AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 55

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Oh god that was so so emotional..!
I felt bad for both of them..
Their kiss was urgent and so intense..!
Zoya and asad are in a mess..
God when will zoya tell him the truth..??
Awesome part..:)

Happy new year ..:)
Have a great one..:)



You are right they are both in a mess
I feel bad for both of them too :(
Will update the next chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Pia

Happy New Year dear🥳

Have a wonderful 2016

It was really nice having met u in d past year

so tyt hugs dear 🤗

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<em>coming 2 updt

it was fantastic

Asya got married & she moved wid Lily

Asya's every scene shows Asad wants 2 have Zoya but his hatred 4 Zoe keeps him away & forces 2 hurt her wid his hurtful words

he was fighting his feelings but Zoya was hard 2 resist

but in all this only Zoya is getting punished 4 no fault of hers & it looks in future Asad will also look at her deceive but not d pain she's bearing



It's really nice to meet you too Jas 🤗

You are right he wants to hate her but he can't
He is getting angry because he wants her
She's nothing like what his brother has described about her
Poor guy is just too confused
Feeling bad for both of them
Will update the next chapter soon:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

He kissed her yay!! Awesome update continue soon pls and happy new year to u as well wish u all the best ! :)



Thanks
Glad u liked it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


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awe Pia not only u infact I was also missing ur story hehe...ur stories r must wid start of a new day.

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Sachi mere liye gap dale Pia ke u were busy wid Christmas & all😆😉


lol yep that's a good point story kaise badti aage😆


I know right I loved Asya wid kids in ur previous stories 2 Asad always is a softy wid baby Lily😳


who toh we already know Zoe ko sab biadne toh aana hi hai

just want 2 know 1 thing Pia that now Asad is treating Zoya wid so much hatred thinking she's Zoe so will he do d same wid Zoe when d whole truth b out...Cuz really I want that 2 happen all these years Zoya bear d hurt due 2 her sister & even now I want Asad 2 take avenge of all her pain & tears & also bcuz Zoe can't get away everytime just like that...She has 2 pay atleast this time...even if its not in original story u have 2 add it plz😳


<em>now see ya later

Enjoy u new year🤗



In the book Zoe's character didn't get any punishment
But in my story she will for sure
I have changed quite a bit of story from the original 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Very well written update u have made changes in d original story so I really appreciate ur work
They finally get married wow lily is damn cute
That kiss 😳 I'm d only one who don't want the truth out I'm loving this love hate relationship btw asya
Asad wants her but doesn't want to want her 😆 poor guy
Eagerly waiting for next update continue soon
Happy new year



Hey dear, I'm glad to know you've liked the changes I made to the story
You'll find many more in the future too 😊
I'll update the next chapter tomorrow 😃
Thank you again for the lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

Awesome update..

The nikaah is finally over..
I really wanted asad to know the truth before the wedding..
But..
Zoya is hurting so much..
So much of accusations, humiliation and embarrassment..



I wish Asad could find out the truth before the Nikkah too 😕
He'll take his revenge too...he loved Ayaan and finds Her responsible for his brother's death
Unfortunately he doesn't know that's the wrong person 😕
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice..
Feeling terrible for zoya..
I can't blame asad...
For him it was Zoe who ruined his family..
N zoya.. I won't blame her ...
She is doing all this for lilly..
Plz don't make zoya suffer more..
If truth is going to come..
I want zoya to tell it to asad ...rather than him knowing from other source... Lastly from Zoe..
I really don't want that to happen...
Plz update soon...
Thanks for pm..
Happy New year



There is still some more torture for her...next chapter 😕
Asad Wil find out the truth from zoe only
Glad u liked this update
Will post the next chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#0000cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hey Pia..😊</font>

<font color="#0000cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I hope ab toh NEW YEAR aagaya hoga tumhare paas...toh HAPPY NEW YEAR 2016 to you too🥳😃</font>

<font color="#0000cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Coming to this part...well yes it was longer than the last time...😆</font>

<font color="#0000cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">It was very Good and Well written...👏⭐️</font>

<font color="#0000cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Still Asad ke accusations and Zoya ka charade and jhooth ab they give me like why are they doing thiss😡😆</font>

<font color="#0000cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Liked reading this part..👍🏼</font>

<font color="#0000cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soonish..😃</font>



Thanks Mayur
Glad u liked this chapter 😃
Ha ha yes ab new year ho gaya
Bahut party bhi kiya
What about you? 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

gr8 part

asya convo very sensitive
zoya is really feeling hurt
excited for next
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next



Thanks dear 😃
Glad u liked it
Will update soon

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