AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 54

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Happy New year...

Wow the update was incredible.
Loved it so much.
Tfd pm too.
Eagerly waiting for next part.



Thanks for the lovely comnent dear
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

I feel so bad for Zoya...


No doubt Asad is going to feel deceived but what about the fact that Zoya is hurt almost at every point?

She is bearing the hatred dedicated to her sister and neither are the haters reducing any hatred...

She should give up... She has a right to live her own life and enjoy the love and warmth...

Oh a happy New year to you too! Hope that this year you write even more wonderful stories for us to read!😆😳

P.S. :Next update? Can't wait for your updates you see!😉

Aashka



Thanks Aashka
I m so glad u liked this chapter
Will update the next chapter tomorro for sure 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Happy new year dear

Lovely update😊



Thanks Muskaan
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Happy new year to You too

Feeling so bad for zoya.
He is not leaving a single chance to torture her and the poor soul can't do anything..
She is paying for the sins of her twin sister.
She is already falling for him and now with this closeness really feeling bad for her.
God knows what's more in her kitty.
She still has to go to India and another round of torture awaiting for her.
All she is doing is taking care of her niece.
He was the one who was mentioning about intimacy and he is the one who cross limit.
Am really hoping that she will get all happiness she deserves.
Please continue soon



Him being intimate is his way of taking revenge
He hates Zoe and blames her for his brother's death
He got married to take revenge and so he is doing it
Glad u liked this chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

That was an amazing part
Loved it
Beautifully written
Thanks for the pm



Thanks 😊
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: raspi

it was a nyc update he gave hee allowance n tnxx fr pm n hapiiieee newww year



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Happy New Year

I was partying hard the is y I am all the way on the 3rd page
Aww such a nice update
So the nikaah happens
Asad mesmerize by his wife
Aww he wants to know y she dressed up
I was surprise to see nikaah
I thought it would have been court seeing it is a business deal
Love him tying her dori so intimate
So they will have to act to be the loving couple
To the world they t normal couple to themselves no
Aww he seems to would have been hurt if she said she think of ayaan
So they kissed Asad tht in s quiet a way to tach a lesson really
😆
But the arc after wiping his mouth but I know damn well he enjoyed it
So the allowance was given guess she has to send it to her money hungry sister
I bet Zoe will even sell her soul for money
Feeling bad for zoya she is fallen for Asad and she has to face the brunt of her sister
Continue



Ha ha you were partying hard and I was getting ready to leave for a party.
I hope you had lots of fun 😛
I've been in party mood for last two days and have not done anything... 😆

Glad u liked this chapter
You are right...poor zoya...she has to face Asad's wrath because of her witch sister
Zoe is too selfish..she'll come when she needs more money 😕
Zoya is in love with Asad. On the other hand he can't figure her out
Will update the next chapter tomorrow evening :)
Thanks Anopama for this lovely comment 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Was a little busy with packing and all so couldn't comment on previous few chapters.

But damn I loved every single chapters. The latest was the best one ofcourse. It's getting hotter, the atmosphere I mean ..lol
Asad is very near to the truth now... I can feel that. Well the story is coming to an end, he is supposed to.
I was awwing overy every little moment Asad and Zoya shared.
And Lily...she's precious. Mwahh.
Update soon Pia.
And Happy new year.



Thanks dear for this lovely comment
Oh! What are you packing for? Are u going somewhere?
Yes, he'll come to know the truth soon
Lily is the best 😳
Will update the next chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: msingh27


mind blowing update as always & brilliantly written...great way to end the year buddy...loved how intense the environment is gettingbetween asya...not liking the taunts by asad though...am kinda a dreading the emotional torture...poor zoya..can't wait for asad to find out the truth soon. thanks for the pm. looking forward to next chapter...Happy New Year my dear




Awww thanks for such a lovely comment dear 😃
Glad u liked it

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