AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 82

Finally got comment

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Pia 🤗

Hope u have been fine

I know I m late again but lets get quickly 2 My comnts 😆saving my bakbak 4 some other day😆

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PART 10

Zoe is such a disgusting women every1 hates her 2 d core🤪

threatens Zoya & even insults her just bcuz she thinks too high of herself😡

I wonder how these 2 r twins they r poles apart just like black & white...Zoe is black & Zoya is white 😆😉

Asya's part was wonderful

so our dear Asad can't resist her but in d end always blames her lol😆it happened 2wice in 1 night that he kissed her & than blamed her😆

I so wished Zoya would have told d truth how different theirstory would have been😕

so they ended up wid fight & sad note

PART 11

I thinkMary decoded d Zoya mystery after Zoe's call😉

that's why she is being more nice wid Zoya or she would have shared all things wid Asad itself 1st thing

Asad tried 2 correct his mistake by paying check what kind of remorse that was 😆

its good Zoya tore that in front of him😆

their journey was Superbly penned

Asad caring her when she panicked, their entry in KV & meeting wid Rashid nicely written👏

Loved Asya's convo in front of Dilshad's portrait

BothAsad & Zoya r carrying their guilt & neglected siblings

PART 12

Asya's dinner wid Rashid scene was very intense

Finally this time Asad gave away all d emotions of his heart out when Rashid began insulting Zoya

btw I loved it how Asad stopped his father its a big deal if u stop ur father any1 else would b other thing but standing against ur father 4 ur wife that's huge & I admire that thing👏

Its good Rashid left cuz we got another Asya kiss but this time no fight happened😆

infact Asad proposed Zoya 2 consider 2 turn there marriage real🥳

but Zoya was sad cuz she wants Asad 2 want her as Zoya not fake Zoe

PART 13

awe Zoya fell sick & Asad came 2 take care😛

It was adorable how she started crying

Asad behaved way to kindly & honestly I loved this part d most😃

cuz they were not fighting or insulting 1 another wid no ego

They behaved like real couples 1 fell sick other cared & they also hadheart 2 heartconvo which I enjoyed😛

not only Zoya but Asad also had fallen 4 her & I was happy when I read he was wishing if Zoya was not Zoe only if he knew his wish was actually reality😆

I m actually disappointed wid Zoya as she's missing every opportunity coming her way. Asad gave her so many chances yet she keeps lying I m afraid Asad will take this against her later.

So wid this my review 4 last 4 chap's is over

Pia u ruined my habit 😳 last time after lot of effort I kept myself regular but see this time u broke ur daily updt rule & see what is my situation 😆

I m telling u come back wid daily wali policy back cuz seriously my morning is boring widout ur shots & that's only way I can stay on time😆

Chal see u & take care🤗

<em>btw how many chaps r left I heard its gonna end soon..how come? abhi toh truth bhi bahar nahi aaya don't tell me 1 saath revelation, confession, d much talked about challenged consummation& Zoe ko punishment ho jayega😲 we won't accept it sachi😆Yeh Chalugiri mat karna ok😆

Hi Jas,

I am doing fine. How are you yaar?

Wow? Itna long feedback 😳 😊

Zoe is a disgusting person. She is kalank on a sister's name. Who would want a sister like this 😡
Mary has decided her...soon you'll know everything in the next chapter :)

Asya are behaving like real couples now. They are sharing bedroom too 😳
Asad has started loving Zoya. He hates the fact that she was with his brother first.
He wished she could be a different person...he'll be shocked and relieved later to know that she is a different person 😆

Hopefully daily updates with next story. I have to make lot of changes in this one so it takes little more time.

Thanks for such an amazing feedBck 😃

Love u 🤗

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

great

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: ksen

Very nice update
Wish zoya could have told the truth
When asad asked whether she is hiding something important
Sure asad will understand her
Thanks for the pm

I am sure he'll understand her but after being little angry
Thanks so much dear for the lovely comment
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Lovely chap
Zoya sick asad taking care
They shared same bed 😳 zoya should have told the truth 😭
Asad has fallen for her he needs to know she's not Zoe
Update soon

I wish she told him the truth too
But it's kind of late now
Zoe is coming back in the next chapter
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: velvetrose

aww nice asad taking care of zoya

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: tuna_star

<font color="#00fff" size="3">Just awesomeee👏👏... thank for writing such a beautiful work... waiting for the next part and asad's reaction when he comes to know the truth...😊😊</font>

Thanks you for your lovely comnent .
All the credit for the story and writing goes to the author of this story :) 👏
He'll come to know the truth in the next chapter
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Asad is melting
Seems that live is on its way
Nice
Continue soon

He is melting
He is falling in love 😳
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: -ovi-

awesome update

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Update soon

Waiting eagerly

Will update tonight 😊