AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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Shaila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

it was a nyc update he gave hee allowance n tnxx fr pm n hapiiieee newww year

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#502

Happy New Year

I was partying hard the is y I am all the way on the 3rd page

Aww such a nice update

So the nikaah happens

Asad mesmerize by his wife

Aww he wants to know y she dressed up

I was surprise to see nikaah

I thought it would have been court seeing it is a business deal

Love him tying her dori so intimate

So they will have to act to be the loving couple

To the world they t normal couple to themselves no

Aww he seems to would have been hurt if she said she think of ayaan

So they kissed Asad tht in s quiet a way to tach a lesson really

😆

But the arc after wiping his mouth but I know damn well he enjoyed it

So the allowance was given guess she has to send it to her money hungry sister

I bet Zoe will even sell her soul for money

Feeling bad for zoya she is fallen for Asad and she has to face the brunt of her sister

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#503

Was a little busy with packing and all so couldn't comment on previous few chapters.

But damn I loved every single chapters. The latest was the best one ofcourse. It's getting hotter, the atmosphere I mean ..lol

Asad is very near to the truth now... I can feel that. Well the story is coming to an end, he is supposed to.

I was awwing overy every little moment Asad and Zoya shared.

And Lily...she's precious. Mwahh.

Update soon Pia.

And Happy new year.

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MonnaS

@msingh27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#504

mind blowing update as always & brilliantly written...great way to end the year buddy...loved how intense the environment is getting between asya...not liking the taunts by asad though...am kinda a dreading the emotional torture...poor zoya..can't wait for asad to find out the truth soon. thanks for the pm. looking forward to next chapter...Happy New Year my dear

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#505

Oh god that was so so emotional..!
I felt bad for both of them..
Their kiss was urgent and so intense..!
Zoya and asad are in a mess..
God when will zoya tell him the truth..??
Awesome part..:)

Happy new year ..:)
Have a great one..:)

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Hi Pia

Happy New Year dear🥳

Have a wonderful 2016

It was really nice having met u in d past year

so tyt hugs dear 🤗

coming 2 updt

it was fantastic

Asya got married & she moved wid Lily

Asya's every scene shows Asad wants 2 have Zoya but his hatred 4 Zoe keeps him away & forces 2 hurt her wid his hurtful words

he was fighting his feelings but Zoya was hard 2 resist

but in all this only Zoya is getting punished 4 no fault of hers & it looks in future Asad will also look at her deceive but not d pain she's bearing

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kobeb

@kobeb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#507

He kissed her yay!! Awesome update continue soon pls and happy new year to u as well wish u all the best ! :)

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Hi Jas, good to hear from you dear. I am doing fine. Yes you are late and I was missing reading your feedback. Ha ha yes I'm updating every other day now...see how nice I am...giving you chance to catch up 😆 😉

Glad U have enjoyed the story so far
AsYa will get marry in the next chapter
I know you are right Zoya should've told him the truth but then how will the story continue 😆
Thoda angst, misunderstanding and longing Toh chahiye naa story ko aur interesting banane ke liye:)

Asya part with Lily is always so adorable 😳
They both adore her so much

Zoe sab mess up karne waali hai unke liye 😡

Next update tonight
Hope I don't have to wait to read your amazing feedback

A big hug back to you dear 🤗
And a Happy New Year 🥳

awe Pia not only u infact I was also missing ur story hehe...ur stories r must wid start of a new day.

Sachi mere liye gap dale Pia ke u were busy wid Christmas & all😆😉

lol yep that's a good point story kaise badti aage😆

I know right I loved Asya wid kids in ur previous stories 2 Asad always is a softy wid baby Lily

who toh we already know Zoe ko sab biadne toh aana hi hai

just want 2 know 1 thing Pia that now Asad is treating Zoya wid so much hatred thinking she's Zoe so will he do d same wid Zoe when d whole truth b out...Cuz really I want that 2 happen all these years Zoya bear d hurt due 2 her sister & even now I want Asad 2 take avenge of all her pain & tears & also bcuz Zoe can't get away everytime just like that...She has 2 pay atleast this time...even if its not in original story u have 2 add it plz

now see ya later

Enjoy u new year🤗

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Applef

@Applef

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Posted: 9 years ago

#509

Awesome update..

The nikaah is finally over..

I really wanted asad to know the truth before the wedding..

But..

Zoya is hurting so much..

So much of accusations, humiliation and embarrassment..

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Fatema

@DoremonLove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#510

Very well written update u have made changes in d original story so I really appreciate ur work
They finally get married wow lily is damn cute
That kiss 😳 I'm d only one who don't want the truth out I'm loving this love hate relationship btw asya
Asad wants her but doesn't want to want her 😆 poor guy
Eagerly waiting for next update continue soon
Happy new year