been awesome. We wud have got the best, intense AsYalicious moments but then again, gul's plan was to torture us by givn dat crap..

Anyway I have to thank you for letting me live these few beautiful moments with my AsYa. Your words brought AsYa alive, i could feel n visualize them in front of me.

The most heartbreaking scene was when Asad watched the paramedics walk away with Zoya. It kills to see someone take away ur life, the one person who means more than ur own life, but to see Asad expressing the same in words, surprised me and broke my heart further too.

Im glad Ayaan kept his cool n called for the police. One smart guy. If he wudnt hav done so, everyone wud hav accepted the incident as an accident not a preplanned murder attempt.

A mother is someone whose support and love can help anyone in the toughest of situations. I loved how Dilshaad gave Asad the confidence, the push to gather himself and become the Lion we all know and to let the world know wat it means to even glance at Asad's family with an evil gaze.

Ufff Allah, i honestly said Shukar hai, when Asad joined the dots of the events occuring since that witch's entrance in KV. I had wanted to bang my head on the wall n den slap Asad in the show but here i wanted to hug him tight. Sooo glad he cud see beyond the web of lies that cunning woman had spun and a friendship that meant nothing infront of the relationship he shared with Zoya.

The moment when they smiled sadly at each other. Aah. My heart bechara went on an overdrive. Seriously, you dont have to write a mushy scene, the way u describe their emotions makes me fall in love with them just as they gaze at each other.

The fear, the pain, the unsaid words, that confession, everything was so painfully beautiful.. hayyyee

I loveee AsYa but i loveee you infinite times more Choco. Muaah.